The Red Mansion Begins with a Concubine

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This book is really one of the best among Red Mansions fans. The writing and stories are good. Several popular serials of Red Mansions are not as good as this one. But the author likes to leave foreshadowing too much. Almost all the villains are defeated or killed, and then come back later; and Li Zicheng has been hinting that the Jia family will have big troubles in the future because of him since he appeared, but he ended up enjoying his life as a pirate in the south. Although everything the author wrote is reasonable and the plot is very attractive, it is really not refreshing enough. In addition, the plot of Jiangnan has gone through ups and downs many times. It is true that history cannot be that simple, but if the novel is too entangled with such reality, it is still a serial novel, which is really dissuaded. This may be one of the reasons why this book is so good but not popular. Another reason why it is not popular may be that most Red Mansions fan fiction has multiple female protagonists, but this book has naturally put some Jin Chai on the opposite side, and coupled with a large number of plots that have nothing to do with the Jia family, it is difficult for book friends of Red Mansions fandom to resonate.

There are nearly 300 chapters and you don't even have the honor of being a civil servant. What are you doing here? You're just pretending to be cool, putting out fires, and so on, showing off your abilities. The emotional line is also a mess. Apart from receiving a flat income, there is nothing else. Sister Lin has not decided yet. As for Baochai, let alone Baochai, you better stop writing and find a class quickly. It's not that I have never seen people who write Red Mansions imperial examination essays. First This is the first time I have seen such a slow progress. The scholar next door to the Red Mansion has married two people and they are all working as officials. You are still white. Although the heroine does not have Baochai, her writing is better than yours. Not to mention you, who is always aggrieved all the way. It's not like I haven't read other bastard novels.

There is no need to write about Jia Huan's treatment in such a miserable way. Even if Wang Xifeng had some courage, he would not dare to give Jia Huan bad food. Speed ​​up and write the imperial examination, get up and be awesome

The Nine Times Nine of Red Mansion all uses the concubine as the main character. I really don't understand. Can you writers not be able to tell the difference between the legitimate son and the concubine? Otherwise, in ancient times, the son of a concubine, no matter how capable he was, was not as capable as the legitimate son. Guan family inheritance is stable.

I don't understand why he is so targeted at Jia Huan. As a concubine, what can he argue with Baoyu? Although Baoyu is the legitimate son, the title of Rongguo Mansion has nothing to do with Baoyu and Baoyu. It is impossible for him to seize the title. The rest is nothing but property and the like. But how old is the protagonist? Is it necessary to target him? In ancient times, the premature death rate was commonplace.

Ye Chen travels through Douluo, summons Payne's Six Paths at the beginning, beats the Shrek Seven Monsters, establishes the Xiao organization in Douluo, recruits Zhu Zhuqing, Hu Liena, Xie Yue, and Qian Renxue to join the Xiao organization, destroys the Tang Sect, and kills Yu Xiaogang. Book title: The Beginning of Douluo Summons the Six Paths of Pain, just click in to read it.

Written by Seven Years Old and put on shelves. . . No wonder no one is watching! ! Brother, don't you know how old seven is? Kindergarten is a large class, up to first grade. If it doesn't work, you can squat at the door of a kindergarten and take a look.

Good guy, this is the first time I've seen a time traveler who couldn't protect his family and sacrificed his own mother to heaven.

