Small Farmers in the Mountains

In space farming stories, the most important thing to avoid is being too perverted. You can adjust the time at will, which is too exaggerated. If it is a leisure farming story, I don't think there is any need to speed up time. Just improving and optimizing the varieties is enough. For example, fruit trees can be harvested one month ahead of the real world. This is enough for your development, and the protagonist will not lose his goal.

The book is very good. As long as there are no super relatives, neighbors, or gangsters, this book will be half the battle.

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Boss, you are a master of farming articles. You should write more farming articles, instead of looking for a house and a wife to write a lot...

Well, I came to see you develop rural orchards, not to see you fall in love and travel. I understand that you write about daily life in the orchard, but why do you write so many chapters about daily life in travel? I will not subscribe to this part

Do you guys have any similar stories about space farming? Don't be too clever. The plot is reasonable. A complete version would be better.

After reading it, Chapter 67 is coming up again. I can't even see where it is. Self-media, even if you go out and pretend to be cool, the novels written by self-media are all rubbish novels for me.

You have given the space too many functional settings that are not necessary at all. Is your book about farming in the mountains, or about exploring and becoming the richest man in the world? The space for farming is too big, and if there are too many instant functions, it will be out of balance with the real world. In reality, development cannot be so fast. Once you have the first pot of gold, one spiritual liquid is basically enough for development. Of course you have to explore, mine and develop space everywhere, and have fun as you break out of the earth. Otherwise, how can you balance the space with so many functions and the real world? Do you really think that everyone around you is a fool? So I suggest you take a good look at where your book is headed. After all, the readers of these two kinds of literature must be different.

I think I can use my skills in landscape design to plan my own house, and at the same time shoot videos online, and be a guardian of the countryside You can use space to transform various strange plants, including but not limited to shapes (all kinds of strange landscape trees), multiple fruits in one tree, and strengthening the plants themselves (high-yielding food crops, etc.)

Make a dog house out of red sandalwood. You can guess it later without thinking. Someone comes and wants to buy it, and then slaps him in the face.

A box made of rippled golden nanmu

How many chapters have it been since the orchard has not been started yet? It is scattered here and there, and there are still many unreasonable things that you have to forcefully explain. So why are you so active in paying taxes? Either it's all reasonable, or it's that all the parallel worlds are very different, and the protagonist is a bit of a nouveau riche. Although he relies on space to make his fortune, he still dares to be so high-profile if he has space?

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Those who have leisure time are all busy in the end.

Each chapter contains too much popular science. Are you trying to make up for the word count?

If you don't want to write this book, why don't you write it? It's uncomfortable for you to write, and it's uncomfortable for the readers to read it.

The atmosphere of life is very strong, which makes people feel relaxed and refreshed after reading it. The sense of immersion is simply invincible. It is a rare good book and the author has the appearance of a great god!

I've only read fifty or sixty chapters, and so far I feel it's too complicated. Everything is written in it. We can't walk in a figure eight shape when we walk. There's a bit of everything here and there. Some things should be omitted just omit them.

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You can still update it now! The protagonist used to be a landscape architect, and he hopes to use the orchard, build a new house, etc., To beautify it. It's hard for a family to see such a big orchard, especially during the fruit ripening period. You can also share your life at Bilibili

To be honest, you are not suitable for writing about emotions. I was so embarrassed that I had to dig out the three bedrooms and one living room.

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The writing is very good! Promotion is not good!