
Online Reviews, City Competitions
网文点评,城市比拼
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- 18k Words
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- Short Story
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- Female
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- Collected Reviews
- Updated
- 3mo ago
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- Qidian
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I have the nerve to post it like this, why not copy it?
Tell the truth
There are many areas where you, the author, need to improve, especially your psychological descriptions. Main line. Secondly, some aspects of the logic need to be improved. The starting point for signing a contract is based on potential and audience. How many people rely on this app to make a living seems like a no-brainer. But he is a bestseller. Maybe the readers who like him are young and have little social experience, or they yearn for that kind of domineering president, etc. I feel like you, the author, are a bit underappreciated and resentful about signing the contract. This is all understandable. Look at the house pig. I started watching him when he was alone in the world. To be honest, my evaluation was only average, but he persisted and accumulated a wave of popularity. Whether it's good or bad, having someone give you a bad review isn't actually a bad thing. No one comments is what makes me cry. There are many malicious comments. But you should think carefully about the evaluation of the plot. Or from another perspective, as a reader, how do you feel when you see those plots. The audience of Qidian is too big. If you look at the lists every day, almost all of them are based on cool articles. The audience is huge. There are many people who want to watch it without thinking it has depth. Let's not always speak the truth in everything. If you kill a whole boatload of people with one pole, how many people have you offended invisibly? If you can sign a contract in the future and keep going, there is no doubt that there will be readers of yours. Look at Xuezhong and all, to be honest, if I were you, I would delete that profile. It's so offensive. Do you know how many people you can offend by saying "I will never be in the world again"? There are so many authors in Qidian. Which author wouldn't want everyone's affirmation and recognition for this book. Your words seem to be flattering, but invisibly you are belittling and denying how many authors' books? If you really feel that there are no good books about conspiracies, conspiracies, city affairs, etc., You should go and read The Flying Laoqian Jianghu. Book written by shrimp. There is a saying, there are many good books, but maybe he is not more famous than those on the list. I often review some books, but I base them on the plot. Someone will definitely praise you if you write well. Someone will definitely criticize me for poor writing. This is normal. If you don't have a strong heart. Then it's really not suitable for writing a book. Like what you said, Zhongyuan Wubai. Their choice of words and sentences is honestly not particularly good. But it's a bit different for others. The plot keeps going and is relatively smooth. The water is water. Not afraid either. Because people's attitudes are there, when do you think they will come out to deny other people's works? This is experience. It's okay for readers to deny an author's work, because you are the reader who spends money to read the book. But you are an author and a colleague, and you want to ruin people's jobs? Will his readers be kind to you? There is a saying that goes well, everything is a paper tiger in the face of absolute strength. Conceive and create excellent works yourself. Don't be afraid of not signing a contract. Even if he doesn't sign at the beginning, you won't change the platform?
At this level, Xiaobai Wen is not as good as him.
I didn't expect that 2024 would be here and I would still have such a huge mouthful of stone.
An idiot who doesn't use punctuation marks well, but speaks loudly and barks. Go back and re-edit the Three Character Classic. The son's failure to teach is the father's fault.
As a miscellany or novel review, there are merits, but the rest is hard to say 😰
Cursing.
If you want to curse someone, could you please tell me where it comes from? Why scold? Otherwise, it will all be regarded as jealousy. Jealousy that I clearly have the ability to become a god but chose not to sign a contract, making you and your so-called idols blush.
It made me laugh out loud. With this writing style, it can still be used as a skewer. I feel so confident 🤭
It's indeed a short story. Brother, your writing is very good.
Cpdd
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Sad for spring and sad for autumn, relying on one's own loftiness but one's own lack of standards
It's been many years, do you still remember my ID?