Something's Wrong with Miss Witch

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I could tell at a glance that this was also a tea witch who also worked as a succubus. You think so, Meow?

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After reading the beginning, it doesn't make sense at all. The protagonist was actually picked up, and she should be the awakened witch. In this case, don't they know? Even if they didn't know it at first, they should know it later. If you know it, you should know that you don't have the ability now, and you still have to pay 30 million. In this case, the protagonist should learn magic first. Pay back later

It's well written, but something feels wrong. I feel that the heroine's tea art is a bit too hard, and she is a bit less like a witch and more like a succubus. Then there are the supporting characters, which I feel are a bit too ordinary, especially the chief and the two emperors, three characters with such strong personalities, but I feel that the characters are a bit too ordinary, lacking some impressive and distinctive personalities and characteristics. For example, if you add a persona of "a mother who likes lolita" to the chief, will the character immediately become more distinct? . The author can refer to the great characters of Quanmin, which are very distinctive and impressive. Finally, just in case, don't force the top witches to be dog lickers or lose their IQ in order to enhance the charm of the heroine. This is a witch story, don't really write it like a green tea novel where all the characters are lickers.

The open-mouthed and closed-mouthed sisters really can't stand it. They have a Northeastern accent and a weird feeling.

The succubus witch setting is refreshing, but the subsequent plot always feels a bit over-the-top. I think an excellent novel requires the protagonist to have a good main line and constantly interspersed daily life. Just like another book about witches, its main line is to win the championship in 1994. Whether it is selling alcohol to socialize or working in a different world, it is just a side plot. All daily life is to pave the way for the subsequent plot of winning the championship. What about yours? The succubus is the protagonist's setting. The chief witch has been pulled out and I haven't seen the main plot. The orphan setting means that you can't live in the daily life of family. The interspersed plot is either to cultivate or take the postgraduate entrance examination. But the main plot I see from you seems to be 'In order to pay back the money, I accidentally embarked on the path of the succubus and there is no way back. What should I do? ', The main plot is selling wine, and the branch plot is written in a small royal style, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue and blur the protagonist's character. Of course, the above are just my impressions after watching it. If the author sees it, just read it and write it according to your own ideas. After all, I can only talk about it, and I can't hold back a single plot if I write it.

[Recommendation]: "What should I do if I am deeply in debt?" "What should I do if I have to live in a slum that even the witches look down on?" "I have no choice but to rely on this face to make a living!" Traveling to another world with heavy debts and "making a living with my face" is a relatively rare setting in the witch genre. The author's writing style is good and the description is delicate. The characterization is also very good, and the protagonist's personality is very likable. In just a few chapters, the protagonist's image as a pink-haired witch who is broke and has a debt of 30 million has been established. The plot structure is reasonable, and the overall writing is very smooth, without any poisonous points. Transforming into a witch and working part-time as a "succubus", becoming a winner in life by eating soft food is really hot! ————Dividing Line———— Work: "Something Is Wrong with the Witch Lady" Type: Light Novel Tags: Time Travel, Magic, Daily Life, Soft Rice Flow Status: 48,000 (signed) Recommendation Index: ★★★ ————Dividing Line———— [Plot Summary]: The protagonist travels through time and transforms into a witch, but is still heavily in debt. Looking at my face in the mirror, I decided to "live on my face". Rich Po~Hungry~Fanfan~ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

The author was a little more restrained before it was released, but after it was released, he became more and more popular. Almost every chapter update is a self-talking Che Zuluhua, who repeatedly writes most of the chapter and then writes a short paragraph to advance the plot. I really can't chase anymore, so I'll keep it for now 😴

To a certain extent, this is the book that is closest to a green tea cat witch (=^･ｪ･^=). They both entered the world of witches with no knowledge, both sell wine, and most importantly, both green tea and meow are astringent (cats like cats, they like more, more, more!)

In fact, it has the flavor of a universal witch, but this one has a touch pregnancy setting, and the witch character is a bit lighter.

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Oops, it's a witch novel, and the results seem to be a bit poor. I'll push it for you tomorrow.

