Changqing True Immortal

Newbies are slow to code, and they have to make sure to update and think about the plot every day. It is inevitable that there will be some imperfections. Please point them out. As long as it does not affect the overall situation, I will listen to excellent suggestions and optimize. Well, the main thing is to listen to advice 😭 Inexperienced and limited writing skills, I hope you can bear with me.

It's completely mindless, and you just run around when you have resources and don't need them.

Strangely, he was intercepted and killed, and instead of warning the family, the dog got up to practice! ! ! ! This brain circuit?

When I saw Chapter 13, the plot of treating spiritual poison was so unexpected; you, a Qi Refining monk, were going to treat a high-level person; anyway, I thought it was very strange and I couldn't stand it.

Be strict about your levels. What the hell is it that a level 2 formation can control level 5 monsters?

What you wrote is so unreasonable. You didn't explain clearly why you had to go to that oasis in the early stage. Will going to that third-level spiritual land influence you to find evil spirits? The logic is unreasonable. Since you are from the Jindan family, will you still have such resources for practicing qi? What's more, Pig's Knuckle's status in the family is not low. He relies on the family and doesn't want to take advantage of the situation. He just wants to go solo. What does the author think? And when there are problems in the family, I don't want to think about solutions, I just want to run away, fearing that I will be implicated. My dear, my family is your biggest supporter, and it is also your parents and family. What are you thinking?

In the early stage, there was no shortage of resources, but Gou Zai's family was practicing hard, and he didn't know how to use the family's power to collect resources, and he always wanted to leave the family and go solo.

It's a fairy tale, the plot is reasonable, there are no poisonous points, and the writing is smooth. I'll save it and read it first. I hope the author can keep writing.

Why don't you update it? Come on, brother dei

There are quite a lot of problems. The ancestor of Jindan still has so much high-end combat power. In this case, you want to go to a garbage place to practice. It would be okay if you prepare in advance, but you want to go directly to a garbage place to practice. I don't know who wants to see this. Anyway, I will withdraw first.

The description of this family feels weird

Isn't this from the family cultivation simulator?

Great novel, it is inevitable that the peak will decline

Not bad, I just like to see this, come on

Let me introduce this world to a bigger picture.

Is this mainly about the growth of the family? Will the protagonist always stay in the family, or will he leave? Will he take care of the family alone and write the development of the family, or will the protagonist leave the family's personal history of cultivation?