There's Something Wrong with This Primitive World

There are too many classes these days. When there are less classes on Thursday, let's go back to four thousand a day. Sigh, I feel like there is little hope of signing this book, so I'll just treat it as a practice. I hope I can stick to it slowly.

After reading the three golden chapters, let me tell you my opinions and feelings. I hope it can give the author some help. First of all, the subject matter is too unpopular. It is quite rare to travel through primitive society. I have read a book before and then the person chose it because of mediocre grades. Secondly, the writing is too bland. The first three chapters fail to portray a world view and background well enough to leave an impression on the reader and create a sense of immersion. The protagonist's golden finger can only understand those witchcraft texts. As a person without a system or other plug-ins, a disadvantage is that it is difficult to promote the plot. If there are system tasks and the like, the protagonist will have a clear direction to move forward, making the plot more coherent. This is also the reason why the system trend is rampant now. The author writes about one incident after another, without any ups and downs. When I read it, some parts did not attract me very much. Maybe it was because I read it in the middle of the night, and I felt a little drowsy, as if I was reading an article in a Chinese textbook. The author's writing style is not bad and is better than some authors who write anecdotes. It can only be said that other factors affected the performance. Summary: Unattractive subject matter, bland or even boring plot, not enough sense of immersion. (After reading the comments, if you feel that it has no effect at all and affects your writing, please delete this comment. After all, you are the author and I am just a reader.)

I've read a lot about Primitive Tribes before, and I've only finished writing very few chapters. I don't know how many chapters you will stick with.

Come on 😁