Douluo: Save the Goddess, Slap Tang San in the Face at the Beginning

Hidden weapons cannot be used in the soul master competition, and Tang San's strength has been reduced by more than half. The original work can defeat Feng Xiaotian only because Feng Xiaotian's iron head is hard-hitting and Luan Splitting Wind, otherwise Tang San can be killed by a kite.

After reading a few chapters of Diaosi's writing, I feel suffocated by Diaosi's breath, and the author's sentences are unclear, especially Huo Wu! Leave!

Two questions. The fourth soul skill is missing from the list (it seems to be condensing a wolf-head-shaped shock wave) in the list. The martial soul is not Bibi Dong Qian Renxue or something like that. It's too second-rate.

Some places are too wordy, there is no need to write out everyone

You are really good at water. You live in the sea, right? A bunch of people said with the same expression.

What the hell is this written about? Is it a diaosi meaning, obscenity, or literary style?

I'm so speechless. I just can't stand it after watching two of them. It's so poisonous.

It would be nice if the main character wasn't named Feng Xiaotian. It feels weird. The main thing is

The reason for this is because I finished reading the book I was chasing, and then I searched for the latest releases, and I didn't want to read the ones with fewer words. I directly searched for 300,000 to 500,000 words before I found this book. But after reading this for a while, I felt that I couldn't stand it at all. The first thing is the background of the story. You haven't told me the background of this story clearly. How about you draw a picture and tell me who the protagonist is? How did you travel through time? Let me introduce. And you, from the beginning of the first picture, I can't understand what you're writing at all, and what you wrote after that is so innocent and fucking a big dick, holy shit, if you want to write an invincible article, just mark it as an invincible article. You can directly increase your soul power by ten and two martial arts spirits. Not to mention this, there is no one before or after, and only Huo Yuhao, who is fighting for two, can compare with you, and you That action and that fighting scene, what you wrote is really fucking bad. What kind of thing are you describing? And about your symbols, I fucking doubt you haven't graduated from elementary school. Your punctuation marks are really messed up. I don't know how you managed to write such 300,000 words. It's okay for you to want to open a harem, but the key is whether you can use your brain to open a harem? If you want to turn defeat into victory, there's no problem in defeating Tang San. The key is that you have to be reasonable. I read novels, I read cool articles, at least write them down in my mind, what the hell are you reading while holding me in your arms? What I read is a novel, not a hot-blooded anime. Come on, let's fuck the protagonist. My bonded mother will instantly explode and kill the villain in one gulp. I'll fuck you about whatever your mother wrote😠

The powerful Water King is so terrifying. . It could be finished in 40 chapters, but he insisted on writing more than 100 chapters. I can't stand the fucking dancing.