Frozen Continent of the Apocalypse

I am a novice and wrote this book with passion. I hope everyone will give you criticism

Hey guys, my book is blocked. I don't know when it will be unblocked.

Hello readers and friends, I'm sorry for the recent interruption! Because the draft I wrote before was quite bloody and violent, I am currently revising it.

Please tell me what you think of my book. I don't know if it's good or bad.

Are you segmenting things so strangely? Writing a novel is not about writing prose. You can read more what others have written, and first learn how to segment it into paragraphs and create dialogues.

Um, if nothing else, can we format the article? It's too awkward to read.

60 chapters were deleted, it's a pity