The End of the World Is Coming, I Awaken the Pangu Holy Card!

Let me see a few of them from Douyin.

Is this your first time writing a book? You've only started charging for a few chapters. You won't be popular if you do this.

Let's talk about the poisonous points 1. When the apocalypse comes, can you still watch the live broadcast if the water and power are cut off? 2. Since we know the source of card production, the official should find out as soon as possible after the incident. You can write nothing and find out. In this case, it can be regarded as a foreshadowing, rather than a bug like this. 3. You underestimate the official strength. Referring to the early stage of Shengxu, the information channels, resources and combat power possessed by the official are not comparable to that of an individual. If you form an organization yourself to compete with others, isn't that just playing tricks? What the official wrote is really embarrassing. Awakening superpowers will turn you into a traitor, right? 4. Did the male protagonist forget how he died in his last life when he exposed his strength like this? 5. The female protagonist fights monsters, and the assistant is standing there, right? 😅 Even if the official sends some people to fight in the group, it won't be so poisonous. Analyze the data and send someone to get first-hand information. You can tell just by watching the live broadcast 6. If you form an organization at the beginning of the apocalypse, what benefits can you give to your subordinates? You have to use the top-level resources yourself, but the official resources can provide ordinary resources. How dare you, a big house, to compete with air-raid shelters for resources? Can you have some brains? The most vicious part can be changed to this: the official sends a team of people to help the female protagonist (and also collect data samples). When they are about to win, the corpse king starts the second phase.

I suggest you add a few more free chapters, otherwise it will be a bit of a trap.

I suggest you condense it, the chapter is too short.

Chapter 25 is charged, I'm drunk

Chapter 12, satellite live broadcast, there is still sound? Are you kidding me? I can't stand it after reading Chapter 12, it's too toxic and illogical.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good. If you keep writing, it has the potential to become popular.

The author will update quickly, 100 updates a day

The holy cards revealed in the live broadcast earlier caused collective amnesia, right?😥😥😥

I don't want a heroine 😥😥😥

In the introduction, Zhu Jiuyin can be beaten into Eclipse Jiuyin, and Wubi can't be that far wrong. When writing mythology, you have to understand it well. You can even get the name wrong. Of course, if you want to say that this is your own second creation of a mythical character, then pretend I didn't say it 😅

In the face of strong strength, those capitals are nothing.

What chapter is this, and you're already charging? 😂This fire was started by someone else

The protagonist looks like a nouveau riche. The apocalypse is coming. The beginning is so important. If you don't go out to fight monsters and upgrade quickly, you will just stay at home and eat barbecue.

I seem to have read a book with a similar plot, but the other one was about tattoos

Thank you Shennong for preventing me from being poisoned

Reminds me of that joke, what should I do if the spiritual energy does not come that day after selling the house?

Unexpectedly, there is no help in the country, so first go to Xiaoli to help. As for the rebirth and return, the way the previous life was written, there was no protagonist in the previous life, so do you still have to think about how to do it in the small life? The protagonist takes action twice in total in the country. He ignores the large area of ​​land monsters and goes to save people on small days. It really ruins the outlook on life