The Bulla Tribe Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

Nice idea. It's just that the writing style is a bit unclear. Already very good. At least it's not like others who changed the underlying logic of the setting.

The Earth chapter of the original work Swallowing the Stars is wonderfully written, but it is really not suitable as a starting point for fan fiction. After all, there are too few expandable parts, and the few useful resources have played a major role in Luo Feng's growth. If you don't seize Luo Feng's opportunity, there will be nothing to do. If you do, it will have a huge impact on the future, making it difficult to deduce. The biggest difficulty in the fanfic on Earth: the golden-horned beast. How to reasonably let Luo Feng seize the golden-horned beast when it cannot become a threat is undoubtedly a huge problem.

Seriously, if you want to show the evil nature of Zhi Ge's clone, you can describe his cruelty in battle, his joy in killing, his joy in drinking blood, his joy in destruction, his madness in dying with the enemy, cruelty to the enemy, and cruelty to himself, instead of just laughing like a fool every day. It's really stupid, and he calls himself a devil. With his current clown strength, can he hold up this title? Others call you a devil, but you are the devil. Those who claim to be are just mentally retarded. Originally, this clone could be taken in a close-up, instead of jumping up and down like a clown and laughing wildly like it is now. Does he have this strength? Does he have this ability? If you are capable, go to the alien battlefield and show it. If you are crazy, you must prove it with the blood of the enemy. If you can't defeat it, then self-destruct. After resurrection, come again. You don't care about the enemy's life, let alone your own.

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The author didn't even arrange the setting. He clearly mentioned Wei Wen in white at the beginning and gave all his desires to Wei Wen in black. He would maintain the mentality of a saint, but he could still fall in love at first sight? It's okay if you write Wei Wen in black and fall in love at first sight. It looks like a good drama, but I always feel that the whole story has been reversed.

Wei Wen, in white, fell in love with Tang Weiqing at first sight. He was so heart-thumping without any foreshadowing. It was so astringent 🙂 It doesn't make sense that you wrote a single female lead. The protagonist is so astringent. And the most important thing is that this conflicts with the most important setting of the Bura tribe in your whole article. Wei Wen in white, as a clone of the Bura tribe who abandons emotions and has the heart of a sage, will fall in love with an ordinary earthling at first sight? Are you awake🤔

Chuang taught the secret method of cloning to Hong and Lei Shen, and then after seeing the latest version, he didn't see it being taught to his own descendants. Is this the thinking of normal people?

According to the needs of the race, the special ability of the protagonist should be spread more widely, but it is a bit boring if you find it on the earth. The earth is a small springboard, and you can fall in love at first sight. To be honest, it is quite poisonous.

This setting also involves falling in love. On the one hand, the saint concentrates on cultivation and research The negative personality kills and indulges in indulgence. Tear your own settings

New books are updated every day. Author, don't you want results? Nowadays, new books from Qidian are generally updated twice a day. After they are put on the shelves, they will be updated occasionally, so that they can gain popularity.

Who told you that using bloodline medicine can be passed on to future generations?

After reading the recent chapters, I feel a little disappointed. There are long dialogues and the same words are repeated over and over again. The creativity is actually good, and it is considered to be average among the fans. However, I feel that the author is not in a good state recently. I hope to change it as soon as possible. It is better to lack than to overdo it. If it is too watery, it is easy to lose readers. There are many books of the same type. Readers may not come back after they leave. Good luck, author.

All I can say is that the creativity is good, but the writing skills need to be improved. There is too much nonsense in the later part, and it is very uncomfortable to read it over and over again. In fact, you don't need to explain too much. You can basically understand the structure of the original work after reading the swallowing fanfic. You don't need to explain too much. I hesitated for a long time... I didn't want to post it at first, but when I saw the creative points of this book, it was good. However, the text in the later part was too explanatory and failed to capture the readers' enjoyment. It was very uncomfortable to read. I hope I can work hard to revise it. In layman's terms 😅😓 means that the number of words is too much.

