Traveling through the world of cultivation with many immortal gates, Wang Cheng has been working hard since he awakened Su Hui at a young age, seeking the opportunity to enter the Tao.
Finally, at the age of twenty-four, he seized the opportunity to become a servant of the Xianmen and entered the Xianjia Mountain Gate to practice.
Unexpectedly, five years have passed by so quickly.
Seeing someone standing close to him, his energy was about to lose, but he never got a glimpse of the road to immortality.
He even fell into a great crisis because of an enemy he had offended.
Faced with such a situation.
Wangcheng originally thought that there would be no future in this life, and he might even die on the way to practice.
Unexpectedly, a sudden invitation from an old friend would bring about a turning point in his quest for immortality...
[Traditional Xianxia, no system, enter with caution!
Reader comments
[Book Review] Barely enough food and grass, a lot of poison
Seeing that there are 97 chapters today, I feel uncomfortable saying some things.
1. There are many novels similar to "Dao Zheng Zheng" on the Internet. Whether it is continental setting, sectarian skills or the golden finger of the protagonist, they seem to be unwilling to make innovations and almost copy them directly. This kind of golden three chapters is particularly damaging to the popularity of passersby.
2. In terms of the structure of the novel, the author does not have enough control. Being able to write about the protagonist is not considered a skill. Being able to write about supporting characters and advance the stories experienced by the supporting characters simultaneously with the protagonist is considered powerful.
3. The key to "Dao Zhengfeng" is the word "fight", and the object of the fight is chance, timing, and status. I can't see the word "struggle" in this book. Instead, there is a vague word "stealing", stealing opportunities and stealing reputations.
4. The text is pulpy! Even a writer who has graduated from elementary school knows that he only breaks into sentences and paragraphs after finishing a sentence. However, the author here can make a "this time" and a "however" independently into a paragraph, and even add double quotation marks to every sentence he speaks.
5. As for the wordy writing and repeated over and over again, everyone has criticized this issue many times, so I will only mention it.
The pace is too slow, and a handyman is still scheming. After spending so many chapters to get started, aren't you going to write it? It's so procrastinating that I don't even have the desire to read it.
After engaging in such a ridiculous competition, the result was only one name registered in the House of Commons. How could the few formal disciples who had appeared be worthy of it? What the hell 🙂
Immortal Toad 20,000 was discontinued as soon as it was released. The results of this book are not as good as Xian Chan. How long do I plan to write? .
There are too many plots and plots, and it is more like a historical novel. People who read this book regard it as a fairy tale, and it feels like it is not right.
Personally, I feel that the author writes too detailedly. It takes a long chapter to explain one thing, which is too slow.
Seeing this Lei Qingyue, if you want to see a movie without a female protagonist, you can take a detour.
It's already 360,000 words. Fairy Toad is also the 360,000-word eunuch. Let's see how long you can linger this time.
Another eunuch story, yo-yo
Small book review
Someone commented that the author is someone's third trumpet, which suddenly made me realize. Indeed, most novice authors who have just entered the industry do not have such writing style and the ability to construct plots and depict conflicts. This book contains more than 200,000 words. The focus of conflicts and characterization are truly exquisite and fascinating.
But success is also exquisite, failure is also exquisite. If you don't read the book with your heart down, you really won't find that this is a good book that is at least above the standard. Masters can write like this because readers themselves are more tolerant, more patient, and more able to accept the sophistication of a book. But if it is a new author, a casual author, or even a middle-level author who writes like this, he will lose a large number of impatient neutral readers in the early and mid-term.
，，，，，，，，， This is also the reason why many authors of good books have been delayed or even eunuchs due to unsatisfactory grades.
，，，，
Good guy, it's the same routine as the Immortal Toad, but it's even worse. You fall into a conspiracy right from the beginning.
There is too much nonsense to ramble on about one question. If you are a new author, you should spend more time refining the sentences and revise them after you have finished writing.
You don't even need to check the reincarnation of the author of Xian Chan at a glance. The writing style is just as clear as Ding Zhen at a glance. The performance of this book is far inferior to that of Xian Chan. It was probably mailed within two days. If the author had even half the persistence and perseverance of his protagonist, he wouldn't be like this.
Aunt Wang's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long. It can be written in one sentence, but it has to be a chapter. Now even the water gods don't have an author.
There was already a golden finger, but it turned out that there was a portable old man who had too many tricks.
The latest chapter is so disgusting that I want to scold you to death 😰 "Just accept a few women." Since you said it has no heroine, why do you still write such things to disgust people? Ignore people? My patience with you has reached its extreme, and the screenshot homepage has blocked the author and never seen him again. When will there be a blacklisting system at 7 o'clock🙏
You have to ask Qi Ling for everything you do. You are afraid of wolves before and tigers behind you. Do you have any opinions of your own? This is a writing that seeks stability. It seems that there is no passion at all. With this kind of character, can you reach the top?
Why do I feel like this book is so similar to "The Immortal Toad"?
This is someone's third author ID
The author's first two books won't be Fairy Pot and Fairy Toad 😰😰😰
At first glance, it looks like a book written by Meng Xin. It's not easy. Please take good care of it. Come on💪
Damn eunuch, what a waste of time
Cai, most people are so happy when they find an opportunity that they don't know what to do. Unexpectedly, it turns out that the opportunity is not so good. It's good to be cautious and skillful. Keep it up. It's a good book.