I'm really speechless. The character creation is a mess. You have to know that the protagonist is not only a graduate student in the new century, but also knows some situations in the world of Red Mansions (such as Sister Feng's loan sharking, etc.). He has been teased several times, and even his mother Zhao Niang died because of it! The author's explanation for this is that the protagonist is trapped by "filial piety", so why can't Wang Xiang and Min Ziqian learn from it? Not only can it perfectly solve the problem of "unfilial piety", but it can also turn the other party into "unkind"! What's more, you have external forces like the Seventh Prince and King Beijing! There is also the former mountain chief of Diecui Academy. This mountain chief admires the protagonist very much. Baba went to the clan school and chatted for a long time with Jia Dairu, who was only a boy, just to poach him. You must know that this Academy Chief was a Jinshi, and he was also a great Confucian who was full of economics! "Every provincial examination or even the general examination will always have students who win the exams," the academy said. I didn't dare to imagine how big the connections and energy of this academy were. The protagonist even gave up on entering the academy. I really wanted to call him a fool! "Shen Sheng died inside, and Chong Er was safe outside." Even if he couldn't directly confront Mrs. Wang, Wang Xifeng and others, wouldn't he temporarily escape and wait for the opportunity? There is a saying "I am not strong yet, I will change when I am strong"! Isn't it a good way to enroll in an academy? Besides, Mrs. Wang wants to add "unfilial" to you. As long as the mountain leader says "Jia Huan is filial" to you, who dares to say that the protagonist is unfilial? You must know that not everyone can be called a "Great Confucian". These "Great Confucians" are knowledgeable and directly control the interpretation of classics. They not only control "public opinion", but also have strong connections and high social status. In some dynasties, even the emperor had to make concessions to them. If they say your character is corrupt, then you will die directly from society; if they say you have a noble character, then you are a moral model, and Mrs. Wang cannot attach the label of "unfilial piety" to you. The protagonist can also start from Jia Lian to manipulate Wang Xifeng (to use usury, Wang Xifeng must be directly crucified, instead of not being crucified like in the book). The protagonist in the book is like this. Have you never heard of Wu Zetian killing her daughter in "New Book of Tang"? What kind of archeology graduate student is that? Find a woman to seduce Jia Lian (you can even arrange for someone who is already pregnant) and then she becomes pregnant, and then use some means to hint that she is pregnant with a boy (such as eating more sour food, women dreaming about it, buying doctors, etc.), And then secretly reveal it to Wang Xifeng, and then the child is gone (of course it can be done by Sister Feng or not, as long as everyone is suspicious, because she can do it with her methods). Jia Lian didn't have a son. Now that he finally had a "son", Wang Xifeng killed him. In addition, he was not allowed to take concubines to other women, and his methods were ruthless and shocking. The protagonist could even help spread the word. In addition to usury, etc., Wang Xifeng's fate was to be divorced directly. Be despicable and find someone with "flower-willow disease" to seduce Jia Lian. Jia Lian then passes it on to Sister Feng and so on (Jia Lian covets Ping'er around the protagonist, and neither of them is a good person). Anyway, there are many methods, so I won't go into them because of the limited text. I really don't understand what the author is thinking. This protagonist can be said to be a complete mess. Not only can he not protect himself, but he is constantly being lectured and set rules. His food is only "leftovers", his butt is slapped several times in vain, and he also killed his own mother, Aunt Zhao. I feel really aggrieved when I see this.

The progress is too slow. You will know what is written just by reading the title. From now on, you only need to read the title and not the content. You have to add something else. Otherwise, who will subscribe to the shelves?

I wrote more than 200 chapters without even avenging my mother. What a beast.

What is it written about? It's a hammer here and there, and the plot is in pieces.

There are so many Red Mansions fanfics, and the one you wrote about Jia Huan is the most useless.

Who allows a concubine to observe mourning for his aunt for three years? Don't you know who your aunt is? Not respecting etiquette and law, but still dreaming of entering an official career. Even if you are a high school Jinshi, as long as someone reports it (literati look down on you, there are many red-eyed patients), you can be expelled.

In my opinion, the first column in the Red Mansions is undoubtedly The Red Mansions. The first 400 chapters are all top-notch in terms of plot and writing. The section on economics and governance is a classic, but the second half is too poor in conception and always limited to erotic absurdity. Secondly, the two books with the best writing and diction should be Xiaomeng of Red Mansions and Huacai of Red Mansions. Every word and line of words and sentences has its own taste. Unfortunately, the idea is too superficial, and it is all about enjoying the beauty of the world, which is absurd. The gap between plot and writing skills is cloudy, and the gold and jade expressions are lost in it. What a pity. Most of the novels in Red Mansions contain harems. One or two wives and concubines and two or three beautiful maids are very good, but blind harems are disgusting.

