Another World: I Loaded the Career Panel

There is nothing wrong with the idea of ​​the book, but if you want to write a high-quality book or even write it well, I suggest you overhaul it. There is no future for this book at the moment, and there is no actual content even in the 200 chapters. There are too many poisonous points! Let me take stock of it for you 1: Indigenization of thinking The biggest difference between a time traveler and an indigenous person is in thinking, but they have been assimilated. So, is this time traveler identity just to explain the existence of your plug-in? This directly affects the upper limit, or even lowers the upper limit 2: Multi-career planning Normally speaking, the setting is okay, because the passive existence of the profession removes a big poisonous point to a certain extent. You should never ignore the only nanny profession in this world for fear of becoming a woman! The existence of combat animal husbandry is a self-contained system, especially in this dangerous world. Being able to recover yourself is equivalent to one more life. Before surviving, you first consider whether JJ can be saved. This is really explosive. If it is really dangerous, do you believe in yourself or your teammates? If your teammates are held back, you cannot wait to die 3: Mana consumption problem This cannot be said to be a poisonous point, it can only be said that the setting is incomplete. If the skills are not proficient, the actual combat significance of your mana consumption has been greatly reduced. You have to understand that other people do not have multiple professions, and the early skill consumption is so explosive. Do you really think that one skill can turn the tide? I am too lazy to talk about the rest for a while... You can read everything in the book world, but if you really want to write well, you should collect more opinions and organize your thoughts I have also written novels myself, and it is true that it is not just a matter of skill. Reality does not require logic, but writing a book without logic is really not possible

What follows are my personal thoughts and complaints about this book, as well as some poisonous points. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. 1 First of all, this book has more than 100 chapters, and there is no main line. This is the most fatal point. 2 The only exciting thing about this book so far is that you can get various professions, but I don't actually feel how powerful multiple professions are. 3 The character design of the protagonist is also very problematic. For example, when he got a dual career at the beginning, he was exposed because of other people's comments 🤔🤔🤔 Well, it's just very confusing. Will you die if someone says something to you? You must expose yourself. . . 4 It's still a matter of professions. People say that multiple professions are so powerful. However, you have so many combat-related professions such as fighter, warrior, swordsman, craftsman, thief, hunter, swordsman, and archer. You say that your strength is not as good as that of a person with a single profession. Just because someone else's skills are awesome, skills have a range, well, skills determine victory or defeat when the gap between the two sides is not big. Although some professions are more agile, they don't add strength? Then the combined strength of so many professions is not as good as the skills learned by others, so why do we need so many professions? 5 To summarize, this book has no outline or main plot. In terms of professional combat power, it only depends on the level of the adventurer. Moreover, the character design of anyone other than the protagonist is too simple. In terms of combat, except for the protagonist, everyone basically acts as a cheerleader. New book friends, please enter with caution.

The Japanese are really crazy. Except for Bone King, Shen Yong, Slime, and Shadow, the other protagonists of the isekai anime I have watched are persecuted every day and even lick dogs. Note, I'm talking about the episode I've watched, don't talk about my map cannon or anything like that.

Do you know what it means to swing a sword 100,000 times a day? Just over 80,000 seconds in a day

The most common quarrel is the premise of 100,000 times a day. They are all fighting for not enough time and the body can't bear it. Let's just say, doesn't the introduction say that there are multiple professions? You can't awaken other professions and then awaken this one? Do you have to be the first to awaken?

Go away, others can call you a waste, but you can't think of yourself as a waste. You're not lovable from the beginning, so why bother...😥

The pace is too slow, even for light novels. There are too many settings and it's boring. I feel like each article spends a lot of space writing about boring settings and skills. The character description is too cliché, what kind of ancient characters... Am I reading a light novel from ten years ago? The ones from ten years ago were more advanced than this. The Douban score is 1. I estimate that the final score may not be as good as the previous one.

I don't know how to complain. Starting from 104, I copied and pasted to add and change the plot. Moreover, the span from the Japanese adventure Western fantasy to the Xiuxian plus system was too big, and the plot was seriously fragmented. If you don't understand what the author is thinking, just change the book and cut it. Why do you use the shell to sell dog meat? Talking about whether to change the result or copy a bunch of previous plots, it feels like feeding Ollie to 😒 Goodbye

King of ideas, but the plot writing is shit

I have finished this book, and the last few chapters have nothing to do with this book, they are copied and pasted from other places.

I really don't want to curse, so I can't bear to post it once. The plot is messy and it gives me a headache. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it. It's the first time I find an excuse to say I don't have time. How many times can I be disgusted?

The career setting is quite interesting. But the protagonist needs to do tasks to awaken, and others don't. How can the protagonist call the thief obscene when he sees him? The setting of the awakening profession is interesting, but it has been a waste of time writing unattractive female characters. The author is not sure what makes him attractive. The female characters you wrote are not cute at all.

I have awakened so many professions, but I don't feel how strong the protagonist is. It takes several chapters to defeat a mob, and it's almost gone. Is it because the mobs are too strong? 😅

Forget about Rimanfeng, the writing is still rubbish.

What annoys me the most is this kind of novel written by treating the time-travelers as if they were aboriginals. It's so speechless when a modern person writes the same thing as aboriginals.

As soon as he woke up, he was left waiting, and then he was punished for the crime of beating people. It is indeed the world of Japanese comics, everything happens by coincidence.

Isn't the most exciting thing about all professions the passive skills of various professions in the early stage and the combination of skills starting in the mid-term, and then becoming all-around awesome in the later stage? There are no passive skills here? ? ?

Report it bit by bit. Don't tell the truth

What's the point of a protagonist like this who relies on being external to achieve external strength?

You still have the creativity, but just ask for the plot.

Is this a scam? They are all repeated chapters and I subscribed in bulk.

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Ercoin has fermented in the shithole, I hope it can be useful, I only read the first few chapters and it made me feel sick to my stomach.

Why did the plot change after Chapter 109? The content has changed! The West has become a fairy!

It's rubbish. What are the updated ones on the shelves? Xihuanbian Xiuxian. Report it and let us know.

Come again? ! NTM is interesting. Is perfect attendance so important?

Why say the same thing three times because it's important? So saying the same thing four times is very important? Say it once to yourself, once to passers-by, once to the redhead, and once to Luna How many more lies do you want to say? No, it seems that it is not important enough. Recruiting someone to write the same thing for the fifth deception can turn it into a national competition If it is not enough, recruiting someone to write the same thing for the sixth deception can turn it into a world competition So, recruiting someone to write the same thing for the seventh deception can turn it into a plane competition? You can be a little more conceited. You won't say that four deceptions are enough, right? ? ? You can be more sophisticated and your imagination can be bigger Recruit undead warriors, alien warriors, warriors who can attack from a distance, multi-professional warriors, warriors who can cultivate immortals, warriors who can control beasts, warriors with passive skills, and warriors with past lives You can also connect the Hongkai style of the chapters you posted wrongly before, (laughing) Think about it.

I only saw one thing that could be written repeatedly, and it was re-explained to me after the plot, 😮‍💨 gave up.

The author has some ideas, but the writing style is a bit lacking. There just aren't enough details. It's rather blunt, so you can take this book as such. Practice your skills. After all, things like writing skills are accumulated bit by bit.

What is written on the back? It's a big thing.