The Douluo Continent Filled with Heroic Spirits

Pure self-pleasure, lots of typos, character design OOC, incorrect settings, a thimble at a glance, judged to be a waste of time

Author, you should let the Lion King abolish the martial souls of Douluo people with the slogan of purifying mankind and protecting human nature. After all, those who devour beasts of human nature and eat beast souls will obviously face greater threats to human nature. Douluo is no longer popular in plots.

Why does this book feel like a prince?

Damn, when I saw the first one, I went out and looked at it. If the title of the book wasn't Wang Gonggong, it would be better if it was Wang Gonggong. This book is 99% cool.

I don't know why, I just think the main character is a bit redundant.

The writing style of the self-titled article is average, but if you can catch the radio wave, it will be very enjoyable to read, but it is just average when it comes to the protagonist. I originally read this book as a group portrait of the battle of heroes, but when I was enjoying it, suddenly an unknown person came to eat or go to school. It feels like there is absolutely no need to exist, and deleting the protagonist and only writing about the battle of heroes has no impact at all.

What's wrong with having a protagonist? It would be better if the protagonist is gone, it is a waste of time, this is poisonous😅

The setting of this book is quite interesting, but the content is too self-indulgent. The author can read Wang Gonggong's books. Although they are all eunuchs, they are really well written. It is not like this book to write two paragraphs and insert some narration or black Douluo. I want to read these. Isn't it better to just read the comment area?

This introduction couldn't be the trumpet account opened by that eunuch Wang Situ, right?

Still quite speechless, there were four or five mocking posts. Don't be so watery, okay? I saw the taunt and skipped right to the next chapter. As a result, the beginning of the next chapter is still sarcastic. This one is the same as the previous one. Especially the ones that mocked Tang San, there were more than four or five in the previous book.

If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's really poisonous.

The protagonist is better off being the mastermind behind the scenes. A protagonist with such little plot is really useless.

To be honest, the protagonist can really be eliminated, or the mastermind behind the scenes can be better portrayed, otherwise the plot will be really weird. The Lion King is starting to be a bit weird. Later, when you open a school, you will just open a harem for yourself. It is not as good as sitting on a mountain and watching tigers fight.

Does this count as giving novels to girls? The protagonist summons a bunch of men and then sends them to the heroines to become white moonlight. What kind of cuckold fetish is this?

I really think it would be better if you were not the main character, but if you were, it would be annoying.

The writing style is too immature, with few words and many typos. The ideas are good but there is no outline. Summary, test the waters, not long enough

The appearance of the protagonist is a big failure. If there were only a few heroic spirits, I think it would be easier to write. The protagonist's appearance is very sudden, and the author doesn't know how to write it. To be honest, it would be better to rewrite it, or even not write the protagonist. Instead, slowly write about each heroic spirit growing up with others according to your own ideas, write them against each other, and finally choose a pair or a group to become the protagonist. There is no need to add the Holy Grail or something. I have never watched anime, but I think it would be too strange if you add too many very powerful characters into it. What you write in the early stage is the growth of each heroic spirit and other people, and then suddenly a protagonist comes to a certain city, and then continues to write about growth, and suddenly a super academy appears, and you still want to write about the behind-the-scenes flow. It is very uncoordinated and you don't have the strength to write it.

I think the author should read the novels of Wang Sikong and Wang Gonggong. Although there are many flaws, the idea is still ok. You can play invincible or play casually with little pressure. Just don't think of him in emotional dramas. Of course, the most important thing is not to get promoted like the prince.

To be honest, the gap between Douluo and Fate is just like that between NPC and player. There is no comparison.

Douluo: After being transformed into Su Yuntao, His Majesty the Pope, you don't want to fall short of your many years of planning!

A hook stone🤭

What GB thing? Noble Phantasm chanting? Real tmnt article

Recommended book: Douluo: I, the King of Two Gods, beat Tang San violently

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King