Showbiz: My Stepmother's Daughter Is Actually the Future Queen of Pop

This complaint was written before the author overhauled it, so please read the details before talking about it. In addition, the author said that most of the poisonous points have been revised. The content of this article contains spoilers for all readers' complaints. Be careful: The biggest problem with this book is Su Qingtong. At first, I guess the author wanted to follow the example of "The Stepmother's Troublemaker Is My Ex-Girlfriend" to write two protagonists, but it turned out to be too difficult (later) It can be seen from the above that Su basically has no sense of existence. It is obvious that the author also discovered the problem and gave up the writing method of the two protagonists). At the same time, Su's setting is simply full of poisonous points. He should not have set up soul penetration from the beginning, and then broke up when the male protagonist did not make any mistakes (this is simply unacceptable in a male channel. The pure love God of War will let the author know a hundred ways of death for a minotaur). Let's talk about other characters. There is nothing wrong with borrowing real characters. After all, the author can simply apply the settings directly. First of all, Father Lin's operation back then was too cowardly. How could a woman's cheating and giving her a little money turn her into a man who committed domestic violence? ? ? Even if it is to create confrontation and conflict, there can be other ways. In the end, both parties can choose to divorce peacefully because of money, but there is no need to create confrontation in this way. There are also some other sentence problems. You can read the book reviews and many book friends have pointed them out. It has some of the most unacceptable mistakes in male videos. I hope that there will be no more pornographic stories later, such as Su filming kissing scenes with other men.

A brief introduction: The male protagonist and the female protagonist were a couple who were in first love, but the female protagonist was taken away from her and awakened the system, and then dumped the male protagonist. Now the author wants the two to fall in love. Let's not talk about the issue of whether to dump them or not. Your girlfriend was taken away from her. Why the hell is this not revenge for killing his wife?

The male protagonist's mother abandoned her family when she was 3 years old for 20 years, and they were still in high school.

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I finished following the latest chapter today. To be honest, I feel much better than before, but there are still things worth complaining about. First, I hope the author can reduce the specific content of the movie to be made. After all, everyone has seen these relatively popular movies and everyone knows the specific content. This is also one of the main reasons for being trolled. Second, there is something wrong with some of the previous chapter titles. That is, the title of this chapter has nothing to do with the content of this chapter or it only has a little relationship at the end, but this title is closely related to the next chapter. It may also be that the author has broken it out of context. Third, IMHO, the name of the book doesn't seem to match the specific content of the book (in fact, I wanted to complain about this before, but this problem is not the biggest problem, so I didn't complain), and it seems that there are not many male videos that can continue to read after seeing this name. ps: Don't let Su or Huang film kissing scenes with others or be suspected of being raped (even if the hero arrives in time), otherwise no one will be able to save this book.

I have always been frustrated. When I read Chapters 6 and 7, I felt that there were too many contradictions. It started with the ex-girlfriend looking down on the male protagonist before entering the house, and then beheading the male protagonist when she came ashore. Then there is the arrogance of the leading online novel platform that makes the protagonist work for nothing. If the protagonist doesn't do it, it will destroy the protagonist. Then the protagonist's mother betrayed and cheated on him, causing his father to bear the infamy and falsely accused him. He had seen the protagonist for more than ten years, and he had lived in the days of being a master, and now he has come back and used the same trick to frame him, eating steamed buns with human blood, and so on. So many frustrations and contradictions are revealed in less than 10 chapters.

To avoid lightning, the girlfriend is taken away from her at the beginning. The person who takes the body first kills the lover and breaks up with the male protagonist directly. I guess the author may be a woman so she substituted the heroine, but in this male-driven novel, it is extremely toxic.

To summarize: the author fits my stereotype of rappers very well

Let me tell you my personal opinion. The first part was good, but the later parts got worse. The character of the heroine is very dislikeable. She has awakened a system and treats herself as a character. She is complacent with a small achievement. Although the book does not say it clearly, you can still feel her disdain for the male protagonist through the screen. She feels that the male protagonist is no longer worthy of herself as the sweet girl of heaven. She even let the agent speak rudely to him... What kind of virtue? ! It is recommended that the author make changes🙂🙂

Leave a post, as long as the author's outline is not too big, this book will definitely be popular, the cadence is so well arranged, please update it ❤️