Hogwarts' Most Powerful Squib

The person who came here from the Hunter was as weak as a loser. In the early stage, it was said that he killed a dozen dark wizards. Later, he was just like a loser. He weakened the protagonist to the point of weakening. How could such a weak person survive in the Hunter? You can't pass the hunter exam alone, right? Still a hunter? Have you learned how to read? You are rubbing people's IQs to the ground. You must know that among hunters, even if they have not learned it, before they learn it, they are the best and elite among ordinary people. After they learn it, they are the elites among the elites. You have ruined the profession of hunter into a state of disgrace. Your protagonist has lived as a hunter for only a few years, but he has also been admitted as a hunter and learned to read, so he is considered the elite of the elite. He has been growing up in the world of Harry Potter, and he has known that he is a squib since he was 11 years old. He has also started to learn the ability to read, and his physical fitness is still so high, and then he is like this? If you didn't travel through the Hunters and went directly to Harry Potter, I could accept it. After all, you can be careful. But the problem is that this is your third life. Not to mention the first life, even if you are a waste, you can pass the Hunter exam and learn to read in the second life. Then in the Harry Potter world, you have become such a waste?

It's just a boring beginning, but then the protagonist is like a dog and is threatened by all kinds of things from the Ministry of Magic.

It's a good subject, but the writing is rubbish.

After reading everyone's comments, I realized that the shortcomings are mainly focused on suppressing the protagonist's strength and being led by Fudge This is indeed a taboo in writing. After all, reading online articles is just fun. I will improve this in subsequent chapters If you have any other requests, please leave them as far as possible under this post. I will definitely read it if I have time (It is rare for me to humbly ask for advice and correct my mistakes now. Everyone must cherish it and give me your opinions. I will adopt whatever you think makes sense. Of course, if you have any dissatisfaction and want to vent your anger, you are welcome to complain.)

The author had an idea and came up with a wonderful theme: full-time hunter + Hogwarts. But unfortunately, the author probably started writing the book as soon as his brain got hot. I didn't really think about the plot of the story. Reflecting on the specific situation, the fact that a full-time hunter gained strength and experienced many things to become a strong man, and then traveled to Hogwarts and started working as a dog licker was too intuitively exposed to the readers. This is a taboo. Actually, this is a novice routine in a large genre. The most typical one is that the immortal cultivator Yue Jinqianfan becomes the supreme powerhouse and travels back to the original world to start chasing the school belle and become the Dragon King, pretending to be a slap in the face. This is a fairly mature product of routines. It's not that this routine is bad, but there are always people who think it's a novice and look down on this routine. There are always people who feel that they can achieve the same effect by writing casually. In fact, the more this kind of routine is used, the harder it is to write, mainly because everyone is tired of this kind of routine and there is nothing new. Start pursuing logic and reasonableness and be picky. The biggest core point of brainless writing is to make the writing promote inheritance and inheritance, be smooth and smooth, and unconsciously make readers forget the fact that they have brains. Just follow the author's story and you're done. This actually tests the author's writing skills and experience. A good routine novel can make everyone feel that the whole story is not brainless. Just like this novel, what if a strong full-time hunter travels to Hogwarts to work as a thug or a dog leg? Isn't the main reason why the writing is not interesting enough or exciting enough? After all, isn't the core of the entire novel about a strong man from another world traveling through Hogwarts and causing trouble? Are there too few starting points for writing successful novels like this? Why doesn't anyone criticize them for this reason? According to this logic, what is the difference between taking the mind of a different world and becoming a student at Hogwarts, and then cheating and causing trouble? 9.8 Of the 10 HP books written by Qidian are written like this. In fact, the solution is very simple. Just give the reasons and motivations for the character's unreasonable behavior at the beginning. You say that I am a strong man who has a high mortality rate and a high level of martial arts and wits. When I travel through the world of Harry Potter, I suddenly lose my strength and intelligence. There must be something wrong with the author's direct writing. You can write whatever reasons you want, and you can write whatever motives you want. For example: The protagonist is actually an ordinary person who works hard intermittently and constantly eats and waits for death. In the excitement of gaining extraordinary power for the first time, he was forced to run forward by the sense of crisis brought by various strange abilities and the dangerous world itself, and suddenly traveled to another world of power systems, and the atmosphere of the entire extraordinary society was more peaceful. It's like a nerve that has been tense for a long time suddenly relaxes. The whole person fell into another state of feeling lost and grateful, with some confusion about the future, but at the same time he was interested in doing things. Therefore, he joined the government department and accumulated wealth and knowledge by joining the official organization to fight against dark wizards, thus gaining a deeper understanding of the extraordinary society. At the same time, he maintained contact with high-level officials like Fudge so that he could do other things next. Such rubbish excuses, I have come up with three or five opportunities for my bigger size. Next, we will measure the combat effectiveness. Without weakening the protagonist's ability, we can write the battle in a fun and exciting way to highlight the differences and characteristics of the two abilities. Basically, there won't be too many poisonous points in the entire data. After all, combat is the most common poisonous point when the two worldviews are integrated.

That's it? Hunter World is just a small thing, it's too big

If you think it's too strong, don't use it. If you insist on suppressing the combat power, it will end up being nondescript and nothing.

The old dog with a broken spine has more backbone than the protagonist. He is extremely cowardly. He is incompetent and furious. He is just short of being able to control him as a living creature. Isn't it a bit outrageous? A squib, who killed seventeen vicious dark wizards in a row, and then just turned around? 6

How should I put it, it feels like the protagonist is the strongest among dogs in the eyes of the wizard, and he is still a dog.

What is the gatekeeper? It's a security guard. What is it. It's Laifu

The characters are inconsistent and confusing.

I feel like it should be easy for Squibs to open a door. They just can't use magic, but they still have magic power. Otherwise, Squibs in the magic world will probably die.

A very good subject matter, but the plot arrangement really needs to be considered, especially the protagonist's character. There are only sixty-six chapters now. Maybe we can slow down the progress, go back and sort out the previous plot, and change the places where the protagonist seems to be very separated. I have read a lot of Harry fandoms in the past few years, both good and bad. To be honest, I'm tired of reading about being a student or a teacher. Unless it's particularly good, I won't pursue it again. What attracts me most about this article is the novel themes of Squib + Demon Hunter + School Guard. Articles are not something that can be written immediately. Only through long-term accumulation and practice can you better express the ideas in your brain with words. I look forward to the author's progress and his articles.

The writing is somewhat nondescript and the content is inconsistent.

It's really ugly to be Fudge's dog.

Don't overestimate the strength of the Ministry of Magic. Without a wand, Sirius makes the most powerful Aurors of the Ministry of Magic wander around. The protagonist can only be regarded as a dark wizard with no big deal. He is probably an ordinary enforcement team. He can just hide in an alley.

It feels like any wizard with a positive attitude can point his wand at the protagonist at will. The protagonist has killed more than a dozen dark wizards, so he should know a lot about wizard duels.