Bone Lord

This book originally looked okay, but the biggest problem is that there are too many typos, which greatly affects the perception. In some places, even the word order is inexplicable. Is this written by AI?

Although I understand it, I still want to say something, you might as well write about the undead clan. Although it is terrible, it is much better than what you wrote. You are very awkward, and everyone is used to it, so let's go.

The poison was administered at the beginning, and all the bones were broken, but there was still life.

They are all skeletons, but they are still alive. They are not allowed to follow the path of the undead. It is not confidential.

I feel like the author's logic is - look at these zombies, although they look corrupt, they are actually classified as a branch of living things - the key is that they are infected by a virus. Your skeleton and flesh are gone, but the virus is not infected yet? Bone marrow infection?

Most of the people writing about Bones these days don't think of themselves as undead, and I don't even know why.

I guess what the author wants to write about is that the Skeleton Clan, not the Undead Clan, wants to create a new race, like the fallen angels

I thought he was a Kenshi skeleton

I saw 23 pictures, well, they are not my cup of tea! ! It's just so-so. The main reason is that the protagonist has no adventurous spirit. It gives people the impression that he is just taking one step at a time. As a result, he can't do it well at each step. He is sitting on a treasure mountain and can't perform it. He is really worried about some things and things that are not far away and have not happened yet. It is called far-sighted 🤭. There are good things such as picture signatures and that bone mountain, which let you know what coquettishness is in minutes. Although there are restrictions, but with such good things in hand, without cunning operation, you are not worthy of being a human being.

I thought it was the pile of iron racks in the swordsman.

Can the Skeleton Clan do some innovation?

Well, looking at the introduction, I thought it was a skeletal construct growth system... Similar to Transformers, but I didn't understand it.

Since its lifespan has been determined, it can only be increased by foreign wars or natural resources. With such a small population, why do you still go to war? Look, you have written from the beginning to now. How many people died in the territory, but there was no trace of them. Is this reasonable? When the Demon Bone Men first appeared, I thought you were treating the Demon Bone Men as low-level warriors and civilians, and treating the pure-blood Bone Men as research units such as mages. Even if the later beast-bone men are added, it is still acceptable. But later on, the writing became more and more confusing. If you can't grasp it, just make the race simpler. I won't talk about the number of races, it was mentioned in the previous article. The various events happened too compactly, and there was no time for racial development at all. Everyone who reads Lord's articles likes farming.

The writing was very popular, and it was a failure because of a bad-mouthed dog by my side.

I am still suitable to watch Orphans from the Starting Point

The number of ethnic groups is really too small. I always feel that you often change versions, so what system changes again and again, is it interesting? Let's talk about system balance again and reduce the number of your races. He can't develop this kind of thing. Without a complete development structure, it relies on the Holy Tree to produce a few people every five days. The bone tree was very good at the beginning. Why did it change later? Population growth should be geometric. Otherwise, with just the few trees we have now, there won't be enough for tens of thousands of people even if you live until you die. Now the bone tree is completely used for dropping materials. In a big battle, if more people die, you won't be able to make up for it. I originally thought you were going to create an ecosystem, but now the more you write, the more petty you become. The aura of the bone tree can originally imbue many species, but you have to turn it into a complete bone. If you don't want it to be so easy, you can increase the death rate. There are too many conspiracy theories in the middle. You are just a small lord king with more than 300 people now. Can you please stop worrying about such long-term things? As soon as a few dozen people can build a country, I want to complain. Is the country built like this? A territory does not even have the most basic civilian labor. I really want to ask how you transport those supplies? Even if the ancient trees can drop materials, you have no one to collect them.

It looks good. Please support it, but it will take me a long time to read it and put it on the shelves.

I read about twenty of them and found them quite interesting. The main character was a bit um and a little startled. Maybe it's because I don't feel pain when I stand and talk as a reader. I still hope that the main character can be written more calmly.

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I thought it was the Skeleton Man from Kenshi