Mysterious Recovery: Starting from the Mysterious Bus

It's really ugly. I don't recommend reading it. Only the first 10 chapters are good. I started to mess up when I got to Dahai City. And the rest of it is completely messy. It's ugly.

30% Of the buses are really not that strong, at most they can be considered B-plus. Without ghost zones, they are really not that strong. What can I say? It's not that powerful ghosts have ghost realms, but that ghosts with ghost realms are powerful. They can't stay and touch people, so it's really useless. 50% Of S-class cars won't crash even if they hit a bus, and they won't be quiet for long. At most, they can be considered suppressive A-class ones. What are you thinking about? Still 30% invincible

Don't scare me, okay? When I saw the name of the protagonist, I ran into Mysterious Resurrection. It was the first time I saw an author write me in.

Hack the invincible flow and replicate ghost abilities. It is equivalent to the protagonist of a thermal weapon war having unlimited bullets, unlimited cannons, and unlimited atomic bombs. Even if others want to attack from a distance, the protagonist will directly hold the atomic bomb and die together. He is immune to physical attacks and can be exploded at will.

Since I'm writing a Goldfinger and Mysterious Resurrection fanfic, I think the supernatural strength must be controlled well and not be weakened for no reason. The three ghosts in the original work are considered strong (in the early and middle stages), and the three-story buses are actually the top batch in the early stage. , So don't mindlessly pop up a bunch of ghosts and characters who are better than the protagonist, otherwise there will be a surge in combat power, the protagonist will crazily add abilities and the result will be bad, eunuchs, too many fanfics will die because the protagonist's abilities are too strong and it will be impossible to continue writing.

From the beginning, when the ghost was brought to the city, I couldn't stand it. I wanted to get a sense of immersion when reading the novel, but the protagonist's moral bottom line is so low. How can I be immersed in it?

For the remaining frames of mobile phone tattoos, what skills do you recommend? Let's collect some information. What abilities do you think are worth replicating? ? ?

Yeah, the contract was signed successfully

It's so well written and beautiful! Definitely not at gunpoint.

Why don't you want to interfere with Yang Jian's development for fear of affecting the subsequent plot? I wonder. What kind of plot is needed when the protagonist is so powerful? I am convinced. I have to pull out Yang Jian. The protagonist has such a big golden finger and continues to grow and develop. When the strength reaches a certain level, he can just crush it when faced with problems. What kind of plot is needed? The protagonist who fucking hates dog-licking wet nurses is the main character. I am here to see the protagonist shine. I am not here to re-watch the mysterious recovery plot...

Can you please stop forcing the plot? The fight with the scarecrow earlier was almost too much. When we got to the city, we saw the ghost and got out of the car and said he was treating the wound and didn't want to cause trouble. Then we watched Ye Zhen fight with the ghost and then fight Ye Zhen again? Just do whatever you want to do 😅

I strongly disagree with the author's point of view that the trick needs to be developed, otherwise it will not be able to exert its full power. Juicy's competition only depends on strength, whether it works or not, it doesn't work. The development of tricks should be based on using tricks or methods, and practicing proficiency, rather than the more tricks you develop and the more proficient you are, the more powerful it will be.

The protagonist is a troublemaker. The more powerful he is, the more disgusting he becomes. There is no comparable operation.

This is not a group portrait article. Why do you always cut the perspective? This affects the perception and the fluency of the writing. Did I read this book to see how Ye Zhen and other people or ghosts behave? You need to develop the plot from the perspective of the male protagonist! Do you think any ghost in the original text of Mysterious Resurrection would spend so much time laying the groundwork? Not only do you make secret remarks and then use the protagonist's sight to reveal the mystery, but you also like to spend a lot of ink writing about other people. Sometimes you even write one or two chapters in a row about other people and the protagonist is completely invisible. Especially Ye Zhen writes the most. Am I here to see Ye Zhen? Didn't I come to see the new protagonist and new story? If you like writing about Ye Zhen so much, why not write about him in the next book? Can you reduce the number of words in this book?

Stop scolding, stop scolding, tell me what I did wrong, can't I change it~~~😭😭😭

Can't the protagonist control the starving ghost first and then go do the ghost thing? I have to do it with two complements, now it's fine, I'm done with it.