The protagonist took advantage of the opportunity. What should Director Fu do if he finds out? It should be okay. The main reason is that the protagonist originally wanted to tell him, but changed his mind when he heard that it was the Six Paths Black Snake species. There needs to be an explanation later, not to mention that there are people named Liang and the Chen family brothers and sisters who are asking about the protagonist's recent situation. Don't you find any clues?
It's wonderful. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.
[Book Review] Barely enough food and grass, a lot of poison
Seeing that there are 97 chapters today, I feel uncomfortable saying some things. 1. There are many novels similar to "Dao Zheng Zheng" on the Internet. Whether it is continental setting, sectarian skills or the golden finger of the protagonist, they seem to be unwilling to make innovations and almost copy them directly. This kind of golden three chapters is particularly damaging to the popularity of passersby. 2. In terms of the structure of the novel, the author does not have enough control. Being able to write about the protagonist is not considered a skill. Being able to write about supporting characters and advance the stories experienced by the supporting characters simultaneously with the protagonist is considered powerful. 3. The key to "Dao Zhengfeng" is the word "fight", and the object of the fight is chance, timing, and status. I can't see the word "struggle" in this book. Instead, there is a vague word "stealing", stealing opportunities and stealing reputations. 4. The text is pulpy! Even a writer who has graduated from elementary school knows that he only breaks into sentences and paragraphs after finishing a sentence. However, the author here can make a "this time" and a "however" independently into a paragraph, and even add double quotation marks to every sentence he speaks. 5. As for the wordy writing and repeated over and over again, everyone has criticized this issue many times, so I will only mention it.
The pace is too slow, and a handyman is still scheming. After spending so many chapters to get started, aren't you going to write it? It's so procrastinating that I don't even have the desire to read it.
After engaging in such a ridiculous competition, the result was only one name registered in the House of Commons. How could the few formal disciples who had appeared be worthy of it? What the hell 🙂
Immortal Toad 20,000 was discontinued as soon as it was released. The results of this book are not as good as Xian Chan. How long do I plan to write? .
There are too many plots and plots, and it is more like a historical novel. People who read this book regard it as a fairy tale, and it feels like it is not right.
Personally, I feel that the author writes too detailedly. It takes a long chapter to explain one thing, which is too slow.
Seeing this Lei Qingyue, if you want to see a movie without a female protagonist, you can take a detour.
It's already 360,000 words. Fairy Toad is also the 360,000-word eunuch. Let's see how long you can linger this time.
Another eunuch story, yo-yo
Small book review
Someone commented that the author is someone's third trumpet, which suddenly made me realize. Indeed, most novice authors who have just entered the industry do not have such writing style and the ability to construct plots and depict conflicts. This book contains more than 200,000 words. The focus of conflicts and characterization are truly exquisite and fascinating. But success is also exquisite, failure is also exquisite. If you don't read the book with your heart down, you really won't find that this is a good book that is at least above the standard. Masters can write like this because readers themselves are more tolerant, more patient, and more able to accept the sophistication of a book. But if it is a new author, a casual author, or even a middle-level author who writes like this, he will lose a large number of impatient neutral readers in the early and mid-term. ，，，，，，，，， This is also the reason why many authors of good books have been delayed or even eunuchs due to unsatisfactory grades. ，，，，
Good guy, it's the same routine as the Immortal Toad, but it's even worse. You fall into a conspiracy right from the beginning.
There is too much nonsense to ramble on about one question. If you are a new author, you should spend more time refining the sentences and revise them after you have finished writing.
You don't even need to check the reincarnation of the author of Xian Chan at a glance. The writing style is just as clear as Ding Zhen at a glance. The performance of this book is far inferior to that of Xian Chan. It was probably mailed within two days. If the author had even half the persistence and perseverance of his protagonist, he wouldn't be like this.
Aunt Wang's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long. It can be written in one sentence, but it has to be a chapter. Now even the water gods don't have an author.
There was already a golden finger, but it turned out that there was a portable old man who had too many tricks.
The latest chapter is so disgusting that I want to scold you to death 😰 "Just accept a few women." Since you said it has no heroine, why do you still write such things to disgust people? Ignore people? My patience with you has reached its extreme, and the screenshot homepage has blocked the author and never seen him again. When will there be a blacklisting system at 7 o'clock🙏
You have to ask Qi Ling for everything you do. You are afraid of wolves before and tigers behind you. Do you have any opinions of your own? This is a writing that seeks stability. It seems that there is no passion at all. With this kind of character, can you reach the top?
Why do I feel like this book is so similar to "The Immortal Toad"?
This is someone's third author ID
The author's first two books won't be Fairy Pot and Fairy Toad 😰😰😰
At first glance, it looks like a book written by Meng Xin. It's not easy. Please take good care of it. Come on💪
Damn eunuch, what a waste of time
Cai, most people are so happy when they find an opportunity that they don't know what to do. Unexpectedly, it turns out that the opportunity is not so good. It's good to be cautious and skillful. Keep it up. It's a good book.
The protagonist took advantage of the opportunity. What should Director Fu do if he finds out? It should be okay. The main reason is that the protagonist originally wanted to tell him, but changed his mind when he heard that it was the Six Paths Black Snake species. There needs to be an explanation later, not to mention that there are people named Liang and the Chen family brothers and sisters who are asking about the protagonist's recent situation. Don't you find any clues?
It's wonderful. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.