My Dear Simp, Please Stay

Another idiot who ranks first, second, third and fourth in the dormitory.

I've read about 40 chapters so far, and I feel pretty good It's just a little too out-of-line and I can't stand it. After all, everyone has their own preferences, so it's suitable for big brothers who like to play tricks and tease And there's also some criticism. Although it's not that you have very few words, you really have too many adjectives, and you like to waste too much pen and ink to describe various things or characters Especially the names of the villains, I didn't remember them. Come on, I just remember all kinds of cool and awesome descriptions😂 Because of this, the story line is not pushed too much, but there are a lot more dispensable adjectives As for everything else, it is fine, only these two are the things that I personally feel are bad Of course, I am not an author, I can only give such suggestions full of personal intentions. If you disagree with me, please don't argue with me, just speak politely.

I would like to suggest to the author that the paragraphs should be divided into more detailed sections. It will always be one long paragraph after another, which is difficult to substitute.

I, Liu Xiaoxing, cannot possibly be a licker🐶! But the system gave him too much... I, Liu Xiaoxing, am committed to saving thousands of licks🐶! Do you know how hard it has been for me to pretend to lick for the past three years? I don't want to be licked anymore🐶! I don't allow any of my kind to be harmed! [Work information]: [Book title]: Licking friends, please stay [Author]: Ning Tan Weiqing [Tag]: city, daily, system, campus, funny, counter-intuitive Road [Status]: 43,000 words in series [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Author Introduction]: The author is a new author. Although his writing is not yet mature, his imagination is very good. I will seriously communicate with readers and listen to their opinions. In short, I will support newcomers more. [Brief Description of the Work]: The male protagonist was hit by a car and unlocked the "Strongest Dog Licking System". According to the requirements of the system, he should be a licker. At the same time, he should not make the woman fall in love with him. Until she finds a boyfriend under your offensive, the task is completed. What a strange mission, but in fact this book is not about licks, it is about saving licks. The second task is to save a fallen girl who was licked by the CPU (by mistake), and there will be thousands of licks to save later. [Reason for recommendation]: ★Anti-routine system, anti-routine lick🐶. This is a system designed to deceive the protagonist. This is a system that does not play cards according to routines. This is a system that is free from low-level fun! Weird tasks, strange skills, all kinds of strange rewards... The protagonist kept complaining about the cheating system, repeatedly jumping on the edge of mental collapse. ★The opening leaves readers with suspense. It directly reveals the system and the results of licking, and skips the vulgar plot of how to lick. It makes people look forward to how the system will issue tasks later, which aroused my desire to read. ★The language is humorous and interesting. The funny scene of jumping into a river over a misunderstanding for love is laughable. The author is very good at creating funny scenes. I started laughing before the plot even started. ★Cool and dense. Although the plot of showing off and being slapped in the face is cliché, everyone loves to see it. It is worth mentioning that the attack power is very strong, and it will never be a coward. ★Some plots allude to reality and are thought-provoking. There were some popular events some time ago, such as mental control masters and other events that aroused people's empathy. ★The writing is still a bit immature, but in some aspects it is really strong. The author's description of food is really picturesque and made me hungry. And the wonderful dialogue at the end is definitely worth clicking on and learning about it. For a quarrelsome loser like me, it is simply my Internet mouthpiece! Recommended Group: 💕Netizens who are hurt by love; 💞Readers who like a system that does not follow routines; 💓Readers who like to read funny campus romance novels. [Picture]: A cute little licking 🐶 (ok, you read that right, this is actually a cat) Added a licking 🐶 video that I have collected for a long time p. S.1. Due to force majeure, I can only use 🐶 to replace that word, everyone just understands. p. S.2. Please like and comment🌹🌹. If I continue to read, I will post my latest reading experience in the comment area ~ You are also welcome to leave your reading experience in this post ~ to give fair reference to future friends Exam~ #New book trial reading#

I read Chapter 7-8 of Pua Scumbag, but didn't read the rest. Calling the police will solve the problem instantly, and the guy will still go to jail.

Damn, it feels so good to read. I was so tired from working the night shift that I almost fell asleep, but as soon as I read this novel, I became more energetic as I read it. I hope the writing will get better and better.

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you, just one more episode.

I didn't read it, I just looked at the character cards. I wasn't interested in seeing the male protagonist being a super rich second generation, taller than the male protagonist, etc. Excellent authors make their male counterparts fat or short, with ordinary looks, to avoid the association of cuckoldry.

Brother, why don't you consider cutting it? You don't plan to rely on the number of words to get published, do you? It's not necessary

Reading the introduction reminds me of a book, If Water Flows East, does any book friend tell me what this book is like?