Douluo: Gou Zai Shrek Silently Upgrades

The writing is getting worse and worse. Except for the opportunity to grab Huo Gua, there is no time traveler at all. He is no longer stubborn but cowardly. The second competition is in the realm of Titled Douluo (not to mention suppressing the Soul King, the difference in realm is huge) to bully the small. Let Huo Gua go around the world to ask for his favor and create enemies for himself. It's hard to understand, so I just stopped reading.

Author, your writing is very good, but it's a bit short to divide it into two pages this day 😁😁

It is true that any tree that is beautiful in the forest will be destroyed by the wind. But the main character is a bit too cowardly.

The most unsafe one is Shrek. Those with poor grades will be fired. Xuanzi, who has good grades, leads the team and delivers meat to the Holy Spirit Cult while spreading fire to Di Tianlai. What do you think is the use of a time traveler going to Shrek Academy? Only those with connections can enter Shrek. Those with no background can't get recommended places. Do you still need to enter Shrek Academy if you have connections? Aren't the elders in the family soul masters? Who knows one's own martial arts better than the family that has been passed down for tens of thousands of years? . .

I don't quite understand the reason why you gave the fairy grass to Ma Xiaotao. You said you like Zhang Lexuan, so forget it. After all, she is the next generation of cabinet minister. For giving fairy grass so easily, the first thing the senior management thought of was definitely not gratitude, but questions, where did you come from? Don't forget that after Huo Yuhao's second martial soul was exposed, Mu En stared at him for a long time. Overall, this is a bad move.

I just copied the plot of the original work and didn't dare to change it at all. It was okay when the protagonist was weak in the beginning, but in the end the protagonist can fight Ultimate Douluo and still does that. Then you don't dare to do anything, then you practice hammering? The most disgusting thing is that you hid it for so long. In order to save Shrek in the beast tide, you were exposed for so long. What did you do after you hid it for so long, and even the auspicious beasts sat back and watched her give it to her for nothing, just to be Shrek's dog in the end? Isn't it disgusting?

I don't know why, but the more I read, the less I can stand it, especially the one about the master. I really want to prove it to Master, Douluo Dalu II has a real example. When the protagonist goes to be an exchange student, isn't there a ruthless man who forges scrap metal into swords? Does scrap iron count as scrap martial soul? The ruthless man forged scrap metal into a sword. At the time I saw this paragraph, I didn't think anything of it, but now that I think about it, it's genius. An absolute genius.

Generally speaking, the first part is okay, but the later ones related to requests for leave and thesis are too blunt and inconsistent. The author wanted to make up a reason, but couldn't think of a good reason, so in the end he could only use a poor excuse. Even if it's a bad excuse, it's embarrassing if it's so smooth. At the same time, there's still a round of supporting characters trying to outwit it. It is comparable to Thai Cool Spicy.

The author has written about the Semir stuff in the last few chapters. Wouldn't giving Ma Xiao the grass jelly make him self-destruct? Moreover, Ma Xiaotao has no friendship with the protagonist. In the latest chapter, he actually has to stand up for the outer door. There's nothing wrong with that, right?

This book can also be ranked second. I don't know how many copies the author bought.

I really like that the current tone is "developing" silently. There are many books that explicitly say that they should be stubborn, but the result is more high-profile than anyone else. For example, some Douluo fans only provoke Titled Douluo at the first or second level, and some want to kill Tang San as soon as they come. Even if Tang San is not that good, he is a god after all, and the protagonist is not even a first level. This is very outrageous. Although the protagonist will definitely not die, it just makes people feel unreasonably awkward and can't stand it. I prefer those who know current affairs, what realm or what cards they have to provoke what kind of enemies. If you want to write about Tang San, you have to write about what conflict happened, what kind of interests the protagonist was harmed in the article, and you have to kill him just because he is unhappy. This is somewhat inconsistent with the three views.

No soul tools are allowed to be used in the Shrek competition. The rules you wrote are the rules for competitions across the continent.

It was hard to see the heroine of this book, the senior sister, but I was so happy after reading the book review😿

It feels like there is nothing interesting about it, and the protagonist is licking and begging Licking Zhang Lexuan, The protagonist in Chapter 8 is obsessed with it, his eyes are dull, the corners of his mouth are slightly open, and he has forgotten his words The gangster protagonist of what era, I have only seen this description on a supporting role Still stupid, 12 years old and 27, reported as 12 years old and 22, I remember there were three or four three-rings in the same period, 27 is nothing Then there is a second spirit that has absorbed a ten-year spirit ring, but this spirit looks down on other spirit rings There is also a 190,000-year-old blue dragon ice lin🐴 that is sacrificed to the protagonist. The protagonist turns around and tells Zhang Lexuan that he has a 100,000-year spirit ring And the ten-year white ring of the protagonist can disguise the age of the spirit ring, but the protagonist still tells Zhang that he has a 100,000-year spirit ring and spirit bone. If I remember correctly, Zhang Lexuan is still a Beibei child bride. She directly dealt with the broken heart and slowed down the upgrade. How does the protagonist plan to deal with it in the later stage? I also plan to go to Binghuo to fish for seven or eight fairy grasses, saying that he won't care if it has no impact on Tang Shenwang's plan... I can only say that I am just following the group, there is no plot conflict

The characters in the back are completely separated, you are both obsessed and brainless, and the protagonist is completely schizophrenic, what he says, thinks, and does are completely different.

