Immortality Begins with the Alienated Body

[Recommendation] A lot of information is released in just ten chapters, but it is not too bloated, the layers are clear, and it comes slowly, and several small foreshadowings are explained and buried, attracting readers' interest in reading. At the same time, the alienation of body parts has also been innovated very well. People are very much looking forward to the alienation of various parts in the future, and how to grow into immortals through alienation! [Introduction] Who has ever seen such a weird immortal, with a long mouth, overlapping pupils, tentacle-shaped ears, and an inverted heart... The soul penetrates the corpse, repairs the corpse and becomes a human being, alienates itself, opens the road to immortality, and finally transforms into an immortal. Comments The protagonist is not pedantic, knows how to adapt to changes, and has the simple emotions of normal people, small conflicts, and small climaxes. The arrangement is very appropriate, and the plot progresses layer by layer without delay. I look forward to writing a more innovative and mind-numbing alienation, which will be a strong contrast with the traditional immortality cultivation. Keep up the standard, becoming a god is not a dream! [Title of the work] Immortality begins with the alienated body [Keywords] Xianxia, ​​immortality, alienation                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

The concept of body alienation is very good, why do you have to write about a few families and insert a wife at the beginning? Just write it, and make those people so childish

Oops... Evil skills can't be used on treacherous and evil people~ Children all know that good will lead to good, but the protagonist doesn't? Or does the author not know?

The plot is so confusing, the male protagonist is in the qi training stage and keeps dancing in front of the golden elixir stage

There are many writings about alienation, but few writings are brilliant.

The Virgin Bitch traveled through time and is still a Virgin Bitch. She has practiced sorcery and is still a licking dog.