
A Man in Douluo Dalu Writes a Diary, and the Girls Are Acting Strange
人在斗罗写日记,她们不对劲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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670Chapters
5Votes
6.7kRecs
90.9kFans
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I won't say anything else, but can the author of this harem novel not know how to write? You persuaded me to quit at the beginning, you are the one who accepts Ah Yin and Xiao Wu, so why is Xiao Wu looking for trouble for yourself by having a relationship with Wuhundian or Bibi Dong who killed his mother? The original book didn't say that Bibi Dong was the one who killed him. The legend of the God Realm is clear. If you want to accept both of them, isn't this going to cause trouble for yourself? And you were right to pursue Ah Yin and you want to take him back? Isn't it right that you can't write? All for survival?
It's best to travel around the world with this system. There's no need to write around plot characters. Besides, wouldn't traveling with this system be the best choice?
What's more suitable to keep a diary than recording the world's scenery and delicious food?
Have you noticed that today's diary novels always reveal that they are time travellers at the beginning, and then call so-and-so's wife in the diary, and the protagonist's IQ is worrying. I never doubt whether the heroines are different and have diaries, but they are still embarrassed to write diaries.
When writing a diary, why don't you write about it in a normal way? You have to expose time travel, call me wife, and smell like a loser. Why don't you just write about the psychological activities of a normal person who traveled through time in the past? But you have to write it so deliberately, as if you have never seen a woman before.
I'm so nice to Dugu Bo, but not so nice to your wife.
He was too kind to Dugu Bo, and the system was so evil that the protagonist didn't even suspect it, and the protagonist didn't say anything when he knew that the system was acting behind the protagonist's back. I didn't notice that the protagonist was smart. As for the test, if he was really smart, he wouldn't find excuses for himself to talk about parallel worlds. . . And it's only women who have problems, while men are normal. I don't know how I kept watching it before. It's really boring to watch now. I feel like the main character is a bit like a virgin.
The protagonist is like a manipulated clown!
I have now read Chapter 56, and most of it is watery. I just have to endure it, and it is still acceptable. Now I have to go to Shrek, and with the plot, I can accept it, and I can tolerate it! But why does the system of the protagonist make me feel intelligent? It treats the protagonist as a pet, and the protagonist is just like a clown! Everything is clearly arranged! And the protagonist has no brain at all. With so many abnormalities, the protagonist never thought that someone could see the diary? And there can't be diary-type novels in the protagonist's original world, right?
A children's play house series, with a draggy plot, low word count, and a weak protagonist, all three elements are present. It doesn't feel good, and it doesn't have the taste of ancient novels. It's neither good nor bad. The whole book felt very depressing and I couldn't put it down. After more than 300 chapters, there were still a lot of life-threatening dangers. It was like a child playing house all day long, and the rhythm was not very good. But it doesn't matter, just continue to focus on the protagonist. Anyway, the follow-up is still like this, so don't watch it. If I continue to suppress it and don't write something that everyone wants to read, I don't know if the author can last until the end of the book. Anyway, I felt that I had fully subscribed to this book when I wrote the review, but I didn't think it was worth it at all. It was just too depressing. It's really not exciting for children to play house and pretend to be pigs and noobs... But it can be regarded as the biggest poisonous point of diary flow or voice flow. After all, if a short plot can fool you twice, who doesn't love the author...
The protagonist never killed Tang San because he was worried about the divine world? Or is the author afraid that he will not know how to write after killing him?
Ning Rongrong is not a genius. In fact, Ning Rongrong doesn't need to think about it at all. She can reach level 79 at most without evolving her martial soul. What's the use of leveling up so quickly? The upper limit is there anyway, and are other people really that talented? We don't know whether Oscar is innately full of soul power. Even if he is, his level up rate is not faster than Ning Rongrong, so it is the same. Ma Hongjun has the disadvantage of evil fire, and the upper limit is not high. If Dai Mubai doesn't practice hard, the soul saint will be the best. He may not be able to reach Contra. Zhu Zhuqing estimates that he can reach Contra, mainly because he practices hard, but are these people really better than Ning Rongrong? Flanders in the original novel was just a fan of Ning Rongrong. Ning Rongrong didn't have a martial soul to evolve, so the upper limit was there. If he didn't practice hard, what would happen if he wasn't happy?