Entertainment: the Female Guest on the Love Show Is Actually My Ex-Girlfriend

I always feel that this kind of ambiguous relationship is like having a serious illness. Can you just separate it cleanly? You've already broken up, and you're still jealous of others. You're even more fucked up than a J-girl who is a good person. I don't know if other people are the same as me, but I always feel like watching the heroine is like nt.

. . . It would be better for Xu Sanshui to be the heroine. I really don't see anything good about this heroine. One of the comments is right, occupying the latrine and not shitting, what did he do to lead the hero to lick her like this?

Originally, it was good to write a single female lead, but suddenly Xu Miao appeared. Even if she is a tool to promote the plot, there is no need to write like this, right? The villain is pretty brainless, and the hero keeps pretending to be a pig, so why can't he just pretend a little bit? It's almost 50 chapters hidden. This kind of subject matter is written around male and female protagonists, but now it is very separated, even though it is obviously written in other places.

I don't see anything good about the female protagonist so far, I can only say that both the male and female protagonists are pretentious.

They were all divided, and they were still chirping.

After reading dozens of chapters, I personally think that the author's writing is actually quite good, and the story is smooth and has no serious poisonous points. However, in this chapter, many readers seem to be dissatisfied with the role of the ex-girlfriend, thinking that the protagonist and her should have broken up long ago, and are quite dissatisfied with this. I thought about it carefully, and the problem may be with the title of the book, because although the title of the book is "love drama", although it is more eye-catching, I have read several of them, and they all use the system to pretend to be cool. Among them, the ex-girlfriend is usually a character who has no vision and regret. Therefore, the psychological expectation of people who read this title is that the ex-girlfriend will definitely regret it. This is probably the reason why many people are dissatisfied. The story development and tone are completely different. I suggest that the author might as well change the title or introduction of the book so that people can directly tell that this is an imaginary entertainment + single female protagonist dog food. From what I have seen now, it should be considered good, and it will not cause misunderstandings and differences in expectations.

If you want to break up, be thorough. It's not impossible to be friends. But if you write that two people have broken up, and you still deal with them as boyfriend and girlfriend, isn't it inappropriate for you to say so? While both of them said they didn't want to get back together, the woman still cared about the name of the woman next to the hero, and they were so disconnected that they were so coquettish.

How should I put it? I don't understand why I write this about people who are still ambiguous about each other after breaking up.

To put it simply, he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger to participate in a love show to pick up his ex-girlfriend. While saying no, his actions are very honest. Not my favorite type, usually in this kind of plot everyone else is stupid and only the protagonist is smart.

Come on, stop being a eunuch. I think there are too few ambiguous emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. Everyone wants to watch something sweet.

In recent chapters, the interaction between the male and female protagonists has decreased, and it seems boring. Let's talk about the identity of the male protagonist as a songwriter. He has only written 4 songs, signed a contract for 3 years, and has never been to the company. It is very unreasonable. Although according to the previous description, the four songs written by the male protagonist are very good, after all, the number is small. Under such circumstances, it is barely reasonable to sign an agreement with the company as a senior composer. However, since there is an ace composer who is one level higher than the senior composer in the article, then in a company where ace composers need to take over work, why does the male protagonist with a lower level not have to work for three years? No need to report to the company? Even if the heroine is a shareholder of the company, the reason is not sufficient. A company cannot have only one shareholder, and the heroine is not domineering in a single word. The system is also far-fetched to issue tasks. If in order to prevent the male protagonist from lying flat, then before, the male protagonist was asked to sweep the streets, wash dishes, and then go to the mountains to teach. After a series of tasks, it suddenly stopped for two years and allowed the male protagonist to just write novels? Then, in order to promote the development of the male and female protagonists, the system issued a task to ask the male protagonist to appear on the love show. However, after joining the love show and re-establishing contact with the female lead, the task of supervising the production of songs was all for other people's songs, which had nothing to do with the female lead. What kind of operation is this? Author, what is your main line? If we want to focus on entertainment, then we should not portray the male protagonist as an idle fish, who has already become an invisible rich man, and then suddenly let the male protagonist exert his strength, which is inconsistent with the male protagonist's design. If you want to spread the dog food, can you let the male and female protagonists interact more? Connect many system tasks with the female protagonist, allowing the male and female protagonists to develop together in entertainment and enhance their relationship at the same time.

Hey, the more I read, the more it looks like a dog-licking novel. I basically lose interest in reading it later.

