Red Mansion Reading Man

The soul of the Red Mansion is nothing more than the glistening snow in the mountains, the lonely forest in the fairyland, and the "precious jade" that is actually a stubborn stone. Baoyu's person, "Don't imitate this child's shape" can be summed up in one sentence. Baochai behaved perfectly, but was disciplined by the world. Only Sister Lin, the broken beauty is the sorrow and sigh lingering in her eyebrows. It is said that "Sister Lin fell from the sky". She is as smart and quick as any man, her quality and heart are definitely not overrated, her every move and smile is noble and elegant, and every word she speaks speaks to the origins of her Taoist family. What's even more valuable is her self-respect and self-love, and her independent and sober soul. Such a person should only exist in heaven. How can one be lucky enough to meet him on earth? What is lovely and pitiful is that fairies are not completely indifferent to the world. She has some innocent girlish fantasies, and she also plays with girls' little tempers. Those poetic feelings are frowned eyebrows and affectionate eyes, filled with the fragrance of books, with scattered teardrops, falling in the wind with red. The misfortune in her youth and her frail and sickly body made her sentimental, but she couldn't help but put up spikes to protect herself. Even if she is angry and says something to hurt you, you will always reflect on yourself first and apologize. It is a pity that Qing, a fairy from this world, has been relegated to the mortal world; such a fairy has ended up in pieces - Cao Xueqin, you are so cruel! With such cannibalistic feudal ethics, weak women have no place to stand! I have said too much, but I cannot fully describe the regrets in my heart. I've been thinking, if she didn't have to lose her parents at a young age, would she be able to live in her parents' lap, be quirky, confident and naughty? Perhaps my father would be indulgent and indulgent, proud and complacent, while my mother would try to control her strictly, but she would end up acting coquettishly and crying. The father excused his daughter, but was severely criticized by his wife. Who dares to confront such a high-ranking lady with the sword and wind? At the same time, the father will definitely be optimistic about the little cotton-padded jacket, and the mother will also choose a good son-in-law, and will not let those dandy libertines take away the juicy cabbage. Then, she will marry the person she likes. On weekdays, she "can bet on books until the fragrance of tea is poured out", and she also has a deep love for her. Children who are filial will enjoy family happiness and eventually die without illness. Thanks to this book, the author found a childhood sweetheart for Daiyu. The plot of the two getting to know each other and falling in love satisfied my fantasy, and this was my original intention in pursuing the novel. As long as the other plots make sense, I'll buy them too. I hope the author can maintain this pure relationship and not have a harem for no reason, or say he loves you and then turn around and marry again. This not only belittles the fairy from the outside world, but also underestimates the other female characters - they are equally excellent and proud, how can they serve the same husband casually and be willing to be humble? The limitations of the times may make the main wife accept concubines, but this is not an excuse for the male protagonist to be promiscuous. In short, I hope the author arranges the concubines reasonably and does not make the male protagonist appear hypocritical, nor does he force himself to be reasonable for the acquisition of girls. A little insight, shared with like-minded people.

Sister Lin's love only started in the capital. . Someone in Jiangnan is more like a burden. The male protagonist was nervous when he proposed marriage, but he finally got rid of this burden. He was relaxed and fell in love with Sister Lin without any scruples. . The plot of Zhen Yinglian was removed a little but it didn't affect the story. I don't know why she was praised so highly.

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. I personally feel that this book is relatively fresh among Red Mansions. The plot is very slow and the fate of the characters in Red Mansions has basically been changed. Later on, I think it will test the author's story concept more, because it has completely turned into a time-travel novel. The biggest problem now is that it's not exciting enough. In fact, it's well written, so I want to read it, but once I stop reading it, I forget about it, and I don't seem to want to read it that much. All I can say is that it's a good article, but it's not suitable for readers who come to Qidian looking for interesting articles 🤤

Plagiarism, absolute plagiarism! Don't refute me, I don't accept refutation! The book I read has more words than yours, but the content is the same! You can prove yourself now by updating twenty or thirty chapters to see who plagiarized whom! Actually, you also know that everyone still believes you, but your words are unfounded. You should update twenty or thirty chapters first. It is easier to say something with evidence than anything else!

