Conan's Other Self

I didn't expect it to end so soon. Although I was a little caught off guard, when I thought about it carefully, I realized that it really should be over. The emotional line has reached its peak. I started reading Conan fanfics in the first grade of junior high school and it has been more than ten years now. I have been reading Conan fanfics all the time because of Ai Haihara, a character who is full of charm and surrounded by sadness. I have been searching in the fandom for a character who can provide Ai Jiang with a warm embrace and give Ai Jiang the happiness and emotion she should have. This book has fulfilled all my regrets and obsessions about Ming Ke. Thank you to the author. Maple Yuan in the book is the character I want to find. He is not reckless, he is considerate, he truly loves Haihara Ai, and he is trying hard to bring Haihara Ai back to the happiness that is consistent with her age. This book has a series of advantages, such as strong logic, no OOC in the whole process of the characters, and many details that are enough for famous Ke fans to laugh at each other. The only thing lacking in this book may be the humor and writing style. The flaws are not concealed, and it is definitely No. 1 Among Mingke Chunai fans.

The plot of Little Black Fish is very good, and Conan is very handsome, but in the theater, I felt the most distressed for Ai Jiang. Underwater waltz is romantic enough, but when slowly rising to the surface, Haiyuan Ai said the words in his heart: We accidentally kissed just now. What kind of feelings did Haiyuan have? He said this sentence cautiously and with a slight mistake. Then she had to kiss him back after landing. I don't know what Haihara Ai thought of her love for Conan. It was so bitter that she could only love him quietly in the deep seabed. After reading it, I only felt sorry for my sorrow. So I came to read this book again. The maple in the book is really a reliable adult. I sincerely hope that Ai-chan will be in another world with Mingmei and maple by her side. Haihara Ai is the cutest in the world! I am very much looking forward to a fanfic, which is about the world of Conan without Xiaolan, Kudo Shinichi and Sonoko are childhood sweethearts, and later meet Haibara Ai's love story😌

I started to interact with Conan 20 years ago, but the end is still far away. I have many thoughts in my heart, so I have to start watching fan meals 😌 When I was a child, I had a vague feeling that although Lan had always been the main female character, when Conan hid the affairs of the organization from her like a thief, I vaguely felt that she was a tool who could not integrate into the main line. And the moment Xiao Ai appeared on the stage, with a mysterious and slightly melancholic aura, the gears of fate began to turn. She and Conan were destined to be inseparable, whether as Watson or Irene. It's a pity that the endless unit dramas, weird motivations and techniques, slow main plot promotion and relationship progress have also lost the unique texture of the early days and become abstract 🤔 Compared with the slow emotional line of the original work, as a fanfic centered on Kong Ai's relationship, less relevant events are largely skipped. Without greatly changing the original plot, the running account problems caused by forcibly integrating the original events are alleviated. As their favorability reaches its peak, Kong Ai supports each other, loves and loves each other along the way, until they finally confess their love, and the story ends at its climax. For the future talk part, I did not choose to become a high school student again, but chose to go through ten years together. This is a better choice for Xiao Ai who has not been able to experience a normal youth life, and the sugar content is excessive (I almost want to write a short article 😍) But I personally think that there are still some flaws. As mentioned in some comments, some cases can still be described in detail, and although Xiao Kong is more rational and can handle events more reasonably and efficiently than Conan, sometimes it is still necessary to strengthen the opponent appropriately, or arrange unexpected turns, especially the plot part of the game with the organization, otherwise the whole plot will be similar. Buddha pressed the skip button, making the whole organization seem like a joke (although maybe the bird food is 🔨, I have to mention New Police Story, the black group really has an online IQ, but it is a pity that it is tj 🔨). At the same time, it can better reflect the value of Xiao Ai, and this is the biggest difference between her and Sister ∠. Flaws notwithstanding, it is still a very sweet novel. I will come back and read it again someday when I can't find any other meal replacements.

Just finished reading it, thanks for the creation. The author's handling of Xiao Ai's character is indeed very good. Both the expression and the way of thinking are almost the same as in the original work, giving people a sense of smoothness. This aspect feels like the best among recent fan works. If there is room for improvement: 1. Some plots and stories are slightly unnecessary to mention. The plots of some daily cases themselves have been changed. If no cases occur, just skip them. I feel there is no need to mention them again. 2. In addition, although the main style of this game is comfortable and bland, I personally think that it is necessary to occasionally include a few exciting events in the plot to promote emotional growth. Except for the full moon chapter, which is about the duel between this work and the black organization, other chapters were either deleted due to plot changes, or were almost the same as the original work. The main story involving Xiao Ai has become very rare. I think Ai in a critical moment is quite worth portraying. However, it is indeed not easy to see such a comfortable work ❤️ In addition, I also look forward to some extra chapters in the future.

