The Man Behind the Scenes: I Rewrote the World

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I have been watching behind-the-scenes videos for several years, and I would like to give you an opinion. Each of your stories has too strong a sense of fragmentation. The first ten chapters tell one story, and after ten chapters it immediately jumps to another story, and the story is rarely mentioned again. Then this story is equivalent to a short film. The sense of fragmentation is too strong just by linking one or two characters.

I feel that the introduction is too dissuasive. The supporting characters in the introduction are very disconnected from readers who have not read the book. It is easy to dissuade some people. I suggest you modify it. (If you don't participate in the quarrel, you are right if you say you are right)

To be honest, the author's three golden chapters are very poorly written. The character of the protagonist has not been established at all. He is pretending to be established and then writes about how he cares about human life. However, he was directly included in the first chapter without his consent. If the author wants to make money, he should actually pay attention to the fact that this is writing a novel, not a novel. For real characters, when writing novels, the personality of the characters should be clear, rather than the mixed personalities of people in reality. For example, if you want to write about a good person, you should directly say that he is a good person and keep writing about him as a good person. When writing about a bad person, you should make him completely bad. If you want to write a mixed character, you have to say from the beginning that he is a capricious character, like the protagonist. In fact, at the beginning, he can completely use the model in the book "Reincarnation Paradise" to find dying people to solve all problems. In fact, these days, there is no such thing as the kind of protagonist who always confronts Goldfinger. Don't challenge that kind of writing. That kind of writing is a test of the author's writing skills. However, using the model of "Reincarnation Paradise" will be more effective. It consumes energy points, but it establishes that the protagonist is a person who cares about human life, and if you go to save the woman later, you still have to spend more energy points. The author should focus on writing about what he is good at, rather than trying to write about everything. It is easy to write mixed, you are like the author of Samsara Paradise. The best thing he writes is the fighting scenes and the background setting. He focuses on these two, but in the real world I just mentioned it in one stroke and the protagonist can't fight against Goldfinger, so when writing about Samsara Paradise, I always find people who are already dead, and then ask people. In this way, the paradise does not owe the contractors, and it can be anything. Moreover, its economic system has actually collapsed, but it is written in a vague way, so not many people care, so the author should find the writing method that he is best at, and to be honest, you can Just copy what others say and write it that way. After all, you are constructing stories one by one. It is the same as a contractor performing tasks one by one. You don't necessarily need to use space. You can use things like gods and apostles. Of course, I am not teaching the author to do things. I think the setting of this book is very good, so I say this. After all, I still type so many words. Of course, if you don't care, forget it.

The plot started to decline after A Nightmare on Elm Street, and it got even worse in Japan. I found that the author is still suitable for writing local strange stories. The other inconsistencies are a bit strong.

It's too complicated. Some people say it's like a unit drama. I feel okay about that, but I feel it's more like a pot of hodgepodge. Everything is added to it, including mythology, folk supernatural beings, fairy tales, history, animation, games... There must be some people who don't like some elements in it. It's like a pot of soup that I thought tasted good but vegetables that I didn't like, and I felt that the whole pot had a disgusting smell.

Let's complain about the title of the book. I "re-wrote it" or "I re-edited it." What the hell does "I re-write it" mean? I don't understand the language.

There are only three people in this department? Two of them were specially summoned! Are you kidding me? ? ?

After reading it for so long, I evaluated it and found that it is obviously the best written behind the scenes at Qidian. Although most of the other results are better than the author's and more people read it than the author, it is indeed the best written. Except for the connection between various copies, there is no progress at all. The reason why it is not as good as those books is actually very simple, it is not just pretentious. Good behind-the-scenes writing skills either have a sufficient understanding of folklore and some occult knowledge, or they are constantly pretentious, or their writing is exquisite Obviously this author has no one 😆, the plot writing style is obviously a novice without any depth, and the understanding of mythology is limited to the most common settings in online articles. Because of the author's personality, the protagonist does not like to show off.