I see that the title of your book is also named "Shulang". Why don't I see how hard your protagonist studies and strives for the imperial examination? Instead, I see someone with high ambitions and low abilities. He doesn't take the time to do what he should do at this age. Instead, he looks like a rural version of Jia Baoyu. The problem is that Jia Baoyu is still a young man from the prince's palace. What does your protagonist have? A person with no fame and no status, talking so much now, having sex with this girl and that girl all day long, it's all just pie in the sky. You said that you provided disaster relief. Even if a child has merit, it is not your credit. The imperial examination will not give you extra points for doing good things. Even if Jane is in the emperor's heart, it will be more than 10 years later for the emperor to be really useful. Or are you saying that you, a child, will take a rocket to the imperial examination after that? Hum hum, Jane's childhood in the emperor's heart is probably a joke. Tong Sheng is not qualified to wear a sword and be called a gentleman. Even if your disaster relief happened when the protagonist was already a scholar, I wouldn't say anything, because only when you become a scholar do these things can you really get credit, while Tong Sheng does this only in vain. When it comes to falling in love and flirting with girls, you have to master the rules. If you want to write this book well, highlight the study in your book title, imperial examination! There are so many harems among Red Mansions fans, and they mainly write about love lines. I have read enough of them. I have been subscribing to your book because you said it was an imperial examination article.

In fact, this book does not need to go to Jia's mansion or the capital. The growth of the male protagonist and the love of Sister Lin, a short story in the Red Mansion. . I am used to seeing the arrogance of my family, country, and world. Ordinary, simple people and things, and the eloquent writing style are like the sunshine in spring, which makes people feel comfortable. .

Why are you so irrational in opening a harem? Why are you so irrational in opening a harem? You have already set Daiyu as the eldest wife. I won't say anything when Baoqin comes. Yinglian comes again and gives the wife a common wife. You are a farm boy. How many wives do you want? Comparing Daiyu and Yinglian, I don't believe Lin Ruhai and Jia Min will agree. Nor will someone as proud as Daiyu agree. It simply tramples Lin Ruhai's family into the mud. I looked at the introduction to see if it was about a single heroine, and I agreed, thinking it was at best a concubine. I didn't expect you to be a flat wife. Good guy, it's also because you are greedy. You are not only lustful but also very bold. I don't know, I thought you were a relative of the emperor. One is the eldest lady of the fourth rank, and the other is a skilled girl who is still virgin. If I had known that you would write about Daiyu like this, it would be better for Daiyu to die at a young age in Dream of Red Mansions. You trample on Daiyu's feelings and the face of everyone else, you are a pure Phoenix man.

I haven't watched it, but The Red Mansion is not suitable for the starting point. The starting point is an orphanage. Whoever pays to see the Red Mansion without a harem is useless. It is free at most.

The early part of this book was really good, but in the later part I felt like I was drifting off. I picked up girls every day. I didn't read the book and picked up girls all day long. It also dealt with a lot of things about moral incompatibility. In the later period, I couldn't read it at all and gave up the book!

What is written in the back is really rubbish. I don't know what they are doing. Lin Daiyu writes like a prostitute, more exposed than Xue Baochai.

To be honest, it would be better not to write about Zhen Yinglian. First of all, there are not many scenes. He forcibly found an equal wife for the protagonist. Then her mother was dissatisfied. To be more realistic, I have been trafficked for many years in ancient times. This is a reputation that has been ruined. Normally, no one from a better family would marry her. Either marry into a poor family and become a wife, or become a concubine. It's better now. Even the wives of the number one scholar feel aggrieved and want to find a better one. Oh, by the way, it was the protagonist who rescued her back then... Where did you learn this boxing technique? Little red book? !