Even the designs of the two sons are similar to Luo Feng's two sons. I'm really speechless.

There shouldn't be emotional scenes. It's too awkward and the characters are distorted. I don't see the emotional scenes playing any positive role. They are all shortcomings. The impact on the characters alone is big enough.

I've always wanted to write half of the Bulla Clan's Swallowing Starry Sky. As long as you don't stretch your hips, I'll order it all.

A rubbish novel, rubbish among rubbish

The author's ideas for the opening are also good and the writing is okay. In the later stages, it became more and more complicated, and a lot of the content was from the original work. Is it interesting to write it here? Why are you reading a fan if you haven't read the original work? Just write less about the setting, and just write a rough outline. Everyone knows the three novels related to Swallowing the Starry Sky. Originally there were two novels, but recently Tomato released Swallowing Starry Sky 2. Everyone has read these novels. If you are too different from these novels, then there is nothing to say. The updates are getting slower and slower, and they are becoming more and more clumsy. I don't know how to read them.

The author is quite stubborn, no wonder his grades are too low

The author fell into the river! There's no end to the water and a lot of nonsense.

Why do I like to write about the beginning of the earth? The role of a female protagonist on earth is really not that big, and there is no role in the later stage.

The starting time is tight and the tasks are heavy, wasting time to study genes 🙂. Go to the martial arts headquarters to start with someone who is not very beautiful but has a good temperament and fall in love directly. Are you a love brain? There are countless people in the universe who are prettier than the Earthlings. In Devouring, marrying an Earthling can only be explained by feelings. Appearance cannot compete with talent, bloodline cannot compete with strength, power cannot compete, so why not choose a better one? Is it because of love brain?

The creativity of the Bra tribe is quite good. The author exposed it when he was weak. He clearly knew that the giant ax would travel backwards in time to view the earth, and two of them could not appear at the same time when he was on the earth. Moreover, according to the nature of urine in the original universe, the Bra tribe is considered a special life. The level of life is absolutely very high and it is impossible to reproduce at a high level. Although the author has changed the life level, he cannot reproduce when he is weak. Knowing the darkness that engulfs him, he still dares to reproduce. It can only be said that he is brainless. Isn't that just rushing to give it to others? They are still reproducing on the earth. I really hate that the earth is not as miserable as the original! Especially when I saw him and his wife casually discussing the Bula tribe and their two sons who randomly transformed into clones, I wished I could sterilize the protagonist. I suggest you go and see how the Lord of All Creation reproduced the Superman bloodline.

I would like to recommend my own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting with the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of the Prison Clan

The reader misunderstood the author! Who doesn't want to create a second design, and who doesn't want to create something new! Slightly new setting, some people say that the original work does not have it! If you set it a little bit new, some people will say it is a magic modification and disrespect the original work If you set it a little new, some people will say it If you set it a little new, some people will say it If you set it a little new, some people will say it It's not the author's level that's not good, it's you They are so venomous that it makes no sense Like me, "Swallowing the Starry Sky: Throwing Money into the Sea of ​​Cosmic" I just set it up and dropped Luo Feng Then I said no Luo Feng, turned around and left I re-edited the outline and changed it back Creating code words is written with hardship and tears

Bring the book "Swallowing the Starry Sky: The Era of Nirvana" to come and visit me. I will give it a thumbs up~ If it offends you, please delete it. If you like to watch the plot of Nirvana, you can watch it~

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

I can't stand it anymore, it's too watery. I keep repeating my mental thoughts over and over again for a little bit of things. I wrote three or four chapters of things that can be written clearly in one paragraph. Those watery words are still used many times. It's a waste of money.

"Pluto Devouring the Starry Sky" I would like to recommend my new book. I welcome your comments. I will work hard to write every chapter. Thank you.

I can only say that this is a barely readable novel among fans. There are no big problems with the logical narrative. The main setting is quite toxic and brainless, and the rest of it is really not good to watch.