I Am a Cultivator, I Have a World of Demons and Martial Arts

It seems that there are a lot of people writing about this subject. It tests the author's writing skills. Wen Chao Gong also writes about the same subject. Come on, but a big taboo in this kind of novels with themes of fairy tales and martial arts is not to be childish. This does not mean everyone, but there must be a lot of readers who can't stand it. I wish the author to reach a higher level.

This is the mortal stream. The protagonist just needs to practice well. There is no need to be a chivalrous person in another world. It is a bit embarrassing to hear how the scholar brags about himself.

Old thief, you finally published a book. I have been waiting for you for several months. Although the ending of the last book was a bit rushed, at least it didn't cause stomachache. I hope you can make a breakthrough with this book.

I can only say that the writing is not as good as the previous one, but I can't say that it is bad. Just when the protagonist needs something, a villain appears immediately, and there happens to be someone who is being bullied, which makes the protagonist taller and kinder. The writing is too natural and gives people an awkward feeling. The story is still good, but it feels very awkward when I look at it. I can't say what's wrong, and it's a bit uncomfortable.

Don't be jijiwaiwai when fighting. Use sneak attacks if you can. Jijiwaiwai has no character and wants to be a villain who can't survive two episodes.

It's imitative, has no spirit and is boring.

Suggestions to authors, be bold. The world of martial arts training is the home front, where the materials are produced. The martial arts world must be regained by using the highly powerful "talisman? Elixir" from the world of immortality. But it seems that the protagonist's mentality is not good now. Moreover, the author's writing style deliberately downplays the world of immortality and water literature. What a pity. You can obviously go to Tsinghua University by cheating, but you want to go to a technical school for the college entrance examination. Come on.

It imitates Wenchao and imitates four different things. The protagonist's outlook is not like that of a normal young man in society. Just like your junior high school kids. I am still imagining the beauty of society, just like I am in campus society. After traveling through the world of immortality on the island, my three views have not changed yet. How did I survive? I want to ask. I have no choice but to do it myself. I took three secret books, but my eyesight refused to accept them and I asked others to accept them. Why not arrange for your own people to manage it and make it easier for you? Instead of having all the rights to serve yourself, let others lay eggs. I don't even understand that you have a spell that can change your mind, and you can completely arrange it for an ordinary person. Management talents.

If you want to steal Wen Chaogong's luck, you still have to have some skills.

Not to mention that there seem to be quite a few books of this type nowadays. Who is the leader? Is it a copycat?

Please read, please read...

What's going on? Nine spiritual stones were a huge amount of money at the beginning, but later I took out 30 spiritual stones to buy a storage bag for no reason. This is totally wrong.

Picking up people's wisdom😤😤😤 and using your own brain to create something original is the way out.

Come on! ! !

Didn't the author mention a new book in the group?

Little, little, little, little rushes into the street, good people live a safe life

Is this practicing writing? Some kill time.

Come on! ! !

All I can say is, wish you success.

The writing is okay, there are some things and details, but it's just out of my head.

I just picked this up today. I read it in one sitting and stopped writing like this.

Suddenly I cut it, it was well written

Good writing, keep up the good work and copy the text 🙂

The author learns from literary copywriting and writes all his ideas into copies. If the effect is good, he will continue writing. If the effect is not good, he will change the map quickly.