LOL: I Can't Stand the Stalling. It's Too Much.

The creativity is actually okay, but maybe the author doesn't know much about how to write Qidian novels, which makes it look uncomfortable. 1. There are always a lot of ellipses thrown in for no reason. 2. Repeat the paragraph about collecting emotions every time. 3. The transition is always two or three words followed by an ellipsis, which creates the impression of sparse text. 4. The dialogue always jumps around, without a fixed format? As for the plot, to be honest, the chapters about interacting with the female anchor are too scattered. It is always a small thing to fill in a few dialogues and turn it into a chapter, which makes people feel like you are off topic. And the interaction with the female counterpart is not only frequent but also close. Then there is the issue of jumping from rng to tiankeng omg. Nowadays, people are no longer so pursuing the all-China class setting, so they don't need to care too much. Moreover, the game play in the game and in life is not too detailed. For example, the changes in the game screen are too pale, and the description of the movements of the body and limbs is too sparse.

When I saw Sister Zhou advance to the tournament, I felt like I could watch it without thinking. Otherwise, even if I haven't played LoL for several years, I would feel that the description of the game is too abstract and outrageous. For example, if I remember correctly, the light beam is a straight line of light. It is outrageous to say that it can be farther when placed diagonally.

Those Zhou is the author of the female protagonist haha ​​I am going to die laughing

Zhou Shuyi can delete it. She is living with Piji Wan. What does she like? She likes a raki. It's disgusting.

As long as you are a brother of the rng club, you must come to help the factory

No, buddy, you use the exclamation mark as a period.

When it comes to writing books, male videos are not like before. Just write as many female protagonists as you like and you will be popular. Nowadays, everyone likes single female protagonists or no female protagonists.

Let me ask you all, I always thought that those who felt physical discomfort and couldn't get over it after watching Sister Zhou's face transplant were normal people. Am I in the minority? Otherwise, why would so many authors write about Sister Zhou? . . Are they all the same as Le Ye, do they have special tastes?🙂

After reading the first game I wrote, the author's level is at least real money 👍, and it slipped away.

I went to OMG for an all-Chinese class, so I suggested that I just pick up the next book. To be honest, I didn't read it when I went to OMG. I was quite interested in reading it, but it's a pity.

It is actually possible to write a bad RNG, but the content is simply a mess. They were all written about female anchors, so forget it, but after joining OMG, going from a team with a bad contract to another team with the origin of a bad contract is simply unbelievable.

I can still understand that you were Sister Zhou at the beginning, and then you were Mozi and Xiran. Why are you writing a professional article and having affairs with these female anchors every day? If you can't write, don't write.

Unfortunately, with so much foreshadowing, I managed to turn him into a fool, and ended up being divided into two teams with the protagonist. Originally this was a bit of a nuisance for me, but I can still watch it. As a result, the protagonist was arranged to go to OMG. I personally didn't know it, but after being mentioned by a friend, I thought that the protagonist and Able were separated, and I didn't want to watch it for a moment 😭.

To be honest, I don't understand why this is on the bestseller list?

It's going to be a bad week, let me see who among you who write about e-sports 🙂

Omg? ? Big brother, Sika is still a professional player now

Genius author, from RNG to OMG, from the new contract team to the first generation contract team, you are really a genius

It's funny enough to know that RNG is a contract team and tried every means to escape, but ended up joining the first-generation contract team OMG. Is the author embarrassed? Hahaha

The author doesn't understand anything. Go to omg for s7? The key is to work so hard to get out of the rng contract trap. Good guy, the rng contract is learned from omg. You are really outrageous. There are too many plots in the key live broadcast and the female anchor. I am rushing to get up. How many years have I not seen a woman? League articles are mainly about competitions and operational details. These are the key points. You can make jokes during live broadcasts, but just make adjustments. This book ends the moment you join OMG.

I rarely open posts, the writing is very good, come on, sister Zhou, can there be less plot? The main thing is that sister Zhou has been badly written, and I feel tired from watching it.

Rubbish book, always written about Zhou Shuyi, disgusting

Goodbye, buddy, having a stable job is the most important thing. Ibuprofen is floating around next door. When I didn't resign, I updated it twice a day. After resigning, I found reasons to take leave every day.

Too Poisonous Studio Hydrology

The writing of this emotional scene is so fucked up. The man who traveled back in time is a noob in love. And the heroine is also in her 20s and she acts like a fucking innocent little girl. I'm fucking convinced. I'm speechless.

The male protagonist is so greasy that he can cook. . . .

I've read Chapter 34. There are only a few sentences in the game's plot, and there are already three supporting female characters, all disguised as e-sports novels and having a love affair.

Additional refinement

To be honest, this book is quite good. Many people who have better grades than you are not as good as you. However, this book has a fatal flaw: the content of the competition is too elliptical and abstract. You can refer to more novels of the same type. People can win 5 chapters in a game. Your words brought us past the group stage. My personal favorite part is the early live broadcast, the whole life and the love part. The likes in the character column also show that the emotional drama of this book is relatively popular. Actually, I am not interested in the competition part at all. There are no details or ups and downs in the writing, and it will not affect me even if I skip it. To sum up, in addition to the specific competition content, it can be said to be quite excellent, and the author's ideas are also good. Although it is a bit bad to join OMG, this type of article will basically not find many readers if it does not find star players to attract traffic. I suggest that the author should write the content of the game in detail next time, and then join a team with a lot of traffic. Not to mention the most popular ones, you can at least write down the player IDs so that most viewers can recognize them. You can make an OMG... No comments.

I thank you. Shennong died of serious illness.

To be honest, before it was put on the shelves, it was okay. The plot was relatively smooth and the logic was okay. What will I write about you after it is put on the shelves? There are typos everywhere, and the plot is confusing. I am writing a game BP. There are no fights or details in the BP and I think it is well written. Gao Chao, who is a little self-righteous, just repeats it several times to affirm it. I made you throw up