This book is very to my liking. The emotional drama and logic are both online. As the story unfolds, Maplehara's character becomes more and more fuller. Maplehara has the mature feeling of =comic version of Conan + Yusaku. The interaction with Xiao Ai is just right, and this degree is well grasped. Many of the lines are very well written, and the author will also move classic lines and stories to other events in a reasonable and reasonable manner. This is not easy, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

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Can the protagonist's 1/2 Holmes be strengthened? Ashe is 1/2 Holmes (chemistry), mostly Watson (medicine), and Irene. Can the author make the protagonist's other Sherlock Holmes elements, such as the level of musical instrument level up? (Singing can also be improved) Violin, piano, etc., The protagonist can play pure music for Haiyuan to listen to, or he can arrange and write songs for Haiyuan to sing. It does not need to be published and kept as a secret between the two.

It's 100 chapters, the author needs to work harder.

This one is quite nice, but it's a bit slow to update. This is the first time I've seen this type of thing 😍😍😍😍

Change your name now. For example, when you meet Conan for the first time, you should also choose the name Edogawa Conan, and then use it in Doyle or now. The same idea of ​​one Conan and one Doyle is obviously problematic, not to mention that Conan didn't believe it at the time.

Great Detective, your Watson (Irene) is here🍾🍾🍾🍾🍾

I think we can change the setting of the protagonist. The protagonist sets himself as Kudo Shinichi's subconscious. If it doesn't feel good, you can embody the feeling of destiny. Cover it with a layer of fog and let Haihara Ai 2 solve the mystery. Although I don't know if the theory of first encounter is correct, it's because this happened more than ten years ago, and I don't have much impression of the character. Originally, Shiho Miyano was in Rice Flower when he was three years old, so the protagonist Shi Sui could make up a lie. Set up a puzzle. You set the protagonist's memory of Kudo Shinichi to be completely clear. You can set a clear memory time period, such as after the age of three. For example, Kudo Shinichi met Miyano Shiho at the age of three, and then separated from Miyano Shiho at the age of three and a half. The protagonist's clear memory starts from meeting Miyano Shiho. We can let the protagonist set himself up as a sub-personality that appears due to a trace of sadness. Kudo met Miyano Shiho when he was a child and was attracted by her smile. Then because Miyano Shiho was taken away by the organization, you saw her for the last time at that time. Because of sadness, Kudo Shinichi's personality forgot about it, and then transferred Miyano Shiho's smile to Mao Lilan's face, and then developed a vague affection for Mao Lilan. The protagonist is the forgotten part of Kudo Shinichi. As Haihara Ai said in the article, he is like a stranger watching Kudo Shinichi spend more than ten years. Then because aptx4869 split apart when it shrank, there was a sense of fate. The wheel of fate turns, my consciousness appears because of your smile, and my body appears because of your medicine. Because it has a single heroine, a lot of heavy stuff can be added to it. This puzzle can be solved by Haihara Ai in the time capsule chapter, and the time capsule film can be used as the end of the novel, the real fate. Leave it blank. If you don't want the male and female protagonists to grow up at the end, you can end it here. If you want the male and female protagonists to grow up, there is nothing to write about when they grow up.

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This is called being short, concise and not superficial. If you catch a topic, write about it. With hundreds of thousands of words, you can basically write about pure love without digressing from the topic. Compared with other current money-cheating fan fiction, it is really conscientious. Watched it for the third time, congratulations on finishing it! Looking forward to the next work of the author who will not change his account.

Share a cherished picture of Xiao Ai

It looks pretty good so far. It is estimated that he and Haiyuan will get along well in the future. The most important thing is that Xin Lanlian and Ke Ailian are all together, and there is no conflict at all.

Does the author have any obsession with this name? Or did you bring yourself into it?

