This Star Is so Popular

After reading Chapter 10, let me share my personal feelings. I won't talk about the characters and Goldfinger. Just a little, most of the descriptions are a bit ink, or redundant, there are too many side descriptions of one thing. For example, taking a plane to Wuxi, how are the planes, what cabins are there, how are the flight attendants, what is the aviation industry like, etc. How many pages are there to describe it! It feels like you want to add a sense of immersion, but I think the focus is a bit off. Let's imagine a scenario: the protagonist takes a plane to go to the set. What readers are looking forward to is the protagonist's progress, such as his performance on the set, his interactions with people, etc. Instead of watching you introduce first class, stewardess! Aviation, etc., These directly interrupt the coherence of emotions. It makes people break away and feel irritable! Of course, these are all superficial personal feelings, and I hope the description below can be concise and concise.

It's a pity that Qin Lan is also one of the love brains in the entertainment industry. Her leader broke her leg and she went to take care of her. However, her employer sued her for breach of contract and paid tens of millions of dollars to accompany her, and he prostituted her to go to the filming. However, the leader blamed her for being hospitalized and broke up with her while filming. In fact, she was having an affair. The second Feast of the King of Chuan Chuan was a waste of people and money. In the early stage of the Nanjing drama, she split with Gao Yuanyuan. Looking for true love in this entertainment industry is simply stupid.

Liu Yifei

I thought that after time travel, feudal emperors could have harems. Female celebrities are all willing to share a man haha

Xiaopang and Qin Lan are really good. There are so many books about Yahuazi that I'm tired of reading them. Recently, many books don't write about Yahuazi. Instead, they write about Aunt Liu, which is quite popular.

I thought there was Aunt Liu in the character, but then I saw the protagonist saying in front of others that she graduated from high school and was a pig butcher. This was to create a character for Aunt Liu, and she started to demonize her again. She said that she was a pig butcher, which was unnecessary! Aunt Liu's books are so popular now, you don't want to make money?

Gold fingers can be redeemed for roles, so what's the point of joining the company?

Jiang Zuping

Before putting it on the shelves, I would like to give the author some suggestions, hoping that the work will be more brilliant. 1: The introduction is too long, rambling, interrupting the current plot progress, and distracting people. It's okay now, but it will definitely be said to be worthless after it is put on the shelves. 2: In the main character's city, when he first met his agent, he blurted out Li Xiaozai, and then he got round to it. Then he saw Zhao Wenzhuo shouting "Daweitian", and another one said to let the bullets fly for a while. These are very bad points. The setting is rebirth, so the city must have some bonuses, right? Then Goldfinger takes on the role of observing the character's life, so there must be bonuses, right? Don't make progress! 3: The protagonist's perspective on women is a bit crazy. But it's not a big problem. The most important thing is the issue 1.2 Above. I hope it will be taken seriously and we look forward to improvements and progress in subsequent chapters. If you think it makes sense, then I'm very satisfied. If you think it's contrary to your thinking, then delete it and I don't have to look forward to it.

Just write Sissi as a single heroine. Don't have ambiguities with other girls. Write more sweet daily life with Sissi. The most important thing is to make Sissi's character more realistic. Many people will definitely read it. At least I will order them all.

[Recommendation]: This is the story of how an ordinary person (bushi) with golden fingers rose to prominence in the entertainment industry and eventually became a global superstar. Youyu Ruyi provided him with the opportunity to audition, and the accompanying virtual space allowed him to easily experience the life of the character he played. With both approaches, it was only a matter of time before he became a superstar. [Brief Description of the Work]: The protagonist Han Jiang is reborn with the mysterious Yu Ruyi. With his love and persistence in acting, he decides to devote himself to the entertainment industry and try his best to play every role well. His handsome appearance and excellent acting skills made all directors favor him, and his name became a hot topic in the entertainment industry. However, Han Jiang has not been dazzled by these honors. He has always maintained his love and persistence in acting, constantly improving his acting skills, and hopes that through his own efforts, more people can feel the charm of art. Eventually he became a global star. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Work information]: Book title: This star is so popular Author : Di tu raccoon raccoon Type: Urban-entertainment star Tags: rebirth, relaxed, entertainment, fast-paced, funny, star Number of words: 63,000 words, serialized Evaluation: seedlings, licorice [Recommendation Index]: ★★★☆☆ [Recommended Recommended groups]: Novel enthusiasts who like entertainment, urban novel enthusiasts [Points to watch]: 1. The protagonist is very handsome. The protagonist is described in the novel like this. He has broad shoulders and long legs, handsome appearance, and looks like Takeshi Kaneshiro. Passers-by will say when they see him, how can there be such a good-looking person, like this It gives readers a sense of immersion when reading. As urban star stories, there are not many girls, but there are definitely many beauties. There are only a few chapters so far. The beauties around me include Qin Lan who lives in the same house, Xu Qian who met at the gym, and an unknown long-legged stewardess. For readers who like many beauties, this is an absolute bonus. 2. The setting of the protagonist's golden finger is very interesting. The protagonist's golden finger is a piece of jade. He has the ability to use reputation points to exchange for role auditions and the virtual space. The role audition can force the person who originally decided on the role to have various problems, which facilitates the protagonist's participation and the opportunity to play. The virtual space can strengthen the protagonist's acting skills, let the protagonist experience the life of the corresponding character, and even improve the corresponding physical fitness. With this two-pronged approach, it is only a matter of time before the protagonist becomes a superstar, [Disadvantages : In the previous setting, the protagonist used the golden finger jade Ruyi to possess Lin Pingzhi. Not only did he experience his life, but even after leaving the space, his body's flexibility was greatly improved because he used a set of handsome sword moves in front of the director to capture the director. The director saw that the protagonist was really talented and learned, and believed the protagonist when he said that he had practiced swordsmanship for ten years. However, later he said that his waist was weak, so he used this as an excuse to go to the gym to exercise, and successfully met Xu Qian, who plays Ren Yingying, in the gym. The arrangement of this plot is very far-fetched. The director can see that the protagonist has a solid foundation and believes the protagonist's statement, which shows that the protagonist's physical fitness is not bad. However, in order to deliberately promote the plot, the author said that the protagonist's health is very poor, completely forgetting the previous settings and statements, which seems very imprecise.

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If the protagonist wins the role with his own golden finger, what's the use of the company besides sharing money?

Chapter 2: The ambiguity with Qin Lan is a bit awkward and abrupt

Please read more, the data is too ugly, and there is no recommendation now 😭

There are too many descriptions of how popular Lin Pingzhi is.

I suggest you change the company you signed with. It doesn't make sense logically. The protagonist of the role is Goldfinger. There is no reason to sign with any company.

This is my first time writing a book, so I'm opening a suggestion thread. You can comment below on what I didn't write well. Thank you.

Sorry, the writing collapsed, and I also had emotional problems. I will stop this novel here, and I will make up for it later when I have the opportunity.