Dou Po: This Alchemist Is Too Fierce

You are so angry, little author, why do you only update twice a day 🔪

This is a brain storage place. You can just kill some time with the little white text. If you have any objections, you can bring the original text with me and I will correct it. Before reading, you can store your brain here 🙂

There are only two female protagonists in Battle Through the Sky that cannot be let go, Qing Lin and Little Doctor, both of them are unencumbered and alone, and their personalities are dependent on each other for life and death. Other heroines have families or sects.

Fuck, I saw the opening scene and it's Burning Jue again. You already have a system and you still practice Burning Jue. It's really outrageous. Did the author not know how to write the Strange Fire after leaving the main storyline of Dou Po?

So far the writing is good, there are some poisonous points, but not many. The protagonist's character feels like a child, and anyone can step on it. The main thing is how to deal with the burning of the protagonist? How to deal with strange fire? Since you want to have a good relationship with anti-inflammatory drugs. Take this out, I don't believe he won't do anything to the protagonist.

The most poisonous thing is that after the identity of the protagonist was revealed after the alchemist competition, one Dou Emperor (Jia Xingtian), one Dou Emperor (Furuhe), and several Dou King attacked the protagonist. The protagonist had two Dou Zong and three Dou Emperor, but they only used Haipodong (Dou Huang 2-star), Amethyst Wing Lion King (Dou Huang 5-star), and the protagonist was severely beaten, and almost got caught

Yun Yun is not worthy of being a heroine. There are a lot of incompetent women like this in the mainland.

New topic, Tiezi 🚪, I will take Medusa and Ebi to Zhongzhou in the future to learn some fighting skills with corresponding attribute points 😍 Xiao Xiao reveals the following thoughts... 1. Medusa will not be a tool in the Yan League like the original work, but will go to Zhongzhou with the protagonist's group, continue to become stronger, and have new powers. 2. Haibodong will go to Zhongzhou to play in the peak competition. Do you have a picture of Zhongzhou feeling refreshed, stepping on the ice dragon, and using the black ice dragon to fly~ 3. The Amethyst Winged Lion King will join the group. We still need a new name. Can you give us some suggestions 🙂

Please come up with some awesome self-created fighting skills. You guys, I don't have enough brains to come up with it.

Three-pointed two-edged knife, example picture, picture from the Internet, infringement and deletion

Speechless, really zz, no, I love the queen so much. Look at the clown with one eye.

The picture provided by my friend, does it look good? If it looks good, I will put it up.

The back looks like a piece of shit, brothers, don't read it.

For me, I'm really speechless😓. After working on it for a long time, it's still a harem story. Two or three female protagonists are acceptable to me, but if you want to make more than four, I'm sorry, but I'm withdrawing because I've read too many harem stories and stallion stories, and I feel they're a bit toxic.

The writing was pretty good when I didn't meet Medusa, but it got a little bit toxic later on when I got married. After all, I didn't get along well before. After getting married, it became a bit difficult to save her two or three times.

Let's reply together 1. There are currently two female protagonists, Medusa and Yun Yun. Due to the small number of characters, the feedback is not good. Which female character will be accepted in the future has not yet been decided. You can leave a message. 2. The system is not abnormal, the upgrade flow is relaxed and funny 3. The writing is refreshing, the pace is not very fast in my opinion, and I am afraid it will collapse 4. The writing is simple, just for fun, there is no need to get angry and spray hard. If you think it is too poisonous, just delete the book.

Dear friends, please read 😭😭😭