Brothers in the Ring of Red Mansions

All roads lead to Rome, reading is not the only way

Everything is of inferior quality, but the only way to study well is to block the way to study.

The role of Jia Huan is difficult to write. Putting aside the issue of age, Jia Huan's only support in the original work is Jia Zheng's love for Aunt Zhao. Jia Huan's status in Jia's mother's side is only higher than that of Jia Cong, not even comparable to some servants, let alone Mrs. Wang's side. About Chapter 30, the protagonist first abandons literature and joins the martial arts, Jia Zheng is not happy, and loses the greatest protection; then, in order to welcome the spring, he touches the bottom line of Mrs. Wang's housekeeper; then, it is revealed that Wang Xifeng has made loan sharks and is still thinking about Ping'er; during this period, you also ridiculed Mrs. You have offended the master of Rongguo Mansion inside and out. Can you offend those losers in Rongguo Mansion? Of course you can, provided you are strong enough to protect yourself outside. Finally, let's take a look at the protagonist's reliance. One is an extremely ordinary martial arts master, even if he changes his identity as a powerful general, it can have a little influence; the other is the arrangement made by Lin Ruhai before his death, which is even more nonsense.

To be honest, I felt very frustrated reading your book.

The Baoyu natives all have a piece of jade as a "skill". Pig's feet have no skills at all. They gave up studying when they were born as concubines. They feel that it is difficult to survive in the Jia family. Even the slaves can overwhelm them. It is difficult to get ahead.

I wanted to give a reward, but I can't. Come on.

What does this novel say? The writing is good. But the character of the protagonist is really unbearable. You are a modern person who has traveled through the past. Watching someone hold hands and show their arms actually makes you blush and your heart beats? Have you ever seen someone wearing a suspender belt with their thighs exposed? Never seen a kiss? And how can you, a modern person who travels back in time, really endure being suppressed and targeted by a group of old ladies? Can you still repay evil with kindness? Ancient people paid attention to filial piety. But you traveled through the past from the present time. Not ancient people. You won't be able to fully integrate into it after just reading the Four Books and Five Classics, right? To save others by oneself, not to mention confronting them in a big way, why should they be stumbling behind their backs? Are you really that tolerable? Others don't treat you as a person, but you still show your heart to them? And why do other Red Mansions novels find ways to be expelled from the family? Because you are the concubine of the second wife in Rongguo Mansion! In front of you are Jia She, Jia Zheng, Jia Lian, Jia Baoyu, and Jia Lan. The second male in the eldest family of the Jia family has all died, and there is no chance of an adoptive one. Only you can take charge of the family. So if you don't want to be implicated, the best way is to cut off the relationship. Expelled from the family.

This is the first time for a newcomer to write a novel. Please forgive me if the writing is not good. Thank you for your support. I hope to communicate more with you!

Great book! Praise!

There is only one way for Jia Huan to break the situation, the imperial examination, and it is to become famous early and attract the attention of Jia Zheng and Jia Mu before Mrs. Wang reacts. Then the young genius must have the status of scholar at least. The status of scholar can make Mrs. Wang worry about the attitude of Jia Zheng or Jia Zheng when she picks you. The status of judicial officer can allow you to protect yourself enough. The status of Jinshi can give you the opportunity to speak at the table and refuse some things. Only the status of top three can really give you the strength to overturn the table. Can Jia Huan join the army? Of course you can, but this means you have to give up on Lin Daiyu. The time when Lin Daiyu and Jia Baoyu confirmed that their relationship was love was after Lin Ruhai's death. At this time, Jia Huan was just a teenager. By the time Jia Huan had a title or military power, Lin Daiyu and Jia Baoyu had already been deeply in love. This way of writing, you don't want to practice writing but you want the heroine Daiyu, and you can't cuckold yourself. How do you come back in a smooth way? The novel is not nonsense. It is better to just give a system to write a photo like this.

The author's writing is really good, and all the characters are brought to life. The protagonist is a good person, but too timid. It's good to be a friend, but it's really uncomfortable to be the protagonist. With the author's writing style, if the plot and characters are changed, it should be popular. Just being able to bring the characters to life will kill 99% of authors in an instant.

He is the concubine of the Jia family again. I feel like I can guess the plot. He is determined to punish the evil slaves, fight against Jia's pardon team, study for the imperial examination, and pass the imperial examination at the age of ten or nine. In the end, he takes care of the Jia family like a dog, and everyone has to worry about paving the way for Jia Baoyu.

It is useless to study in Jia's house in Red Mansion. The king's way is to be in charge of the army.

The author is getting better and better, and his writing style is very good. Look forward to this book!

The timeline is a bit late, so don't accept Daiyu at this time.

I give you five out of ten. The main character is like a loser. It's not fun. The difficulty of the plot is deliberately increased. It's tiring to watch.

This introduction can filter out many readers.

Is it all a private fight in the back house? There are so many poorly written books about The Red Mansion (๑°3°๑) Aren't you going to write about joining the army? Bai Blind Introduction.

The plot of the novel is very well arranged, the characters are vividly and fully portrayed, and Jia Huan has a strong sense of involvement. There are basically no cheats, and it is more like the struggle history of ordinary people. However, the novel has more straightforward narratives, and the dramatic conflicts are not too intense, and it is a bit dull. Sometimes there are too many words or too few words in the novel, which makes it difficult to read. I don't know if it is because of the starting point. The author needs to review it before updating. I like Huan's book. I hope the author will write better and better and not be a eunuch 😁

The first 60 chapters are okay, but what is written in the back? Apart from the names of the characters, what else is this?

When he scolded Jia Zhen, he didn't feel good enough. When he was in conflict with Jia Mu and other elders, there was less description of the back and forth. You can refer to how the author of "Struggle in the Red Mansion" describes these dramatic conflicts.

In the original work, Third Master Huan is not afraid of Second Master Bao, and often takes advantage of trouble to fix Master Bao. Several times when Second Master Bao was beaten to death, Third Master Huan guided him. This book makes it boring for the third master to give in to the second master at every turn. The struggle between legitimate sons and concubines is never lenient, and the legitimate sons are not necessarily better than the legitimate sons. The battles between Yuan Shao and Yuan Shu, and Zhu Yunzhen and Zhu Yunxi are not necessarily about legitimate sons.

The beauty of a gentleman will be cut down in five lifetimes. If Xungui wants to live for a long time, the only way out is to study. Jia Huan, a kid with a big butt, is really funny learning martial arts. In ancient times, nobles were prohibited from doing business. If you wanted to make a fortune, you could only rely on your wife's dowry or farming. Otherwise, it will be a dead end.