Marrying Yinglian is an absolute failure. This character has no role in promoting the story since its appearance. It has no characteristics other than being crazy and naive. The character itself has not grown at all, and it does not contribute to the growth of the protagonist. It even has no effect on the development of the story. Moreover, the protagonist has basically no spiritual interaction with him from beginning to end. I really don't understand the meaning of writing such a character. At the same time, in terms of character description, Yinglian is very different from the description of Daiyu in this book, and even compared to Baoqin, it is also very different. The protagonist should have a mixed mentality of sympathy and gratitude towards Yinglian, but the emotional power from these two points is too weak. If we talk about sympathy, then the protagonist cares enough for Yinglian and does not need a flat wife. If we talk about gratitude, what else does Yinglian do besides giving away clothes, and Baoqin goes to the mall to do outreach for the protagonist? How much does a woman pay, and how does the protagonist give back? From a reader's perspective, the protagonist is indiscriminate in handling this matter.

There is no role, so why give it to the protagonist?

The Daiyu I saw on Douyin, haha ​​@Hollyhan

Is a harem really unreasonable? Is there a high probability of collapse? The only situation in the harem that is considered reasonable is that of the emperor. The next best thing is, prince, you are a scholar, Tong Sheng, what do you think? Just make some random comparisons and you will know that Jia Zheng and Jia She both have titles, right? Do they have concubines from scholarly families, or do they have concubines from princes and nobles? If you look at the status of their concubines, you will understand whether it is reasonable or not. In ancient times, there was also a system of monogamy and multiple concubines. The only ones left were concubines, that is, aunts. Lin Daiyu, Xue Baoqin, with such status as concubines? Should the daughter of Tanhua Lang, the third-generation prince, be the concubine, or should the daughter of the Xue family of Jinling be the concubine? Which party are you trying to offend? Lin Daiyu was a concubine and worked hard to study and serve the country, but her daughter became a concubine? Do you want to offend scholars all over the world? Do you dare to do such a thing? Do you believe that the emperor will destroy your three clans and give an explanation to the whole world? Xue Baoqin became a concubine. Is it so easy for the daughters of princes and nobles to become concubines? Even if it has declined, do you want to offend the princes and nobles of the world? Aren't you afraid of revenge from the aristocracy? This is not a matter for your family. Where does your status go? The social status of a concubine is very low. No matter how many emotional dramas you write, you can't make up for this. Is this class? Scholar class? Aristocratic class? This is not a question about Lin Daiyu or Xue Baoqin, it is a question about how it is impossible for the daughters of thousands of scholars or nobles to become concubines for others? If you want Lin Daiyu or Xue Baoqin to be your concubine, you should at least be a prince. What is it now? Tong Sheng? What a joke. It's just because the writing is good that I'm so angry about it. It's a pity that it's going to collapse. The harem of the Red Mansion collapses too easily. Because most of the twelve beauties in Jinling cannot be concubines. If they want to be concubines, the protagonist must pursue the emperor's goal. Are you an emperor? Or do you want to be an emperor? I don't think there's that much of a market for harem novels, especially if the logic isn't strong enough and it's too easy to write a novel. . . Hey, come on, author. Let me see how round you are? I think it's too easy to write down.

It seems that the author has multiple girls? Can you tell me? I'm ready to withdraw. If it had a single female lead, I would continue watching. I think single women and multiple women were acceptable to me in ancient times, but the characters must be considered. After all, Lin Daiyu's character would never agree to a male protagonist with multiple female protagonists. At most, they would just be concubines. If it was a concubine, wouldn't it be absolutely impossible for Bao Qin? Even his father and brother would not agree. Zhen Yinglian, it's hard to say, but there should be no chance. Besides, don't even think about having multiple wives in ancient times. Women other than the main wife were all concubines, also known as concubines. However, someone as promiscuous as Jia Zhen can also realize a harem stallion story. If so, does it count as a heroine? I feel that such a woman is just a tool to release sexual desire. Forget it if there are many female protagonists in the Red Mansion fanfiction. To satisfy some fetishes, you can write about harem stallions. Anyway, in that kind of book, there is no need to consider the character, everyone is willing to be the tool for the male protagonist to release sexual desire, and there will be no jealousy.

