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I suggest you revise it at the beginning. Does the author not understand the law? The protagonist was poisoned and rendered mute. The police investigation included surveillance and fingerprints, and he could be directly convicted. It was useless to go abroad. He was directly extradited internationally. Countries that did not extradite were directly arrested by Interpol. How could it be possible to say that if a person is not in China, he cannot be convicted and the matter will be left alone?
I really don't know the point of the protagonist being low-key and cowardly. He doesn't even have 3-digit money in his pocket. He lives in a house rented by his boss and waits for death all day long. He can't get any royalties for the songs he gave to the heroine. In the eyes of others, you are just a waste that consumes the heroine's sympathy. Will it kill you to let others know that you wrote songs for the heroine? If you don't think about progress all day long and occupy your predecessor's body, you must avenge him and his parents. Look at this protagonist who eats and sleeps all day long, and eats and sleeps all the time.
All I can say is let it go. The subject matter is okay, but the writing was wrong from the beginning. As long as I know a little bit about the law, it seems that what you wrote is full of poisonous points. Can't you just give it to her? Behind the scenes basically doesn't work in modern times. Information is open to the public. Unless someone knows that you are doing things for you, if you insist on playing this genre by writing like this, the writing will be messy, embarrassing and poisonous.
I don't know why they secretly send songs. The subject matter is good. The plot is too poisonous. The author's ideas are hard to understand. Would a star heroine really like a loser?
The first half of the second chapter was okay, but after the system came out, it turned into garbage. In the previous life, was the king of heaven without a song? After time travel, I graduated from the composition department. Can't I copy the songs from my previous life? Need a system? It's really the beginning of shit.
After seeing Chapter 4, you are so awesome, you don't even want the copyright, even if you register first and then authorize it! Your biggest need now is to increase your reputation and repair your voice. Your signature has not even been improved! Who knows who wrote it!
The idea of "You are mute at the beginning" is also quite good. I like this sense of solidity, but the song you sent disturbed my atmosphere. Just stop being self-motivated and self-dedicated, okay? Super disgusting. Also, as a singer, releasing an album is the most powerful way to rejuvenate. Why do you always give away songs? Is anyone else going to participate in The Voice? What's the point of giving away each song one by one? Return one favor, owe 6 favors, or owe a few favors. In the end, you have to promise with your own body, right? You might as well say it directly and say that you will make an album for her. It would be better if this one favor is enough. But if you need it again, you have to give money. However, the album must also be divided into shares. The first album cannot be given away for free. (Actually, what I want to say is that if you repay the favor, you should also let others know, right? There is actually a feeling of an idol drama here, and you don't let others know that your selfless dedication is like licking a dog)
Slipping away
After reading more than 20 chapters about the male protagonist being poisoned and mute, because I didn't understand the law and this was a parallel world, I convinced myself to continue reading. But to be honest, it's really hard to resist! ! Why does the male protagonist sing to the female protagonist without telling her? Does this do him any good? There must be a reason for the matter itself, right? And even if the male protagonist is determined to hide his merit and fame. Information age! How can you hide it? Send the song to the studio? What do you think? You want to say that other industries can be ignored? Star studios don't monitor them? Does this make sense? Just saying that there are less than two monitors outside the door is disrespectful to the word star! The owner of the heroine's studio wants to know who is doing it. Does Lei Feng know? I can't convince myself of this kind of forced intelligence deception! !
It's a bit of a nurturing article, and it's also a sense of accomplishment to watch the people you support getting better and better, but it feels a bit retarded to write the protagonist.
Being a mute assistant is the most poisonous thing in Qidian. Com
No wonder the results are so bad. At the end of the month, I only had more than 100 monthly tickets! It is estimated that more than half of the people have withdrawn after reading the first three chapters and cursing me. They started with the golden chapter three, but you are disgusting with the start of the third chapter. If you don't accept it, I also withdrew.
The setting feels like it should be a mindless and enjoyable novel, but it's not enjoyable at all.
Reading this novel gives me the feeling of being fed 😰
The setting seemed pretty good, but I was immediately put off by the first few chapters. It was really poisonous. You said that if the song was stolen and the male and female protagonists didn't have the copyright, wouldn't it be more in line with what you wrote?
It's extremely toxic, and the characters are childish. All kinds of dementia, all kinds of love brain retardation
The first two chapters directly persuaded you to quit... What the hell? Use the system to mix word count? Nowadays, any entertainment article needs to be mixed with a system? Can't the protagonist survive without the system? As soon as you see the system, you will be persuaded to leave immediately.
About criticizing the work in the comment section
First of all, let me make it clear that if there is a problem, you can criticize it. This is very reasonable. However, I still suggest that you don't rush into scolding just after reading the introduction. Have you read the content? Are you here to vent your scolding? I can understand those who read two or three chapters and criticize it as poisonous. Everyone has their own preferences, and those who can criticize are at most activist activists, which is no problem. But for those who criticize the system, how about you come here to make your presence felt? I have marked the system text in both tags and introduction. I don't like to take detours, okay? You can't be like a dog and can't bear to come over to pee and leave a mark, right? This is too unauthentic, and it won't sound good if you say it out loud, right? Above.
Very good. When I saw the song that mysteriously appeared, I knew it was time to give it up. It's good in every aspect. It's not too messy at first glance. The behavior of the protagonist is a bit unclear as to why it's shaped like this. Come on.
Damn it! ! I gave you a song quietly, and there was so much nonsense that I couldn't stand it anymore. I have it.
After reading a few chapters I couldn't stand it anymore and almost got poisoned to death. To sum up, the normal positive energy behavior of human beings has nothing to do with it, right? If you don't see positivity and upliftment, you will see someone like a rat in the gutter, sneaking in some chili peppers to mix it up.
When I read Chapter 30, the protagonist is Lei Feng, who doesn't leave his name behind whatever he does. The director of the music program does not allow the female lead singer to sing the original songs, just for the sake of the program 😊. I really don't understand, so I say goodbye.
I can only say that there is a reason why there are one million words and five thousand collections.
Poisonous()
When I read Chapter 4, I just asked if I didn't understand. I wanted to gain reputation by treating my throat, but I didn't want to trouble myself. What kind of serious illness is this?
The strange thing is, in books about entertainment stars, where is the entertainment content?
I haven't updated it in a few days and I haven't made any comments. This book is a waste.
You've already worn it and you're still talking about logic, just watch it without thinking. 😁