Having been in all directions for a long time, you will know how to attack and receive. Please give me some advice. I said, "Can my physical eyes recognize attack and reception?" Watanabe Toru said: "Don't be too modest." "I said: "I read the book of grace, and I can understand it from the text. Whether the world will attack or not is unknown. Che said, "I don't know his face, but I also hear his name." " I said: "Gong Yuyu of the Gong family has a wealth of wealth and a beautiful appearance. He was the first to know Miss Yue, and his hands and tentacles are pure and beautiful. How about it? Che laughed and said, "The dead bones in the grave are nothing more than a dead man's house!" " I said: "Cynthia, the chief witch, has a great reputation, is as rich as the enemy, is the strongest, has overwhelming power, and has many disciples filling her house. She can be called a hero. Now that I have spent thousands of dollars to make the girl smile, my subordinates have capable advisers and have a lot of experience. Can I attack you? "Che said with a smile: "Old Cynthia is a scheming woman with very little ambition, and the status gap is too big to get married. She has many affairs on weekdays and is always at work. Finding trouble is reversed, which shows that she is just an iron maiden who has lived for hundreds of years: she is not attacking but purely receiving. " I said: "There is a person named Alidia, a genius girl who has won numerous awards, who can I call her? "Che said: "Alitya has no real name, is persecuted every day, and is played in the hands of Miss Yue. She is just an alchemy witch, and it is difficult for her to achieve great things. " I said: "There is a person who is full of aggressiveness, with great power, strength and a bright future - Nadia, is she attacking? Che said: "In the name of opening up the company, Nadia has too few scenes. She has too much offensive energy to make Miss Yue run away. It is a pity that she has enough offensive energy but lacks defense." " I said: "Tao Yaoyao, the peach boss of Xiaomei Township, the benefactor of Miss Yue, what can I do for you? Che said: "Although Tao Yaoyao is a benefactor, he is still heavily in debt. He gave away Miss Yue for a mere magic stone. He is standing outside the door and in the corner. He is the dog's ear guarding the house. How can he attack!" " I said: "What about Xin Lili, Yan Ranran and others? Che clapped his hands and laughed and said, "What a big deal about such hunter witches digesting internally!" "

Is the setting of three meters a bit too much? In fact, the height of 3 meters is not beautiful to normal people.

No, can you correct the typos in the introduction, so as to leave a good impression on people? Even the introduction has typos, which makes it difficult for people to want to read

Hehe, the radio wave matched and I ordered it directly 🤓🤓

I still like Nanoha's bombardment type magical girl.

How is the lily of this book? Is there a CP?

Recommended Copywriting If you are rescued by a witch and sent to another world, you accidentally become a beautiful pink witch. So when you find that you are heavily in debt and can only live in a witch relief house that is spurned by witches, you look up at the lovely and charming face in the mirror that is as beautiful as a disaster - Would you want to temporarily abandon your moral integrity and rely on your beauty to solve the current predicament? "Work information" Book title: "There is Something Wrong with the Witch Lady" Author: Red Eyes Type: Light Novel·Original Fantasy Tags: Transformation into Substitute Magical Girl Easy Cure Funny complaints Number of words: 19,000 words Status: Serialized Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (3/5) "Brief description of the work" The novel begins with the protagonist, Lou Yue, who is rescued by a witch and is transported to a different world, and becomes the down-and-out witch Lou Yue who lives in the witch rescue house. It tells the story of the future pink witch, the lovely and charming Miss Lou Yue, who is shaped by a soft rice fan. "Reason for Recommendation" The transformation setting of "the protagonist becomes a pink witch from another world" in the novel is a very popular theme recently, but it is a novel with better results among similar themes. However, there are only one or two of the most popular ones. The main story line of "the protagonist gets a free meal based on his beauty" in the novel has not yet been fully developed. However, at this time, most of the main story lines of witch-themed novels have not developed in this way, so it is still relatively novel and attractive to readers. The character creation of Lou Yue, the protagonist in the novel, is full of "girlishness". The long pink temples hanging down to the calf, the beautiful lavender hair tips, the long and thin eyebrows, the sparkling pink eyes, etc. All highlight her status as a beautiful girl who is alluring the country. The sharp contrast with the abject status quo of being heavily in debt is given a sense of contrast through the author's delicate writing style, and the overall writing style of the novel is also relatively relaxed and lively. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like transformation novels; ❷Readers who like magical girl novels; ❸Readers who like novels where the protagonist relies on his beauty to make a living. "Similar Recommendations" ❶"The Witch Doesn't Want to Work Hard Anymore" Mi Xingren; ❷"The Magical Girl Just Wants to Get Off Work" The Sweet and Sour Tentacle Monster; ❸"What to Do if You Suddenly Become a Magical Girl" Poison Boy. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

Extremely discouraged, I read Chapter 16. Poison point: 30 million owed at the beginning Probability of pregnancy due to skin contact (what is this?) The main talent is to add charm What the hell is Colorful Dream?

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😭The author is carefree

Yes, it is similar to Witch for All, but the biggest shortcoming of this novel is that the Witch virus cannot assimilate other races 😅

A lot of wow, a lot of segmented listening experience is very poor.

I like it, a witch novel with a witch-like style, full of witch flavor

I just saw the manor where I got it. Didn't you say before that you would spend three million to build the territory? Why do you have to build the alchemy room, study and other things yourself?

😎 Looking for inspiration from the author, the author will update soon 😭

The author said it was a good place to avoid the limelight, why hasn't it been updated?😭

Is it refined?