I said before that I should keep it secret, but I stayed with Shrek. Starting from Chapter 32, I directly confessed everything about myself and started to lick Shrek. I can give up from here. I really don't understand this operation.

All these opportunities have escalated, but I haven't done anything. I feel like I haven't participated in any events or conflicts, and my relationship has made no progress. What does this look like? Why not just write about the protagonist being Ultimate Douluo ten years later and then become a god and fight Tang San. . .

You can tell the plot just by reading the title. He is so strong yet still so cowardly. Even if you like Senior Sister, you don't have to stay at Shrek. What can he give you?

Gou is a hairy person. He looks like a gou, but in fact he is a lot of wasters. He is identified as a coward and a coward. He is just wearing Gou's skin, and the logic becomes more and more confusing as he goes on. Gou is a skill, and not everyone can do it. While hiding his own strength, ability, and talent, and oblivious to everyone, he has the ability to continuously accumulate trump cards and quietly obtain them. Sufficient resources to practice, this is Gou, who appears mediocre in front of others, but has endless trump cards behind others, is ruthless and ruthless, and eradicates the roots. Even if he targets Tang Shenwang, he is not targeting Tang Shenwang because of any position, hatred, or suppression. The reason should be that Tang San's character is too dangerous, and he may target me, so he should strike early to gain strength, that's all.

The writing gets worse and worse. Really, Zhang Lexuan seems to be trying to outwit her. The protagonist is constantly scratching the surface, and the emotional line is written like a piece of shit.

The title of the book is selling dog meat with sheep's head! The first one is to have a self-sufficient internal circulation (gold finger); the second one is to be mediocre, just acquaintances, and not to be in the limelight; the third one is to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, not to expose one's strength and opportunities to anyone, and once exposed The fourth rule is to be absolutely rational, not to get up early if there is no profit, not to fall in love with someone easily and inexplicably, not to be easily heart-to-heart, and to keep secrets; the fifth rule is to not be a money-splitting boy.

New title: Nascent Soul Monk Zhang Lexuan; Evaluation: Just a piece of cake

Zhang Lexuan seems to have been forced to swear by Wuhun. You are sure that she can be the heroine, but Wuhun may not want her.

Brothers, brothers, Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction is now recommended! Douluo: Peerless Light: The protagonist's martial spirit soul light + Dou Er's classic cheating, Shrek's route, the author's own setting collapses in the middle and late stages, and the heroine transforms into Huo Yuhao. Peerless Glory of the Sun and Moon: Protagonist Wuhun Golden Eyes + Zihuang Fu Long (I forgot.) Disguise as a liar, Shrek's route, Ye Guyi appears and starts to get poisonous, basically every chapter is a pile driver in the late period, ending hastily, the heroine Ning Tian, Ye Guyi, Wang Qiu'er, Orange (Zhang Lexuan, Meng Hongchen, Wei Na are mentioned at the end) Douluo: Peerless Angel Glory: the protagonist Seraphim Wuhun + Death Spider God, the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect takes the Shrek route. It has just been updated to the end of the first competition. The poisonous point is the huge water in the competition, and the heroine is currently Ning Tian. Douluo: Dragon Ming Jiuxiao: The protagonist is the King of Martial Arts, Glory Kai, the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect follows the Shrek route, and the heroine is an auspicious beast. There is nothing too poisonous about it. Douluo: The Peerless Eye of the Sky Yuhao: Soul Penetrating Huo Gua, everyone knows the plot, but the author's own setting is quite good, reasonable and can be watched. The heroine Ma Xiaotao, Wang Donger, Zhu Lu, Zhang Lexuan, and Ning Tian are promising. The Douluo Man in the Peerless Fake God: The protagonist has infinite sword skills, follows the sun and moon school, has a good setting, and the writing is interesting. The heroine is the Snow Emperor There are some other good ones that I have almost forgotten, but I personally think the ones that can be seen are as follows: Yuhao's demon brother starts with a soul-breaking knife, Riyue Yuhao (the author played in the resurrection match), the main body is respected (invincible Liu Shuangwen), the magic ax at the beginning, turns the tide (if there is a huge poison, it depends on personal resistance to poison), Jingtian Douluo (the name of the protagonist's martial spirit and the name of the auspicious beast persuaded me to quit)

In fact, in the end, it doesn't matter whether you kill Tang San or not. What should have happened has already happened. If a fanfic can make those disgusting things in the original work happen again, it is actually quite a failure. The author understands Gou, but he failed to write the fanfic's feelings well. In addition to being separated, he was made uncomfortable for the second time, and it was the first time he read it. At least the writing style is good at that time. If there is a tragedy in the fanfic, then the fanfic relies on literary works. The author does not need to put so much effort into writing and switch to original writing. Moreover, these tragedies still happened in the original work. So what is the advantage of your fanfic? It cannot change the ending or make up for the regrets?

I finally found a Douluo fan who likes me, but I didn't expect so many people to complain about it.

I see a lot of people have been saying that Huo Yuhao is so good. I really recommend watching Peerless Tang Sect: Glory of the Sun and Moon. Anyway, I really don't like Huo Yuhao. On the contrary, Tang Wulin in the early stage is better.

Ordinary and bland, I really like this kind of novel story read from the perspective of a passerby

There are more than 100 of them, even though he is a titled Douluo, he is still pretending to be the Soul King, how long do he plan to hide it? So annoying

This is so fucking cool, I bought so many chapters for nothing, 🌿