Reincarnation Paradise: Epidemic Doctor

Let me discuss the following plot with you. After completing the hunter trial, the protagonist will awaken his talents in the Samsara Paradise and obtain 049 inheritance, mainly the assassination system and the summoning system. The second world will be the world of Resident Evil, a large semi-open derivative world that adjusts the intensity of the world according to different timelines. The third world will reach the original world of massacre. If you have any ideas, you can leave a message below this post or join my reader group. Thank you everyone!

I didn't expect that someone of my age could write so well. There are still some shortcomings in character description and fighting. My personal suggestion is to directly copy the original text of Samsara Paradise, because the novel Samsara has too many words. To be honest, even if you copy the fights there, I won't know that you are copying it. I believe readers would also like to see a fan whose writing style is very similar to the original work. Of course, there shouldn't be too much overlap in the plot, especially don't deliberately over-negotiate with Su Xiao, or even become good buddies. This is the most unacceptable thing among reincarnation fanfics by most readers, (because they have been scolded for this in stories like this before). Personally, I think it is best to be like Caesar in the original text, who can have beneficial interactions but will never become a life-or-death acquaintance. Closer to home, the description of fighting is a great point when you are just starting out. You can try to imitate those experienced writers. You can read the original text of Samsara and similar novels. I think you can copy 70% to 80% of it without anyone seeing it. When you can imitate it proficiently, you can try to read the fighting writing style of some martial arts novels, such as Gu Huo Niao, which deserves to be written, and The Heroine written by Guan Guan Gongzi. Wait a minute, the description of fighting is remarkable. Because fighting is the fastest way to transition the plot and it also makes readers feel that you are not skimping on the word count. Once the plot is over, write about daily equipment upgrades and treasure chests, etc., So that readers will not fall into aesthetic fatigue. In addition, when I watched Samsara Paradise in the past, the main pleasure was that I encountered the main tasks of these movies and comics. The protagonist of this book brings changes to the plots of these works, and then upgrades after returning, such as equipment attributes and so on. In fact, when I read it, I skipped it at a glance. Of course, this is also a clever trick for the number of words. In terms of plot, I personally think that we should choose those movies or anime with good reputations, such as Hell Song. This kind of anime is praised by everyone as being good, so that it will not cause dissatisfaction among some readers. In addition, try not to write anime about ethics or love, otherwise you will definitely be scolded. I personally do not recommend writing emotional texts for novice authors. I just saw the female character you wrote in Resident Evil saying that she would not live after seeing it all. I feel that these are unnecessary because it is really embarrassing to watch. When Mosquito writes these plot characters, he usually directly gives a setting, for example, a passerby is a guard of a certain kingdom, and then adds some physical description, and then indirectly reflects the character through the communication with Su Xiao. This way of writing is easier than directly describing it, and it is less likely to make readers upset. Finally, I wish the author can continue writing and gain some small pleasure in communicating with readers. By the way, I would like to introduce a world to you. I wonder if you have ever understood that there are some plots in Warhammer 40k that are very suitable for the protagonist of this book. If you really want to write it, it should be short and concise. The main reason is to trick some Hammer people into reading the book. 😁

The real world is poisonous, and you are very leisurely? Also joined the official. If you don't join them, they can't do anything to you. If you join them, you have to do whatever they want you to do, because you have entered into their rules. You can make up for it as much as you want, because you are a weakling. If I ask you to kneel, do you dare to stand? If you make someone unhappy, they will accuse you of any crime and slap you to death. Don't tell me that they are all good gentlemen. There are no good gentlemen in Samsara Paradise. And you are very free. If you are free, you have to find something to do in the real world and be taken care of by others.

Let me show you my future thoughts Ye Yi held an umbrella and looked at the white-haired girl in front of him. The cold rain fell on the girl, sliding down her delicate cheeks one by one, and all her thin clothes were wet. "Are you willing to come with me?" Ye Yi walked up and handed the umbrella to the girl who was lying on the ground. "If you agree, please sign your name on this contract." Ye Yi's voice was full of temptation, like the devil in the ninth level of purgatory who tempts people to sell their souls. Astalia, looking at the man wearing a crow mask in front of her, fell into confusion. Just a few days ago, a plague broke out in my country. The dead people stood up again and turned into bloodthirsty monsters. I originally came from a small noble family, and my father was a viscount. This morning, the knights led by my father went to a nearby village to eliminate the infected and never came back. Civil strife broke out among the refugees in the territory. They rushed into the castle and frantically snatched food and money. Mother took the remaining guards and began to suppress the riot, and asked the housekeeper to send her out of the secret passage. When everything was over, he returned to the territory again and saw a mess. The mother's body was hung on the gallows by the rioting refugees, with dead guards hanging on the cross beside her. My mother is dead and my father is missing. Thin raindrops fell on Astalia, and there was only deathly silence in his empty heart. At this time, a man in a black trench coat came from a distance.

