Lord Golden Spike: Farming Is Impossible

I am also writing a lord novel, a different story, everyone is welcome to review it. In addition, I think Lord Golden Spike's writing is pretty good 🤤

If the introduction is well written, you have to do this. Many people who open up wasteland and farm are completely illogical. All kinds of inventions come out when you open and close your mouth. Farming can be started in a year and a half. If farming is really ancient, there will be nothing accumulated in just a few decades. It is amazing to be able to break even in the first ten years.

I have seen so many lord novels and they all lack aggressiveness. Let's take a look at the war lord novels. I hope that the protagonist's personal force value is higher, blood is sacrificed to the blood god, and the head is sacrificed to the skull throne.

I don't understand. If it's well written, why do you have to write about another time traveler? It's very damaging to the perception. Can this character be deleted?

Originally, I was tired of reading about Western medieval hegemony stories with a little bit of red and pretentiousness from time to time. But when I looked at the comments, I was told that there was a second time traveler. . .

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Yes, everyone else thought so, so everyone starved to death

The story is well written and makes people want to read it. It's just that some things are so written that people are speechless, 1. All the leaders who appear are young people, 2. All the lords seem to have no brains, 3. The strategies that appear are too ridiculous. 4. No military knowledge at all .5. I take many things for granted.

I've read twenty chapters for now, and there's nothing serious about it, I just like to make jokes. . . Then the biggest problem is that I haven't seen the riding and slashing content at all? It's all about the tug-of-war between the nobles in the kingdom. I don't even know what I read in chapter 20. The most exciting part of the novel is Goldfinger. As a result, there are less than fifty words of description in chapter 20. The whole process is about the tug-of-war between the two factions of the kingdom's nobles, as well as the description of the psychological activities of the nobility's sidekicks. Hey... I can still read it for the time being. I just hope that the author will stop ink on the rest of the plot and just cut it off if something happens. This is a refreshing plot.

Be cautious when entering the pit. Goldfinger is fake. Apart from an introduction at the beginning, there are no scenes after that. The extraordinary power is also fake. It is at the level of Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which is seriously inconsistent with the title.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to abandon it. The kingdom of God is a big poison. I endured it and continued to order. Later, another Haig came to usurp the throne. It was too witty. It was like child's play. I really had no desire to order anymore. That's it, I ran away.

Unsurprisingly, this book has to be abandoned. I found that the author was a jerk when writing about conspiracies. I don't even know why the second prince is so arrogant? And what's the use of writing the character Zhu Baqi? No matter what level he is, the eldest prince is assassinated and everyone is left standing still. I would laugh to death. If I wanted Zhu Baqi to help the protagonist in the later stage, I would also laugh to death. If the eldest prince doesn't help the protagonist, why does the protagonist have such a big face? I don't know what Zhu Baqi thought about cutting the northern Tibetans when the king was very capable of fighting in the north and the kingdom was still divided. But Zhu Yunwen must have a lot to say. Also, the fact that Li Shimin can do this kind of behavior of killing his brother and forcing him into the palace does not mean that the second prince, who is also the second oldest, can do it. In ancient China, only the emperor's family had this problem, but in the Middle Ages, every noble family may encounter such a problem. In this case, if the second prince can still be the king, I can only say hahahaha. If the author writes these political struggles to speed up the protagonist to become the king, don't think about it. The logic makes no sense at all. Not to mention that the generalissimo still has a few years to live. It is difficult for Zhu Baqi to implement many of the protagonist's ideas. A person who has undergone a complete emperor's education and has a thorough understanding can see through many problems. Not to mention that Zhu Baqi is on the protagonist's side. There is no reason at all. One is just a fellow countryman and the other is a benefactor. Normal people know how to choose. Rebellion and following you are two different things. Whether the protagonist wants to rebel against the northern nobles will be a problem with the protagonist. After all, there is no gain at all.

The Western Middle Ages were serfdom. You feel like you are a free citizen. . Serfs were the private property of the lord. It seems that there is no taxation, but the lord is responsible for his survival.

After reading the first volume of Riots, I couldn't help but want to say that the author didn't understand a problem. Reading novels is basically from the perspective of the protagonist. If you set the protagonist to suppress the peasant uprising, aren't you asking for trouble? As the protagonist, I felt like I had eaten a fly. Those who take part in the uprising are like those who persuade you to surrender. Will you be grateful? Your plot design is outrageous. If you don't please both sides, don't blame others for scolding you. If you don't scold the protagonist, you have a problem with your thinking.

The first part of this novel was okay, but later on I felt it was getting more and more off-topic. Author, the content of your novel is getting further and further away from the introduction. In this case, it gives people the feeling of putting the cart before the horse and completely getting the main line wrong. Your novel is a Lord of War novel, and this is the highlight.

The old butler took seven pages to report a piece of news to Mr. Andy. Four kinds of content in the middle of the night, four pages of thinking, two and a half pages of explanation...

It's too idealistic, and it feels like it's trying to be red, but it doesn't go into depth at all.

If a time traveler wants to change the world or compete with a dragon to be the protagonist, he needs a strong gold finger. Otherwise, you are just fooling people into thinking they are fools. I am talking about ordinary people, the kind of people who are like monsters. Such people cannot write online articles. . .

Many lord novels, when writing about wars, put everyone on the battlefield. In addition to soldiers, there are also civilians recruited on the battlefield (civilians account for the majority). Ten thousand soldiers is almost a big battle. It is not rigorous how many people the lord brings out every time. Civilian husbands go directly to the battlefield without participating. The main tasks of civilian husbands are to transport food, serve soldiers, build barracks, etc. Authors of lord-type novels seem to be afraid that there will not be enough people. 30,000 To 100,000 is almost the level of a national war. If the death rate of soldiers in a national war is too high, almost a large territory will be almost They can't defend it, so it's normal for thousands of people to fight in a war. From time to time, during a war, Lavan will put soldiers on the battlefield and add civilian husbands. Either end the war quickly, or else after fighting for a long time, there will be no young people in the territory to produce, and the territory will be seriously damaged (don't ask why women don't plant crops). Tian, because at that time, most people were doing handicrafts and taking care of the family. Women at that time were generally unable to do heavy work (due to lack of nutrition). Although you could boast about the number of your own people in the war, it would feel unreal if so many people were involved. Personal opinion, I don't take it seriously.

It seems to be the same whether or not this hanger is installed.

Author, are you updating this novel? This sudden deception is so uncomfortable. The book has already been written to this point. It will be uncomfortable if I don't finish reading the ending.

Author, please stop being so desperate. You really can't open a new book. When you open a new lord story, don't let the protagonist rely solely on others when fighting. Only relying on your own aura will be scary. Cultivate the protagonist to be like Li Shimin, who is both a commander and a king.

But there are many typos. I really like reading mainstream novels, and I hope the author will work harder.

The author has lost contact😅😅😅😅😅😅

Author, have you ever considered writing a Game of Thrones novel?

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It's already next year for the author. When will your second new book be released?