Although the male protagonist is systematic, he is not high-profile and does not like to pretend to slap someone in the face. It comes naturally. It won't be as embarrassing as that kind of mentally retarded novelist who dresses low-key all day long and then suddenly makes a high-profile slap in the face. The heroine is a drama queen, but she doesn't act too cool. She neither pretends to be aloof nor tries to be cute, and her personality is relatively natural. The roles of the male and female protagonists are reasonably distributed, there is a lot of interaction, and the sweetness is just right. I hope the sweetness can be increased. None of the male and female supporting characters are mentally retarded, and the supporting characters are not deliberately made mentally retarded to highlight the protagonist. The plot doesn't have any exciting climax yet, but it's quite life-like and feels pretty good. The author's second book actually has many flaws in details. The male protagonist can be seen to be 25 years old in Chapters 1, 6, 25, and 29. In Chapter 31, he suddenly becomes 27 years old. The female protagonist is even more exaggerated. I haven't found out how old the female protagonist is now. It is only mentioned at the end of Chapter 7 that the female protagonist has been in the industry for more than 10 years. I guess she should be much older than the male protagonist. We dated for less than a year, broke up and haven't contacted each other for two years, and suddenly contacted each other 3 days before joining the group. If we can't let go of each other, how could we not have contacted each other for two years? The start was too abrupt. In the follow-up development, the male and female protagonists have the same conversation and interaction as an old married couple, and they can enter and exit each other's homes at will. This is already the case. However, they still have to be friends in a pretentious manner and do not get back together immediately. Such friends are a bit deliberate. After discovering that the male protagonist wrote a song for his cousin, the female protagonist directly went back to the company to question her cousin. This is because she is not worried about the exposure of her relationship with the male protagonist. Doesn't she have such vigilance in the entertainment industry? Later, the cousin went to the hero's house and met the heroine cooking. Even though the heroine didn't know who was coming, she walked out immediately without worrying about her relationship with the hero being exposed. She really didn't look like a popular star. In fact, the author has never directly explained the popularity of the heroine. This is a flaw in shaping the heroine, and it seems that the heroine is not clear enough. In Chapter 45, the female protagonist Li Xiaoyue has a relatively low attitude towards the heroine. In Chapter 47, it is written that the heroine is the finale of the concert, which means that the heroine is higher than Li Xiaoyue. In Chapter 14, it is mentioned that Li Xiaoyue is considered a second-tier star, so the heroine should be at least a first-tier star, but that's it. A first-line character suddenly appeared during the male protagonist's class reunion in Chapter 21. At that time, Li Xiaoyue was chased by paparazzi and got into a business car and left. However, as a first-line heroine, she did not have an assistant or agent accompanying her, drove by herself, and was not followed by paparazzi. This is not very reasonable. The male protagonist had no intention of developing a relationship with his female partner Xu Sanshui, but when selling the copyright to Zhu Xian, even though Xu Sanshui's company had no advantage, the male protagonist still sold it to Sanshui without hesitation. Is this a forced preparation to add a role to the female partner? If you want to add a female supporting role, Li Xiaoyue is more suitable. Xu Sanshui and the male protagonist have only known each other for a short time, have no emotional foundation, and have no similarities in life and work. The shaping of this female supporting role is far inferior to Li Xiaoyue. Currently, Li Xiaoyue's portrayal is pretty good. She has a relationship with the male protagonist and was confessed to by the male protagonist. She had feelings for the male protagonist but gave up for her career. Her psychological description is also quite prominent. She has always been brooding about giving up the male protagonist. She is also in the entertainment industry with the female protagonist. Such a female partner is more interesting to compete with the female protagonist. She is not comparable to Xu Sanshui. I hope the author can pay attention to reducing these flaws in the subsequent plot arrangements. The emotional line should not be too complicated, and the focus of the female supporting role should be adjusted so that Xu Sanshui can be eliminated early and Li Xiaoyue can be added.

We have been separated for two years, and an ex-girlfriend still likes to play strong, but most people would just slap her! Don't say you can still get back together or be friends after a breakup, it's a breakup! Don't give me some candy and wag your tail like a dog

Why do two people who won't compromise stay together? The deeper the entanglement, the greater the harm. Such entangled emotions are not suitable for being a heroine. Two strong people will definitely not be happy together, and one of them is destined to compromise.

There are still people who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers. Isn't it fun from beginning to end?

Chen Ziqing

A landlord's donkey can't rest like this, the author is great 😭

The ex-girlfriend became the heroine again, and she was extremely toxic. Are you okay after we break up? You have to write a plot about a cerebral hemorrhage.

The more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. I met my ex-girlfriend on a love show after not seeing each other for two years. She can still be a bitch after all. There is no story at all. It feels like two strangers forcibly formed a CP, and the man is a guy who thinks from the bottom of his body. They got together inexplicably. How can you not see each other for two years? Either cut it off, or don't write it as a dog-licker. Why has this male protagonist never seen a woman?

You successfully screened out some readers at the beginning

There has been no update for two months. Is it because of the eunuch?

Does the author have a reason or something? It's not updated anymore, is it because you can't think of it? I don't think so. If the author wants to give up on this book, I think he can at least finish it. Let's write a chapter and get married one year later. At least it has a beginning and an end. I open the starting point every day and refresh it, but there is no update. I really don't want to wait anymore. I haven't read the last chapter now. It's been too long and my expectations have been exhausted. 🙏🙏🙏

Reading different novels requires different minds. Sometimes you really don't need to read them with your brain. If you take it seriously, you will lose. Come on, author, I enjoyed reading it 👍

You writers have written about everything in the entertainment field, but you have never written specifically about the small screen. Yes, when will the small screen stand up? Shivering and cold. The author wrote a book specifically for the small screen, but also for the big screen.