The author has worked very hard to write, but still needs to explain a few points: 1. This is a growth inspirational + innocent love story. Deliberately or unintentionally, Yinglian is the second wife, which has made people very uncomfortable. If the author had wanted Yinglian and Daiyu to marry Chen Heng one day, this idea itself is very problematic. If you really write it, someone will probably scold you every day! ! ! Sister Lin, the most beautiful girl in the Red Chamber, actually married Yinglian on the same day to the same wife. Who are you looking down on? Only a junior high school student would do something so illogical. Yinglian is very good, but compared with Sister Lin, she has no brains and no common sense. If Mr. Cao knew that someone wrote like this, he would probably faint from anger. 2. The author of the last chapter "Meeting Yinglian" has written very restrainedly. If you like Yinglian and pity this girl, you can write a story about Yinglian's growth with Yinglian as the protagonist. Please be kind and don't get involved with Sister Lin. As for Bao Qin, it's better to let her marry someone else. It doesn't matter if Bao Qin is the protagonist, but she doesn't have to marry the male protagonist. Two equally outstanding women can coexist peacefully and share the same man, and can live in friendship and harmony under the same roof. This is something that only a stallion can think of, and it has nothing to do with being kind or not. 3. Everything about this article is good. The biggest flaw is that the male protagonist's emotional positioning towards Yinglian is wrong (the hero saves the beauty syndrome). The author's Yinglian (beautiful, cute and hard-working), Baoqin (the most beautiful, strongest, most independent and capable), Daiyu (Rong) She is beautiful but the worst among the three, and she is talented but stays at home). Although the author writes a lot about the interaction between Daiyu and the male protagonist, it seems that he deliberately did not write about the spontaneity and extremeness of Baoqin and Yinglian. I really don't understand why the author gives people this feeling. 4. Daiyu is the purest, most talented and most talked-about woman in the entire Red Mansion. You can choose not to write about her. If you do, she cannot be compared with any other woman. If the author wants to be bad, he should write about stallions, and if he doesn't want to be bad, he should write about single-mindedness. The writing style and intention are obviously very good, but the emotional arrangement has ruined Daiyu and the male protagonist a bit. The reason why I come back to read it is that I hope that the author will gradually correct his three views, take a clear stand, and trim everything to make it reasonable. Love and liking are completely different things. In the world of emotions, there is never a single bowl of water, only love and dislove. If the author's arrangement is to respect Daiyu (a confidant and lover) and pity Yinglian (love and care), it will be more reasonable, reasonable and comfortable. 5. It seems a bit harsh. I hope the author can understand the real expectations of readers! Be patient and listen to readers! The more you can write, the better!

Do you have to get involved in so many bad things before becoming an official? How much benefit can it bring to you? Can't you finish writing the imperial examination earlier and then come back to work? There is nonsense between the lines, and the more you write, the more clumsy it becomes. Even if you want to make a newspaper, you will have to pull out a lot of things. I really think you are the only one who can do the same🤮

If it were true, it would be too outrageous. . . Slapping the Lin family in the face like this, not to mention the attitude of the Lin and Jia families, let's just say that Lin Daiyu would be humiliated by this. With her temperament, she would definitely be so embarrassed and angry that she would vomit blood and die.

The writing is okay, but it's too clumsy. It has more than a hundred chapters and it's still a child's play, which is considered weird. It is sheer nonsense to control the livelihood of hundreds of thousands of refugees in their teens.

