Secretly Developing a Small World

After reading six chapters, when a group is violated, there seems to be no powerful organization that organizes hunting to reduce the risk of living. I feel that everyone else is just a passerby. There are sects here, strong martial arts, and families. Monsters are dangerous, but their value cannot be denied. The most basic meat can be bought and sold, and furs can also be sold. Some precious parts are even more valuable. There are also mountains and seas to eat. Being able to survive monsters shows that there is a complete ecological food chain, which means it has great development value. Herbal medicines, monsters, and minerals all have regional characteristics. For example, wild animals such as silly roe deer and ginseng in the Northeast. Hami melons and snow-capped cordyceps in the Northwest. The economic background described by the author is too simple. The historical background only reveals the prototype of the sect. The description of the neighbors is also a description of tool people. There is no brief indication of their lifestyle, whether they are professional hunters or other ways of making a living. From an economic point of view, the description of the relationship between expenditure and income is very vague; I recommend a water-text method. Each key person or organizational force can be well described from the structural system to the economic system to ideology: simply put, it is a pool that drains water and takes in water at the same time. Individuals or forces who take out less water and take in more water deserve to be awesome. To summarize the author's first six chapters: this place is very primitive, the humanities are close to tribal ideology, and trade is close to non-existent.

As for these zombies, they don't even need any close-range artillery, rocket launchers, or intercontinental missiles for thermal weapons. They can sweep them away with just a gun with 7.62 Bullets... Do you understand the weakness of carbon-based life forms in the face of modern military? Go and learn more about the Gulf War and see how Iraq, a land power, was reduced to a wasteland by the United States.

Your settings are incomplete. You have hot weapons and are still afraid of zombies? This world of technology is really bad, and the protagonist has not known what he is doing for so many years.

I went there and immediately told them to leave when I saw zombies. I was hunting in the forest just now, and now there are zombies. The virus only infects people but not animals.

Why do Chinese authors always emphasize the language communication barrier with other worlds when writing books? If you look at European and American works, no matter which world you are in, they all speak English. Speechless, are Chinese authors inferior to others? The whole universe, the whole prehistoric world, all small worlds on all planes speak Mandarin. What can happen? Could it be that the novels written by Chinese authors are not meant for Chinese people to read?

Did you sell the outline to the studio? The writing is okay at the beginning, but boring at the end.

It's baffling to see, your framework is not complete, it makes me confused.

In fact, I don't see how awesome the protagonist is.

The zombies should be zombies with the speed of World War of the Zombies, or mutated zombies like Resident Evil, or monsters like Sweet Home. Slow zombies have too little attack power.

Zombies are not strong, but zombie viruses are. Speechless, the first wave of airborne infection, let's see at what age you can enter the central nervous system. Can that kind of person's body resist viral infection? Then there is an infection in the army. If there is a sudden infection among soldiers, the army will definitely rescue their companions as soon as possible and rescue them physically. Can you tell me what the probability of infection is. It was explained that the leaders of the first wave were infected. Due to the infection, the army was not fully organized and the number of soldiers was reduced sharply. It was difficult to join together on a large scale. After all, it was almost impossible for the infantry to join up with other soldiers on their own. And the communication ability is gone.

⊙⊙My head hurts when I see a person's name, Shui Wen is not that cool!

It's a pity that it's a panel stream, but it's a pity that the subject matter

The virus is not that strong. It can kill many people, but it cannot wipe out the species, especially if there are 8 billion people.

Isn't anyone going to complain about Shenjun?

I'm tired of waiting for updates, so I move on to: The Unreliable Sword Immortal

The author might as well just change his base to the Jin family. I have repeatedly seen that the Jin family base is not the original Jinjia base.

Please collect and pay attention to it. In the world of cultivating immortals in "Infinite Immortal Ship", I work part-time as a great scientist! (Immortality + Science) Why are there always some people who like to ride on other people's necks to do evil, as if they are teaching the world as an example that this is how a person's life should be spent! The time traveler Lu Yuantong originally only wanted to cultivate immortality in peace and stability and asked, but the world is dark and people's hearts are not ancient, which constantly disturbs his peace. He couldn't bear it anymore and could only save the whole world! "I master science!" "I own the Great Luo Mothership!" "Whoever disobeys will be killed first as a courtesy!"