Regarding the fans of "Reincarnation Paradise", I have an opinion: the protagonist is not necessarily stronger than Su Xiao, especially the original protagonist (it is best not to travel through time) Reason (personal opinion): 1. In the novel, Mosquito has reflected Su Xiao's strength (career, own talents, etc.) Through many comparisons 2. The world Su Xiao has experienced (Later period) Some are unique, and the intensity of those worlds is much higher than those of the same level. However, if a similar world is created by a fan, it does not feel consistent with the original work, and it is difficult to get the same rating as Su Xiao 3. The final ending of the original work will probably not be very tragic. As long as the protagonist reaches the strongest level (no need to transcend), he should be able to survive the final battle and change some bad endings. After the ending, common comrades may not necessarily hurt each other. Although they are all strong, there are hidden dangers, but Brother Xiao and the others are not bloodthirsty people. As long as they don't get sick, there is no problem in living until the end of their lives (you can commit suicide if you think you live too long) So, I don't necessarily feel stronger than Brother Xiao, it can even be much weaker The above is a family opinion, and I don't like to criticize lightly (I won't beg or complain)

I think the reason why Samsara Paradise is so popular is because Mosquito writes the original world well in the middle and later stages. The fan world in the early stage is really boring. I hope that the author can write interesting original worlds after the early stage.

I only have one request, don't make the story of the park infiltrated into a sieve by the original world like "Journey to the Paradise of Reincarnation". Originally, the comments were drawn to it, but it turned out to be the strange theme of the park, as well as the inexplicable conspiracy to plot the park property → the high-level existence of the derivative world → the Cthulhu system. This kind of strange setting came back.

It's a poisonous novel. If the real world is so poisonous, I might as well delete it. Maybe some people will still read it.

Simply... The original work doesn't even have so many surprises. You write a fan and do this, and the character of the protagonist is so weird. He is calm and yells at the same time. This talent is very good, but the content is not good.

I feel like the author didn't write down the definition of plague. Like in Resident Evil, the protagonist's operation is not like dealing with plague, but more like making evolution potion. Plague must spread on a large scale to make sense. I came in through the title because I wanted to see the protagonist spreading a contagious disease. In addition, Yi Ye's performance is not outstanding, and the author's character creation is still limited to ordinary people, and they can be turned into neutral evil. For example, the characteristics of 049 can be more prominent.

If the author really doesn't know much about plague and disease, he can imagine the Black Death in Europe in the Middle Ages and the epidemics in the previous two years. Plagues are basically like this. They can spread quickly on a large scale and cannot be cured by ordinary civilization. Diseases like the T virus are man-made diseases, such as the pollution and distortion of Western culture Cthulhu and the ancient gods. In the middle and later stages, with the protagonist's ability, if a disease is released into a world, even an entire civilization may not be able to cure it, and it can also develop to deeply pollute the core of the world. Like the ancient gods, it first pollutes the world, and then sucks the power of the world to grow. The protagonist's current ability is not so much a disease, but rather a poison.

