The Reborn Villain

I came from the comment section of your promotion. I thought I would give it a look once I saw it. It might be good. However, I didn't want to read it as soon as I saw the introduction. In the spirit of saying that I have the right to evaluate only after reading it, I finished reading the three golden chapters. First of all, let me praise you. The writing is really good and the plot is smooth. Then there is the problem. First of all, the title of the book is really not good. It has the beauty of the novels my mother read. I opened the reading software that comes with my mobile phone, and all the recommended books are titles like yours. Nowadays, writing book titles is either simple but does not use the protagonist himself as the name, such as "Lord of Mysteries", "King of Beast Control", "Embers of the Deep"; or something more superficial such as "I May Be a Fake Ultraman" and "Surviving the Fourth Natural Disaster". By the way, from your description, this should be considered time travel. Why do you want to write about rebirth? Positioning bias can also lead to reader loss. Then your first chapter is too short. It is best to write 2,000 words per chapter, otherwise people who read it will feel that it is gone all at once. It is outrageous that your 42 chapters only have 50,000 words. On average, one chapter is just over 1k. Moreover, there is a saying in writing novels called "Three Golden Chapters", which means to use the exciting content of the first three chapters to attract readers. In fact, when we read a book, we read the "Golden Three Chapters" first. If we think it is good, we will read it again. If the tenth chapter is good, we will save it. If the free part is good, we will consider paying. New authors should be careful not to write too arrogantly. Many people become arrogant and then abandon their work when readers can't understand it. The third one is the subject matter. Although people have always watched the city, the power of the city is really too good. Moreover, there are too many system articles, and many people have begun to get tired of it. Your kind of urban system article is tired of being played by others. If you want to come out, you must have your own new routine. Of course, there are also gains and losses. The main advantage of system writing is that it can make up for your loopholes. The system can use a more mechanical way to fix the problems that you have no time to fix. Finally, let's talk about character description. To be honest, when I saw your description of the expression on the beautiful woman's face at the beginning, I wanted to quit. I have seen at least three urban novels where the protagonists get close to women and show the expression you describe. This is the result of my lack of reading. Well, I only thought of this much when it came to the topic. To be honest, your writing style is really good. This is actually an advantage that many newcomers don't have. The plot doesn't feel too abrupt, and your basic skills are actually pretty good. Your main problem is that it's too old, has nothing new, and doesn't quite fit in with the current novel trend. Well, think about it for yourself. I am telling you so much just because I am short of books. Try to rely on yourself to formulate your writing style. Authors who will be swayed by readers will not be able to write good things.

I am the author's trumpet: I sincerely appreciate the opinions of the two brothers. Thank you, it really helps me a lot! I will work hard to adjust my studies. Although I am stupid and ordinary, writing novels is a dream of mine, and I still want to stick to it. Even if I sometimes really think about giving up when I can't squeeze out a word for a long time, I still get through it. Thanks again to the two brothers, and to every lovely reader.

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To be honest, this book is quite interesting. It can be regarded as one of the more relaxed and beautiful villain-style novels. The writing style is fresh and sometimes humorous. The plot is also well described. It is worth reading.

I am the author's trumpet: I would like to thank the two brothers for their guiding opinions despite their busy schedules, which touched me deeply. I know that I am just an ordinary person. I may not be very good at writing novels. I may always be just a street writer. Oh no, I may not even be qualified to write novels. But I think I will slowly work hard to learn to become a good writer.

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I saw your ad, hello 🤝. Goodbye🙂

Dear handsome guys and beauties, don't miss it if you pass by, take a look first, you will get something different! This is not a retro article! This is not a retro article! This is not a retro article! (Say important things three times) This book is also known as "This villain is a bit crooked", "Heroes, don't run away, I'm really not a villain", "The grudges and grudges between the villain classmate and the poisonous mouth system" Don't be dissuaded by the title and introduction of the book that just popped into my head. Due to time constraints at the moment, It is made and cannot be changed (actually it was changed once before, but it was inexplicably canceled) Although the subject matter of this book is still the same old villain novel, it has many innovations in terms of content and style. I would like to call it a funny villain novel. The main plot is for the protagonist to pick up the heroine, but there are many different things. If you think my writing is not good or the plot is rubbish after reading it, then I agree and you can leave it out. But if you haven't read it yet and are persuaded by the title and introduction of my book, I would be really unwilling to do so! Thank you for listening to me. There is only so much I want to say, and I have done what I should do. The rest is all up to God. No more talking, the author has to hurry up and start coding...

As a new author who can go to Sanjiang, let me say a few words... 1. Urban superpowers are a dead end, so newcomers should be careful 2. One chapter requires 2,000 words, and 4,000 words are required every day. This is the most basic requirement 3. It is recommended to submit it internally, not directly I will not comment on the content of your book.

Why do I not want to read it after seeing the third page? The description of rebirth and time travel is so inexplicable. It feels very strange. May I ask if the author is a man or a woman?

Although, after reading four chapters, I found the following problems: 1. It is recommended to use good punctuation marks, clear paragraphs, and a sense of hierarchy, so that people will feel comfortable reading. 2. The subject matter is average, the plot is old-fashioned, and there is no new idea. Moreover, the number of words in each chapter is too few. It is recommended that one chapter be more than 2,000 words. 3. The opening chapter must be well written, but the introduction is not concise enough and unattractive. After a glance, I really have no feeling. 4. It's almost 50,000 words and I haven't signed a contract yet. I suggest you write it again. Qidian's current contract standards are very high. If you haven't signed a contract at 20,000 words, you can cut it short. 5. It is recommended that internal investment be better, best wishes!

I have seen a few of your type on Douyin 😏

The kaomoji are quite cute, the plot is a bit old-fashioned, and it has a beautiful mixture of old and new.

To be honest, I feel that I have gone a little off track (๑--๑) as I write it. It doesn't feel like a villain article anymore, but more like an everyday article ( •́ .̫ •̀ )

I want to say sorry to everyone. I failed to sign the contract, so this book will be aborted, (╥╥). I wrote too badly and let you down. I am really sorry. I may open a new book in a while

See you all in the future 🥺