Daiyu and Xiangling must not be equal wives. Xiangling has only received help from Chen Heng since she was rescued from the traffickers. She plays the role of being helped. But Daiyu is different. Her father has been teaching Chen Heng since he was a child, leading him to expand his network and improve his knowledge. As a direct relative, Daiyu has inherited the affection of her father in this social interpersonal relationship, and her role is to be a helper. Forcing two people to be in the same position and become equal wives is not called equality or respect at the same time, it is called partiality. Moreover, you have brought a person with no talent and no status to the same status as someone else's daughter. If word spreads out, as the protagonist's teacher, leader, and second-grade official, Lin Ruhai will still lose face?

The book is beautiful! The book is beautiful! The book is beautiful! Say important things three times! I don't know how to describe this book, but it looks very comfortable. Tell me why I gave up the book First, the pace is too slow. I looked at it and reached 20% of the progress of this book. The protagonist is not yet 8 years old, and it was just over 3 months after the prefectural exam. I also like to read the daily life in the academy, but writing all the time is quite boring. Second, this is also a plot that I personally hate. I don't like to see the protagonist get involved too much in plots or intrigues or romance before he is underage (Aoki Zhuma is not included). The protagonist is only 8 years old, with no background, no reputation and no ability (compare him with Lin Ruhai's circle). Lin Ruhai's circle in the book should be considered a top group. None of the famous doctors they know have taken good care of his son's illness br>The protagonist just suddenly wanted to help, so he discovered that Xin's master was very powerful. Xin also introduced many people to his master's reputation who came to him for treatment, so he hid. I saw that the protagonist was about to come to the door and didn't want to watch it. I felt that compared to the plot of his second uncle, it was too deliberate. But this time the protagonist suddenly wants to find a famous doctor, and then suddenly finds out that Xin's master is a famous doctor, or he is hiding and has to go to his door to ask for one. The plot feels a bit vulgar. The third point is The Red Mansion. It would be fine if this book was fictional, but I found it in the Red Mansion category 😥. I wanted to watch the garden drama and the plot of the Jia family, but 20% of the way through, the protagonist has not left the academy yet! I am still an 8-year-old kid. According to the author's pace, I estimate that I can enter Beijing if I write 40% of the book? After the protagonist gets the No. 1 Exam and becomes an official, how much drama will be left in the Jia family, and how much drama will be left in the garden drama? I suddenly thought of this and didn't want to read it The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! Of course the book is a good book. I don't know how to describe it, but it feels very comfortable to read, a bit like reading "Three Idiots"

To be honest, I was amazed at the beginning of this book, but it started to go off track from the middle. The pacing seemed to have problems, the emotional line started to have problems, and the status and status were not taken into consideration. It was a pity. I had been reading it, but suddenly I felt something was wrong when I read the title at the end. I jumped and ordered a few chapters, which was a bit disappointing.

There is a big problem with Red Mansion. It is the age of the male protagonist. I really can't accept that Pig's Knuckle is mature enough to commit crimes when he is less than 10 years old. He becomes so powerful when he is less than 20 years old that everyone else is mentally retarded. It seems that you can change the dynasty before you reach 20 years old.

The characters are all taken for granted, whether they are people from the royal family, people from the court, people from the shopping mall, or people from the Jia family. The writing is too childish and self-righteous, as if a child is playing house. Moreover, Baoqin wrote so much ink that he didn't even accept it.

Where is the extra story, where is Baoqin, and where is Tanchun Xiangyun?

The writing is top notch. But she's still a bit pretentious. She's so good but she still has ten wives.

I feel that there are still many things that have not been explained clearly, such as Baoqin's whereabouts, the results of the implementation of policies, the fight for the throne, etc. The ending is still somewhat unsatisfactory.

When I came in, I found that it was finished. I am looking forward to the new book of Red Mansion.

The writing is really good. When will the author publish a new book?