First of all, the overall story is pretty good. Below are some uncomfortable chapters that made me feel uncomfortable and had the urge to abandon the book. 1. Can the psychological descriptions of the supporting characters be reduced? (For example, there is a lengthy description of Ye Zhen and the psychological description of the undead in the painting. It always emphasizes the inner activities of the supporting characters and the people they are facing. Is it because they want to describe the pig's feet as powerful?) But writing like this in a paid chapter first makes you feel like you are in water, and secondly, doesn't it feel awkward? The undead messenger who can deliver five levels of letters can be so childish and always have inner activities, feeling that the pig's feet are very powerful and that he is with the right person? 2. Can the descriptions of ghost paper and 30% bus bonus be reduced? The original description of the ghost realm shows a red light flashing and the distance is a red line. At most, there are several layers of ghost realms. (The total area of ​​the ghost realm remains the same, and the distance is farther when stretched into a line. Then teleport from line a to line b, then close the ghost realm and release the linear ghost realm to repeat the teleport. This is the way of rushing in the original novel.) Author, see for yourself how you rush? When you are on the road, you first describe the gray ghost land for a long time, and then everyone can see a gray ghost land approaching. The ghost land covers the whole city at every turn, or half of the city. You see that the original novel covers the whole journey at every turn? Speaking of which, what is the length or width of a city? Ten or dozens of kilometers? And then you have to travel dozens of kilometers at most? And every time I rush on the road, people see the paper dust falling first. Or is it an early warning? Is this a rush? The fight is described for a long time and then emphasizes the suppression of 30% of the bus. The final summary is that the ghost realm of 70% of the ghost painting + the ability of 30% of the bus is no less damaging than the overall bus collision. How many times have I said this? I have paid a fee to write this. I really feel like I am just for the sake of it. I can't bear it if I keep writing like this. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. I have ordered it all. I haven't seen the author's latest chapter yet, and I am still reading. The author has the right not to change it. I paid money for the pleasure of reading. After writing like this, I silently abandoned the book (The above is true for After reading some of the little opinions made by the author, the author and readers should not criticize them if they don't like them. Don't argue. If you argue, you win. I spent money to read the book and have the right to put forward my own opinions. If I change it, I will continue reading. If I don't change it, I will see you again.) ps: I wish the author a big sale and an early platinum price. I wish my readers a healthy life, a promotion and a salary increase, and a doubling of assets.)

The protagonist becomes more and more interesting as he writes.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I feel that this protagonist is greedy, stupid, and has no power at all. He is the kind of person who wants to take everything into his hands once he gains power, for fear of anything bad happening to him. His growth depends entirely on Zhang Dong and the mobile phone ghost, otherwise he will not know how he died.

Invincible, Ye Shui 1. Retell the plot of the original work 2. Describe a large number of supporting characters and insignificant matters 3. A few sentences reveal the story in one or two chapters Summary: You can directly browse the table of contents and select key chapters to read

I spent a long paragraph writing about a person, even the background, but the next paragraph ended up dead. . . . .

Mysterious Resurrection. From the Republic of China to modern times, there have been ghosts. How should I put it? They will kill people in the city if they don't move. Hundreds of thousands will die if they don't move. Why don't ordinary people know that ghosts exist? ? ? ? Very unclear. Mysterious Resurrection started to write a talk. I went to comment and I was directly blocked 😃😃😃😃 I haven't read it for a long time. Let me ask the fans.

It's not pretty, it talks too much, it's not decisive when it comes to killing, and it keeps pushing and pushing.

This protagonist can only be played through the game alone. Ordinary people's bodies don't need to rest or sleep.                              Inexhaustible energy. I have read more than a hundred chapters, all of which are about fighting ghosts. It is tiring to read.

The protagonist is not allowed to be a virgin, but can he be a good person?

Is the novel an explanation or a novel? Can this analogy be used in a novel? So much nonsense

After it was put on the shelves, there was a lot of nonsense. Just one bus repeatedly introduced how bad the lights were, how dim and foggy the lights were, and so on. The introduction was repeated every time I took the bus, and it was all water, water, water, water, water 😡😡😡

It started to get wet after it was put on the shelves. It slid all the way down and it was really hard to stretch.

I borrowed a friend's house to recommend a new book called "I Can Refresh Plug-ins in Every Copy" which is really well written

There are new groups. There is a new group in what the author said at the end of the latest chapter.