To be honest, I thought it was about a clone of Conan or another Conan, and then wrote about the two Conan showing some interesting sparks in the plot, and then the two same people made different interesting choices, but the author chose to keep Conan and the protagonist separated. But! How is this different from the setting where the protagonist has been Conan's half-brother or half-brother since childhood? I have been cutting out the settings written in the introduction, and I saw the protagonist saying the name of his time travel (and repeatedly reinforcing the prompts). What is the interesting point of writing your double Conan setting like this? Is there any difference between the scenario of twins and you being Conan's younger brother or elder brother and the plot of yours? It can be put in as well. The biggest problem when reading this novel now is the setting conflict. The author only cared about the interesting setting of the two Conans written by himself, and frantically reminded the protagonist of the existence of his pre-travel name without foreshadowing the plot. The plot of the two Conans is obviously very interesting, but I see that half of the impact is that the protagonist frantically shows his pre-travel name, and the sparks in the plot of the two Conans are not shown at all. What is the difference between this and the setting of the possible twins? From what I see now, it can be said that it is cheating.

I took out my collection, the last avatar I have used for many years

I specially spent a piece to comment on this. The protagonist's name is really in the play, but it happens to appear once every other paragraph. It feels like flies or mosquitoes hanging around you, and you never know whether you can endure it all night or get up at a certain moment to find a fly swatter or an electric mosquito swatter, and I just can't help but go for an electric mosquito swatter.

Haihara Ai

I like Xiao Ai, although many people say that most Conan fan fiction has Xiao Ai as the heroine, and they say they don't like Xiao Ai as the heroine, but the high-quality ones I have read do not have a heroine or the heroine is not Xiao Ai. It is true that many Conan fan fiction has a lot of Xiao Ai heroines, so some people are tired of aesthetics, but I really haven't read high-quality fan fiction with Xiao Ai as the heroine. Some people may criticize it, but I don't care. I just like Xiao Ai 😍😍😍. I have never seen a high-quality novel about Xiao Ai with a female protagonist. I read one two years ago. The main character is a winery. It has become smaller, but Xiao Ai doesn't know it. He thought he was just a child. But after a while, he stopped updating at the starting point. Later he became a eunuch. I hope the author will give it a lot. Come on, come on, come on, come on. I like Xiao Ai😍😍😍

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Did the author lose his mind from playing a mind game? Just mention the name in one sentence, and then emphasize it in a few chapters. Author, what do you think? Introduce yourself to Edogawa Michio, and then when someone else calls you, call me Sora Maple Garden. What's wrong with that? I kept doing this plot over and over again.

The plot is great and very interesting. However, the name is so embarrassing no matter how many times I read it. I really want to complain about this name, the author. Change your name. Even Edogawa Doyle is a hundred times stronger than Maplehara Sora.

If it wasn't for the name Edogawa Doyle, why would he still be called Kaedehara Sora🤔

Some super cute Ai-chan

I've also seen one similar to yours, with Shinichi and Conan both present. The only difference is that Conan is a child, while Shinichi is still an adult. Shinichi's main plot is the explosion of the Shinkansen, and he also does a lot of daily cases. Conan is a time traveler, and he takes on daily cases. I wrote two books. The book is called "Conan: Sister Lan, Don't Touch My Head." The plug-in is the three infinity stones: space, time, and soul, plus the pair of glasses that Tony left to the little spider. The author strengthened the strength of the characters in Conan and successfully made Xinlan. The cp was dismantled, and Xiaolan was raised by playing. There were some changes: Hondo Eiyu, Shinde Tomoaki, died early, Yukiko returned to the country early, Xiaolan completely sobered up, no longer played along with her parents, and gave up on Shinichi's relationship, focusing on cultivating Conan, Shinichi Gin Vodka Ka's name was announced on the Internet. Gin thought that Shinichi was dead. Shinichi who participated in the Shinkansen explosion was pretended to be someone else. Belmod and Curacao returned to the country early. The subsequent plot was almost cut off. There were only 39 pictures in total. This time, the bamboo horse was defeated by the sky, which is a perfect interpretation.

Personally, I feel that this book in Conan fan fiction and the previously removed Eye of Destiny should be two insurmountable peaks. . . . .

Every time I read other Conan fanfics, I feel that this book has a single heroine, Xiao Ai, and it feels more and more pity. There are so many plots to write, the setting of the protagonist and Conan's twins is very attractive, and it satisfies the Ke Ai Party and the New Lan Party at the same time. Can other books do this? And it is really passionate. , When Conan encountered a bottleneck, he said to the protagonist, "If one person can't do it, then two people will do it together." "Then I'll leave it to you, the other me." I really enjoyed watching it, but the author finished it later. Alas, I hope there will be similar works in the future.