Let's talk about the matter, there are a few points that I really want to complain about. First of all, there is the issue of the identity of the protagonist. In the second chapter, I guessed the dungeon level because I read the background introduction of the park... It is too reluctant. So far, I still don't know who the protagonist is: Is it the earth that has traveled to the worldview of Samsara Paradise? Still an aborigine but have seen Samsara Paradise? Of course, there is not much difference between these two points. The main reason is that I want to know where the protagonist learned the information about the paradise from the novel, rather than through this chapter... The author can mention that we are reading the novel from a god's perspective. We can know this by reading the author's later comments, but it will be very unsmooth to read! At least it looks so forced to me... Then there's the protagonist's character. From what I've seen so far, he's an orphan + a university medical student... Can he be said to be an ordinary person, right? Brother Xiao is definitely incomparable. After all, he is a killer without emotions (🐶), but we are just an ordinary person. Why can we directly open the Unparalleled Gauze Goblin as soon as we enter the dungeon? First of all, I have not read the Goblin Slayer manga (I have heard of it), which means that Goblins are really good... Why does the protagonist kill like a chicken... And without fear... Here we can actually focus on the character traits of the protagonist that are different from ordinary people (crazy criticism). There are several normal hunters 😏, because I have caught up with the latest chapter. The protagonist neither looks like a lunatic, nor does he look like a normal person, nor does he look like a doctor. It is a bit different (?) Secondly, the character communication in the Goblin dungeon is too bloated (´;;`). The communication with less important characters or characters with excessive plots does not need to be too long. If necessary, it can also be used to highlight the characteristics of the protagonist or the background of the dungeon. Hunters are in a hurry and will die if they cannot complete the task. How can you think about whether your daughter ate well tonight? I also thought that the protagonist could act like a ghost by relying on his talent. He could use Dihualiu to cheat some resources when buying poison. Finally, he could rely on his talent to kill all the goblins in a melee with hundreds of goblins. I didn't expect this close combat... In the early stage, our main focus in playing poison was the poor infection. There is always a way to solve it by relying on wind or water flow. The same is true for fighting snakes in the sewer. If the poison fails once, it will stop poisoning. Quantity will lead to qualitative change, and the monster will die if it is killed 😌. There is really no need to form a team and fight head-on! The crafting of weapons is also outrageous. If the protagonist thinks that the Plague Warlock style of play in the early stage is difficult, making a scalpel as the first piece of equipment is too much. When fighting the underworld snake, use a machete. The best equipment is a scalpel, which is... Of course, the scalpel appears after the death of the underworld snake, so the question is, why can't we pick up the mission after the equipment is built? After all, a few more attributes may determine the outcome. This gives the impression that the protagonist has time to brag with the supporting characters and does not have time to wait for a piece of equipment to be completed. It is a bit indifferent. Let's get back to the real battle! This is the most outrageous point. When I looked at the title and introduction, I thought it was the legendary road of the old coin in the paradise. I never thought it was the journey of an unparalleled assassin and a Breaking Bad warrior... Technique + Master (undead system?) + Summoning style + Assassination system, let's not talk about resource issues. We who play biotechnology can completely twist the body into germs + venom, and come and go without a trace. When someone cuts it, the body will disintegrate into countless germs flying around, and then leave other people's attacks. When the time comes, other newcomers will not have the ability to counterattack, and they will be fooled by the toxins, and their bodies will be covered with buffs. At this time, a small scalpel can't be bought, and it can't be bought, and it can't be cheated. I can seal the throat with one blood, and it's good for him and me. Isn't this great? The existence of War Scythe... Emmm I can only say that I still don't think there is a big way out because it is too complicated. Let's not talk about whether the author can write well. I may have lost my eyes before that time... Let's just say that Brother Xiao is just a pure sword at the beginning, and all the equipment depends on cutting... (Laughing) 🐶 And I feel that the protagonist talks too much, which is not bad. Let's just say it can be a little more serious. The dialogue between the characters does not advance the plot and is not very funny. This makes me feel that the author may be filling in the water (hehe) Then back to the real world... Emmm, in fact, I can write more stories about other employees or contractors in the park. After all, the reality is not interesting. Of course, the author has a good idea and plans to slap me in the face, so that would be even better. As far as the main story is concerned, there are a lot of minor flaws, but the main body is okay. From the current point of view, it is still a good fan fiction. I can only say that the future is promising and worth looking forward to.

These numbers expressing characters appear too densely, and they look like a running account. The number of characters is 🤫

I feel a little speechless. First of all, the novice trial world is Gesha, a standard Western fantasy RPG background world. Then the protagonist wants to buy poison, use his talents to improve his abilities, ask the blacksmith where to buy poison, and then go to the tavern to ask the bartender where to buy poison. After getting the information, he can go to the pharmacy to buy it. In the end, I didn't go to the pharmacy. Instead, I listened to an alcoholic and went to a remote alley to buy some and forcefully arranged knowledge skills. (Everyone in the pub said at the time that this drunkard liked to fool newcomers)

In fact, I feel that instead of writing this kind of summoning flow, it is better to refer to the protagonist's ability that will eventually evolve, the viral ability of the Virus King, and write the protagonist as the source of the virus. Passivity means being able to adapt to various viruses all the time. Very high priority. In this way, the protagonist's output and control capabilities are both available. Then the protagonist's active skills are dedicated to hiding, escaping, and recovering blood, which are life-saving skills. Every time we fight in a group fight, we drag the opponent to death.

I've been poisoned by the real world and I really can't hold it any longer.

I just really read a circle of comments yesterday and saw that many people said that the effect of the plague was not written. If it couldn't be done, I deleted the entire book and re-wrote it.

Added a few recently seen seedlings! I like them all, I hope they are less "toxic", thank you! PS: "The Lighthouse of the Void" and "The Overly Realistic Samsara Game" are not exactly Samsara Paradise fanfics Scarlet Samsara, Silver Moon Returns, I Will Become the Only Sun has been cut, and the Void Lighthouse is updated as frequently as a mosquito.

Today is the 16th day. Is he really a eunuch?

It's been a month and I'm still waiting for you. It's disgusting.

I'm in tears. It's been a month. Will there be any updates?

Why do you feel like books are almost being eaten to death? (Hesitation) Can seedlings be raised to death?

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It's November, haven't you updated yet? This is already a eunuch.

I'm very curious how the people in the reader group got the reader group to be suspended due to violation of regulations.

I just finished watching Black Clover. Since the protagonist's soul is immortal, why not go to the immortal stream? If he has an immortal body, wouldn't he be invincible?

If this was your first book, it would be really good, but you eunuch really can't forgive me 😡