
Douluo: Dragon Ball Returns, I Picked up Qian Renxue at the Beginning
斗罗:龙珠归来,开局捡到千仞雪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 484k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The protagonist of this novel is stupid and brainless. What was written in the first three chapters? Qian Renxue likes the protagonist inexplicably (a life-saving grace? This is a routine from MD many years ago). Others inexplicably think that the protagonist is a waste (another SZ routine from many years ago). She doesn't care about strangers without showing off, but she insists on making her own people think she is a farmer. . . A feeling from the Dragon King novel decades ago came over the scene.
But this is because I can't stand Tang San, but I can't be like other fan fictions where I directly compete with him for opportunities when he was a child. This is too much. It just so happens that he is still relatively interesting during his promotion to the God Realm. Take your time and think about your ideas. Don't mess with the battle. Just collapse some of the protagonists. The cool text is to let the protagonist's combat capabilities collapse and then match the character. The characters can just exclaim. My suggestion is to write about Gu Liena or Beast Emperor Tian Tian. The main character's combat power is so broken. It shouldn't be a small problem to help Qian Renxue recover his divine position Then he directly grabs Tang San's neck and breaks into the divine world. It's not impossible, but there is a reason for everything This book is still very good, but the update is too slow
No matter how high the combat power is, it is useless. You know that others are deliberately looking for trouble, but you still haven't completely solved it. As a warrior in the Dragon Ball world, who has not experienced a long fight. Only the war in the universe can have tens of millions of levels of combat power. People with such high combat power, who is not a decisive person in killing (except Kakarot)
The resurrection combat power is relatively strong. What do you think about people who died recently? Isn't Bibi Dong the strongest person who died recently? Or Qian Daoliu, Jin Crocodile, or even Tang Chen, Bo Saixi, how could it not be Ghost Douluo's turn?
If you are still licking dogs for more than a hundred years, then you are not a clown.
The subject matter is good, but I'll let you write it down later.
If not, I've seen the original version and let you fool me.
It seems that if you get angry on Kuaishou, I can't save you, Shina
The subject matter may be good, but the writing style is not good.
Snatch Xiao Wu and give birth to monkeys for ghosts, Zhu Zhuqing for chrysanthemums, Guan Ning Rongrong for Qian Daoliu
In Dragon Ball, the combat power of ordinary earthlings is 5, but the level 68 Soul Emperor has a combat power of 2.5?
In terms of word count, you are really strong
It's just fan fiction, just read it
Although it is a cool article but it lacks some imagination It's still not enjoyable enough Although the chapter written says that Tang San controls the plane in the God Realm, there is a time difference between the God Realm and the Douluo Continent Since it is a cool article, let him feel more comfortable. Here are some suggestions Also, the writing is too slow, you should refer to some fan novels or some invincible cool articles The progress is not very fast. New books, you haven't published a new one for six or seven hours, you have to keep up with the update speed
Is the protagonist the legacy of Wei Wu? After all, snow is a golden liquid.
The 60,000-word chapter has been on the shelves since the beginning, but it feels like the whole book only has 500,000 words (dry stuff). The number of water words, the plot, and the collapse of combat power are all normal.
After waiting for a day, three articles were published Imagination is still not rich enough Let's raise it first