After reading so many chapters, I feel that the protagonist has been feeling angry and wronged. After reading the novel, not only did I not feel relieved, I felt even worse. In the first part, I wrote about trying to find a way to escape from the Jia family, and in the second part, I wrote about trying to keep the Jia family. I don't understand what the author is thinking.

I don't want any original princess/princess heroine. . . This is annoying when I watch Red Mansions. . .

The overall impression is good now, but I hope Lin Daiyu is not the first heroine (personal opinion)

It is difficult for Jia Huan to make a comeback. Mrs. Wang will not allow a concubine to steal Baoyu's limelight. Jia Huan is a waste. Mrs. Wang is willing to pretend to be a loving mother, and she dares to play with Jia Huan if she dares to show off. Reading: Jia Huan must be good at reading. All he needs to do is let him copy Buddhist scriptures every day so that he has no time to study. Imperial Examination: If you just say you are unfilial, everything will be ruined. Practice martial arts: Skip food and become paralyzed before you become a master. Business: The concubine is underage, all money belongs to the family, glass soap and everything can be confiscated reasonably and legally. Being a soldier: Wang Ziteng happened to be in the army, so it was easier to kill people. Enter the Palace: Even if you are cruel enough to stab you in the crotch and become a eunuch, I will kill you if you feel embarrassed. The bastards of other families can survive until the legitimate son becomes famous, and then take the imperial examination; they can survive until the family is separated, and then take the imperial examination or start a business. The Jia family cannot do that. If the ending of Cao Xueqin's version were to happen, Jia Baoyu would not be able to do the scientific examination even if the Jia family was ransacked. After the house was confiscated, Jia Huan was not qualified to refer to it.

What a group of people. Are you afraid of sending a daughter to a harem to become an actress in a theater? ? In the early stage, when everyone's temperament was well understood and no plan was made, all kinds of losses were suffered and even the original owner's biological mother was written to death. In the early stage, the daughter was given away and the daughter was missed.

I just want to see the pig trotters kill all the Jia family, no one is good,

The writing is stinky and long, the plot should be more exciting than less exciting, it should be deep but not deep, and it tastes like chewing wax.

I have read all the chapters so far. After reading it, I feel that the author has a good understanding of Red Mansions and has his own thoughts. After adding his own background and characters, he has completed a lot of the plot. But it is a pity that the plot of power and wit is not satisfactory. When I was in Rongguo Mansion, almost every time I was plotted by Wang's aunt and nephew, I relied on external forces to break the situation. Either King Beijing came, or the seventh prince was beaten. The protagonist did too little on his own initiative. It would be awkward to write too many plots of forced coincidences. In addition, the plot of pirates and Japanese pirates seems a bit out of place and deviates too far from the original work.

I first read this book in 2023 or 24. With this achievement, the author was able to finish the book, and his character is also outstanding 🙂

Quite awkward. He is still a concubine, with Mrs. Wang, Wang Xifeng, your father, Jia Mu, and evil slaves below. The most important thing is that you are only 7 years old, brother. If you are 7 years old, you are still a junior high school student if you are 11 or 12 years old. If you don't know the concept of 7 years old, let me tell you, you are still at the age where you can wet the bed. You write beauty poems there, sell sketches on the street, go out to do business with Tieniu, rescue Sister Lin in the house, pay attention to Sister Lin 😰, fight against the two kings, steal the money from the whole family to build a platform for Baoyu, and accept Ping'er as a maid.

The author, please speed up the time to let the children pass, otherwise the sense of substitution will be too weak.

Chapter 645 is so poisonous that I don't want to read the rest of it. No matter what he writes, I don't want to read it.

The change in the character's image at the beginning is too sudden, especially after being seriously injured, which suddenly makes everyone feel that the protagonist is different from before. This will only lead to one consequence. Ask the Taoist monks to take turns to exorcise evil spirits and chant sutras until the original image is restored. Otherwise, there was also a saying at that time that the ghost would seize the body and hit the guest. The image can be changed little by little, but it cannot become outrageous all at once.