I don't know if anyone likes this kind of Madonna protagonist

This kind of corpse fraud usually doesn't last too long. People are exhausted and ideas are broken. It is usually difficult for the author to continue writing. It is estimated that it won't be long before there will be a second eunuch 😰

I thought the first 100 chapters of this book were quite interesting, but then I felt something was wrong. The author's writing was like a dragonfly dabbling in the water. After a few clicks, it ended here. It didn't go in depth, so it was natural to start another series. Then I looked at the catalog curiously, Peach Blossom Land, Fairy Tales, Ghosts, Resident Evil, Don't Starve, Cyberpunk, Hogwarts, The Fourth Natural Disaster, Yellow Turbans, Death... Wait, holy shit, this... What is this... Which one is the main theme in the main world? Coupled with the previous Western religion and fantasy cultivation... The author, did you write the behind-the-scenes flow as an infinite flow? But Infinite Streaming doesn't dare to play like this. Wouldn't you, the writer, be the first to mess up? I'm confused when I look at it ヽ(*ﾟｰﾟ*)ﾉ

The writing is absolutely fine, but as I continued writing, I went abroad to write, and my interest was instantly halved. I didn't even understand the copy here, so I opened copies everywhere. . .

It looks great, but there are a few problems. First, the introduction is too discouraging. This introduction is a template article introduction of the mastermind behind the scenes, but what you wrote is not a template article. Second, each short story is too independent, which leads to a strong sense of fragmentation after reading one story and reading the next. Third, the description of the protagonist's character is too rigid. Although you seem to express that the protagonist is kind, overemphasis makes the protagonist's character a bit annoying. After all, you have been emphasizing kindness despite how many people died in one incident.

To be honest, there are too many stitches! The writing is okay and the subject matter is pretty good I want to sew all the stories together, which leads to a lot of stories that are stitched together for the sake of stitching without making it clear at all It's really unnecessary

I was so confused. What does the protagonist want to do? The end of the world, and then create some ghosts to let people adapt in advance?

Although I understand that the story needs a villain to appear, I really hope that Hannibal will die as soon as possible. And what is the protagonist's attitude towards human beings or previous creatures on the earth? As a being who can watch the development of the story from a God's perspective, why does he still allow Hannibal to exist? Isn't it because he has no idea of ​​the harm caused by him gaining supernatural powers? The previous attitude towards Yang Ling felt that the protagonist was still a kind person and would rarely let others die because of his own reasons. But now because of the protagonist, Hannibal has acquired supernatural powers and caused greater casualties. How can this be calculated? The protagonist must bear some responsibility for the death of these people.                                                                                                                                                               ing or else we have to create a very kind person. Anyway, I feel that the current portrayal of the protagonist is not likable.

It started to get messy from the back, it was just stitched, but the plot was not arranged well, and there was a strong sense of fragmentation.

... After reading Chapter 40+, my current feeling is that a unified government is only a unified concept. The people themselves are still in the mindset that even if hundreds of thousands of people from foreign countries (districts) die, it will not affect my work tomorrow. Or should it be said that the consciousness is not high enough?

I bought the new chapter for free just to complain about the title of the book. What the hell am I rewriting?

Is the mastermind behind Wei Guangzheng still a mastermind?

There are too many stitches and it feels messy. What is the main thread?

Is the author on vacation? Or have you finished the college entrance examination?

Basically, it's mainly Western. It's different from what I thought. It gets more chaotic as you go to the back.

Finished spreading flowers! I almost thought I was going to read another eunuch novel, but I didn't expect it to end badly, but it's not a bad ending. Even the author's closing remarks are too long. The early plot of the novel is very interesting, especially the development of the plot in the setting, but the middle plot is a bit unsatisfactory. The plot tends to be boring, but the layout and the portrayal of the supporting characters are not bad. I didn't like the later plot. There were too many pitfalls in the grand setting background of the early plot🕳️🕳️🕳️🕳️, and I didn't feel that the future of the protagonist was promising, so it felt like it was just a corner, which was a pity. I hope the author's next novel won't disappoint people too much.

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As the title says, let's see if we can be resurrected this time instead of just breathing.

There has been no update or announcement for three days. Is this because the eunuch is the eunuch or the author has gone home for the New Year and stopped updating 🤫

This book just takes a chance and gets away with it😒😒

When will the new book be released? Where are the new books? What's it called?