Red Mansion Soldier Immortal

Very well written, cheers author! !

If you can enter the Imperial Ancestral Temple, don't enter the Martial Arts Temple. Since it is Shuangwen, you can be the emperor yourself. There is no need to risk yourself and your descendants being liquidated and be the emperor's dog.

The garden drama is well written, the war drama is quite satisfactory, and the political drama is hard to describe... The political figures from the emperor to the four princes and eight princes are all just like middle school students. They are all silly and sweet. When socializing, there is no trace of adult characteristics. When the protagonist gets along with them, he laughs, curses, and fights like middle school students, which feels very inconsistent. I understand that the author wanted to write about a pure, flawless, warm and harmonious relationship between king and minister, but this is too outrageous. Look at how Liu Bang, Zhu Yuanzhang, Genghis Khan, and Alexander treated their former "brothers". Father and son would kill each other in the face of power. How could they tolerate the protagonists being neither big nor small? To put it nicely, it's the relationship between a king and his ministers, but to put it worse, it's the relationship between a human and a dog. An exiled woman who is unhappy can make the whole family of the protagonist become a chicken. The author wants the protagonist to be a minister (dog), and also hopes that the protagonist can have personal self-respect and freedom in front of his master, so he wrote this very unconventional political drama.

Have some snacks. Not too many soldiers and immortals died young in history. Bai Qi, Han Xin, Huo Qubing, Yue Fei, etc., Just like pig's feet, the whole family has already made a reservation to receive box lunches.

Han Xin really used his people's hearts to the extreme in his last-ditch battle. He calculated the people's minds on both sides perfectly. Those who didn't figure it out became Ma Su.

146 Is extremely poisonous. Mrs. Wang and the protagonist are about to fight in front of everyone. The wife of a fifth-rank official fights with a lieutenant. It's possible to write such a mentally retarded plot

All the famous generals in history seemed to have a bad end. Bai Qi, Wu Qi, Tian Dan, Le Yi, Wei Wuji, Li Mu, Han Xin, these famous pre-Qin generals all had a bad end. I won't say much about the fact that the old Liu family is ungrateful, mean and ungrateful. Needless to say, other dynasties valued culture over military affairs. The military sage Sun Wu was imprisoned in his later years, or to be called a hermit. Qi Jiguang, who wrote a new book on Ji Xiao and created his own mandarin duck formation, actually survived by giving money to Zhang Juzheng. The first rank of famous generals I am talking about must have written influential military books, created excellent tactics of their own, and achieved a record of defeating more with less.

He led the army to fight at the age of 13. Do you want to write it like this? Now the novel wants to stuff age into the mother's womb. Has the body grown?

I'm curious as to why someone would post a post suggesting rebelling and becoming the emperor. Isn't this book clearly written by Zhongchenliu from the name to the introduction? Isn't this the same as going to a Sichuan restaurant and saying to the boss, "I want to eat hamburgers, why don't you make fast food? There is no future in Sichuan cuisine."

If you go to Honglou to be a soldier, I'm afraid it won't be delivered fast enough. The plot of "Dream of Red Mansions" is nearly 200 years after the founding of the dynasty. It is the end of the dynasty. The background of "Dream of Red Mansions" is that the emperor came to the dynasty with a supreme emperor on his head. The emperor enlisted civil servants to suppress the nobles, while the Supreme Emperor controlled the military nobles. There is also a prince below who is counting on the Supreme Emperor to succeed him in the throne. Moreover, the emperor came to power after the prince rebelled and was killed. . . In this situation, if you are a noble person and do not rebel, you will be a loyal minister. . . This is. . . I also want to enter the martial arts temple.

I can't understand the protagonist's operations. As someone who has a war map, you are a natural commander, because you have an eye for where the opponent is going. As long as you show your ability to anticipate the enemy in front of the army, you will be an invincible commander. Is local war your job? That is the work of the powerful generals below. The commander is to grasp the overall situation. The author does not understand the difference between a commander and a general. A general is someone who rushes with arrows before the battle. I have never heard of a large army war. Commanders charge only sit in the middle and direct continuously. You only need to look at the opponent's position according to the map and arrange the personnel to fight there. You will not win casually. These pictures give me a headache

I have to say, it says that the character "Red Mansion" wants to eat the Red Mansion, but there is not much description of the character. They are all fighting, and after the war, they are fighting in the north. I don't understand why you include the word "Red Mansion". You don't write about the garden, and you don't stay in the garden. It would be best if you change the name of the book.

This book breaks the Jia family's crisis at the beginning. No one in the Jia family dares to target the protagonist. The content of this book is also war-oriented. It is better to change the name of this book and call it "True Red Mansions Unparalleled". It doesn't show the protagonist's military skills, but the protagonist is quite capable of fighting. The whole point of the book is that the protagonist can fight. My suggestion is to start killing directly. As for the emperor's trust, just find any reason to fool him. Keep killing and killing. After killing Bei Fan, kill Benzi. After killing Benzi, kill Maozi. Anyway, he has already deviated towards Mu Yunfeng's writing style. It's better to step on the accelerator and be done with it.

Not many warrior immortals end up well. Can you give some examples of those who enjoy their old age peacefully? Is it scary to read half a book of history and find nothing? If you want to be a soldier, buy a coffin first.

I hope the heroine will no longer be someone like Lin Daiyu! I've seen enough 😒

This book is worthless and boring to read. If you don't sneer at Mrs. Jia, quarrel with Mr. Wang, or beat up Jia Baoyu when you enter the Red Mansion, then what's the point of walking in? When you read the story of Time Travel in Red Mansions, aren't you just upset about Twelve Chai's tragic end?

This kind of suggestion should not be disguised as Red Mansions, as it will be scolded. The audience who watches Dream of Red Mansions generally does not accept that Red Mansions is written in the same way as The Warring States Period. Instead of doing this, it is better to write about dynastic hegemony directly.

What the hell is it about? A famous family is turned into a scoundrel. I don't know if you've read the original novel. Do you think you're relying on yourself?