My Whole Family Cultivated Immortality Without Telling Me

After reading it, I felt it was okay. If the pace of the plot can be controlled to be slower in the future, it will be a good book. I hope the author can cut down on the troubles and write according to his own ideas.

Chapter 126, there are some remarkable points, but some of them are really obvious, and there are some transitions. Pang Nu may be playing a key role in the show. But every time I see her buffing up like a middle-aged girl, I want to slap her. She looks like a brainless and invincible protagonist. The above is purely personal opinion. Let's see it here first, I wish you all a happy reading.

Is this thing really a time traveler? If you can't cultivate immortality, you still look down on martial arts. You have no brains at all. Is martial arts not better than cultivating immortality in the later stage? Invincible to all laws, the body is immortal

The writing feels a bit nondescript. I feel like the author originally wanted to write a story about the main character having a strong background, great talent, and contrasting with cultivating immortality (that's what I came here for). As a result, after reading such an old chapter, it was not as enjoyable as a refreshing novel. The protagonist's parents were too bad, and the entire world of immortality seemed to be a little bad. The world of officialdom, the world of cultivating immortals, and the world of physical cultivation are too confusing. It looks awkward, but there are too few cultivators who want to see the world of immortality, and those who want to see the officialdom have so many messy things. The protagonist is not strong. From a God's perspective, he has been playing some tricks, but when he encounters something slightly bigger, he suddenly has an epiphany. The author decides what he wants to write, whether it is a fun article or a daily article. Either one is good, but if you mix the two together, it will be garbage.

Let me comment. The protagonist has an unpleasant personality. He despises physical training and always wants to become an immortal. He has been shouting about becoming an immortal every day for the past sixteen years. In fact, it's just a blowjob. To put it bluntly, I've been lying flat for sixteen years. I don't have the brains to hit people in front of other people's homes. I've never been beaten, right? Others don't dare to comment when they walk by, but the protagonist just talks about it, right?

It's not good to watch. From the moment the Overlord breaks the formation, everyone is happy. But when Taoist Pang and the Immortals begin, they start to fight wits and courage inexplicably. It's very uncomfortable and embarrassing to watch. It's not at all like a daily novel or a cultivator who is happy. Before it was released, the plot was about having a happy chat with Liu Gaosheng and others. It was really atmospheric. But when the number of people increased, the group portraits became less three-dimensional, and the plot was inexplicably delayed. Sorry, the first hundred chapters were very good, but later I sent them and I don't recommend them. I felt like a different person.

I've read Chapter 130 and overall it's pretty good. It is this Taoist Pang who makes me so embarrassed that I have to read another book every time I see her in a scene! They don't even talk about basic logic, and they forcefully round it up! I'll see if it stays the same in the future and I'll consider changing books.

The protagonist has no brains, and it's an orthodox novel written ten years ago.

I feel like the main character only talks about it and doesn't watch it anymore. It's annoying to watch. Don't say anything about looking back. I can't stand it now. Why should I look back?

I don't have any brains. If you read too much, you will really feel sick. I slipped away. The author can listen to it, but he can't. I hope you write better and better.

It's so fake. Your family runs the world of emotional cultivation. The son of an ancestor of one sect is an elder of another sect.

Some book friends said that some parts of the previous article are a little fluent. Please explain, it is produced in the form of complaints. The subject character appears in the last two sentences. You will know when you read it. You can read it a little slower. Motoko has also slightly modified the previous article, which is a little redundant, but it is more fluent. Thank you for your opinions.

I really couldn't understand a lot of the plot, and the author didn't give a rough explanation, and the writing was so confusing that I was even more confused. I have to spend a long time to understand the good words by myself. The article only speaks half of the words, and many times I don't know what the author wants to express. In terms of plot, it actually fell apart a bit in the later stages. You say your parents are so awesome, why do they act like retarded people? In fact, it's not just a quick read to make it easy to read and understand. I don't have the time to read more. It's not like memorizing the text. I hope the author will improve it in the future. We can't read any more.

Why does it seem so difficult? It's weird, I can't always distinguish the characters' images and names. A mess.

Creatively, it's good, and the start is okay, but what next? Apart from the writing, I can only say that the following plot is not bad at all. It is better to be simple and crude, and everyone except the protagonist knows his family background. It is easier to unfold and attract readers, and it does not have the sense of separation and dissonance like now. The more I read, the more awkward it becomes. I just read chapter 23 and I can't stand it anymore 😥

Fellow Daoist Pang is a poisonous point, mainly because it is too abrupt. This cognitive ability does not match her identity. The appearance time has dropped a bit, so she can make up for it slowly. But why are these two birds? I personally find it uncomfortable to read. The current two poisonous points in this book should be Fellow Daoist Pang and the two birds. Maybe the two birds will be useful later? ? ? But I really want to make people complain┐('~`;)┌

As for this book, the story theme is okay. But, how can I put it, it feels too watery. I don't know if the author deliberately made up the word count or if he couldn't grasp the unfolding of the story. Too much of the same type of content, and too much content that doesn't make sense to advance the story. Just like the current story, the reason is that Huo Xiu ran to Chu Han to save the emperor. After the protagonist found out, he ran to help save people. After the results came, I went about my daily life and had all kinds of wanderings. How many words are there? Huo Xiu was basically never mentioned.

Can this introduction mean that I am going to lead a billionaire to become a billionaire?

This guy with the surname Pang is so unpleasant. It makes me so embarrassed.

This is written by AI. It's very strange and seems very difficult. If I give it a perfect score of 10, I can only get 3 or 4 points.

The writing is smooth, concise and interesting. ( ' - ' * )

Please give me more details. I don't want the three comments on the book to affect the original reading. If you know the plot, go to the comment area and read it yourself. There are exactly three essences.

For this book, I would like to give you two monthly passes to encourage you.

If you are sick, take a good rest, as long as you don't cut again 😡

Add more refinement! ! !

Are you not stable recently? I am preparing for the competition. I will come back to watch after the competition. Cheers, author

Have a good rest, take care of yourself and take care of yourself and your family

It seems that it will not be updated. I will give you a monthly pass to say goodbye decently. If it is updated, you can remind me.

If the author has any situation, please tell me publicly, but this is done quietly, and it is too abrupt. . .

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]