Become the Top Brother, I Can Enter the Live Broadcast Room

I also want to write a book titled: "I watch it for free and can enter the world of short videos and uncle videos"

If you don't practice martial arts well, if you don't enjoy girls, bring ancient times to reality, bring real people to other worlds, already have money, you still need to open a company to make money, and open a rare seafood restaurant, and bring extinct creatures. If it weren't for the pig's feet, the halo would have been caught, there is no goal, it's too chaotic.

In the early stage, it's okay to enter mentally. In the later stage, when you can travel through time, you don't have to watch it. It's a mess. It's understandable that you don't have money to make money in the early stage, but the problem is that if you have money, you still have to risk exposure to do things in reality. Pig's Foot has no goals. Make money today and play football tomorrow. Later, it is estimated that everyone will be extraordinary in reality. Then some passwords of Pig's Foot are compromised, and someone comes to plot to assassinate Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot fights back, relatives are injured, Pig's Foot is angry, and then it repeats. Or just wandering around without any brains, doing some meaningless things, and even if there is danger, don't act like it's just playing house. There are too many places exposed in the real world. There are no restaurants where ultra-rare creatures can be purchased. In the real world, he practices martial arts and teaches martial arts. Extinct species appear next to pig's feet. In the real world, he teaches Olympic football. He frequently buys and sells rare jewelry of unknown origin. He also brings emperors, princes, and many other people from other worlds to the real world. As for pig's feet and this pig's brain, it's not that the protagonist's aura is too high. He has been caught and studied long ago. It's a routine from 20 years ago. . . .

The previous article is good, but why does the protagonist go to another world to sing? You went to learn martial arts. What benefits can singing bring to you? Inexplicable😰😰😰😰😰

I really can't accept someone getting drunk...

Isn't Chongzhen too abrupt? He rushed out of nowhere without any explanation. What if someone else was filming a TV show?

After reading one chapter, the ideas are good, but the writing is lacking, and many of the descriptions are rushed and a bit jumpy. The most important point is, buddy, when you picked up the phone, you were thinking about not handing it to jc at ten o'clock in the evening. It means that you were thinking of handing it to jc the next day. How could you then use other people's virtual coins with peace of mind? This is a serious illness, buddy, it's life-threatening, can you still brush hard?

In the early stage, it's okay to enter mentally. In the later stage, when you can travel through time, you don't have to watch it. It's a mess. It's understandable that you don't have money to make money in the early stage, but the problem is that if you have money, you still have to risk exposure to do things in reality. Pig's Foot has no goals. Make money today and play football tomorrow. Later, it is estimated that everyone will be extraordinary in reality. Then some passwords of Pig's Foot are compromised, and someone comes to plot to assassinate Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot fights back, relatives are injured, Pig's Foot is angry, and then it repeats. Or just wandering around without any brains, doing some meaningless things, and even if there is danger, don't act like it's just playing house. There are too many places exposed in the real world. There are no restaurants where ultra-rare creatures can be purchased. In the real world, he practices martial arts and teaches martial arts. Extinct species appear next to pig's feet. In the real world, he teaches Olympic football. He frequently buys and sells rare jewelry of unknown origins. He also brings emperors, princes, and many other people from other worlds to the real world. As for pig's feet and this pig's brain, it's not that the protagonist's halo is too high. He has been arrested and studied long ago. The routine of 20 years ago.

This book is really good. With a little improvement, platinum gold is no longer a dream.

It's so nonsensical, I'll write whatever comes to my mind

Very good idea. Written poorly. Mixed. You can read the first few chapters, but I don't recommend the following chapters. (It's good to leave an impression, but it's really not good to write.)

Maybe it's because I don't read enough! After reading two chapters, my mind is confused.

Do you enter the live broadcast room in person or in spirit? ? ?

Actually this is a food novel😅

The plot is a mess. An old trope written badly decades ago. Extremely low

It's true that there are multiple people in the studio writing books alternately.

I feel like I'm trying to write something cool, but it feels too complicated. What is the meaning of golden finger? Write something from the sidelines to highlight the influence of the protagonist. People who are affected by the golden finger radiation can express their emotions. For example, the protagonist gets martial arts secrets and spreads them out to people to practice. Firstly, he can be considered as a contribution to society. Secondly, the protagonist is so good at learning. Why can't he come to show himself as a saint? Then he can write something about passers-by online bragging about the protagonist. I feel full of the mysterious boss behind the scenes.

Looking at it... It feels a bit boring, right? ?

Does the author really know about sound cards? Just know a noun and use it randomly?

Do you have any suggestions?

Please ask, why can't I use the reading package?

I can't understand! ,, The author is not short of money and just entertains himself

The three gold chapters at the beginning are still okay, but the later history is not okay. If you just enter the history to pick up antique gold and control the data, it will be fine, and the martial arts training and so on are too nonsense. Writing novels should be close to reality. It is a good thing to make progress. If you are floating in the sky, you will not be able to come down. Originally, the subject matter was good, and any experienced author could have produced a masterpiece. However, it would be difficult for the author to achieve results with this kind of writing.

Ordinary people have weak wills and chaotic minds, so they cannot practice 🙂