The Witch's Contract

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} All kinds of frosts compete for freedom, and monsters of different races also have barriers, let alone humans and monsters? Unless they enter the Tao through monsters! At present, the male protagonist's golden finger has not yet been reflected. Simply speaking, as a soul traveler, it may be that the soul is extremely deep... It can be regarded as a plug-in? Anyway, I look forward to how the author decides. This book is more suitable for readers who like fairy tales. It is a good book to read during a book shortage. [Book title]: "Taking Demons as the Way" [Author]: "Flying Duck" [Recommendation Index]: ★★★☆☆ [Tag Highlights]: Fantasy · Demonic Way · Different World · Time Travel [Status of the work]: Serialized · 2w (not on the shelves) [Story background]: Hu Ran accidentally traveled through time, and when he opened his eyes, he saw the concerned gaze of his original father. This status was not considered rich, but he basically had enough food and clothing. He thought he would spend the rest of his life like this. But the first time he went out, he accidentally violated a taboo and was ostracized by everyone. The old father had no choice but to send Hu Ran to a Taoist temple to pray for protection. Little did he know that the taboo evil spirit that everyone was afraid of was always around his son, and it was this "monster" that helped Hu Ran open the door to the world of practice. This was the beginning of Hu Ran's real life. [New book review]: The author is a newbie, but his writing is pretty good. Maybe it's because of the small number of words. He hasn't signed a contract yet. After reading it, I found that the author wanted to express a lot of things. As far as the title of the book is concerned, are humans really humans, and are demons really demons? Some people are more evil than demons, and some demons are kinder than humans. In this book, among the Taoist "immortals" and the butterfly demon master, who is a human and who is a demon? What the Butterfly Demon Lord wants to create is undoubtedly a utopia in troubled times. In the Butterfly Garden, both humans and butterflies really live in harmony. In terms of writing style, it is difficult to tell that the author is a newcomer. He is really skilled in character description and plot advancement, especially when the butterfly demon saves Hu Ran. As for the character, the description of the Butterfly Demon Lord is really amazing. Whether it is the description of the image or the dialogue, the magnificent image of the Butterfly Demon Lord comes to life on the page. In terms of plot, it may be a common problem for newcomers. Some things are not explained clearly, and the explanation of the world view is also briefly explained. Some parts are still a bit confusing to read. But the author also laid a lot of foreshadowing. For example, the identity of the father seems not to be simple. I hope to see the answer later. On the whole, this book is still worth reading, and it can be used to fatten up the book during the book shortage. [One-sentence review]: A more interesting fairy-like seedling that takes the human body but follows the "demon path" [Similar works]: "Gou Cultivates Immortality in the Troubled World of Demons and Martial Arts"

Everyone gathers firewood and the flames rise, towering buildings rise from the ground

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} "With Demons as Companions" Author; Yuer Feipeng Tags; fantasy, time travel, demon path Work status; 27,000 words serialized (not on the shelves) Recommendation index; 4 stars Background; This is a cruel world of immortality where the fittest survive through natural selection. Monsters and ghosts have become taboo words in this world. Once spoken, there will be ominous things coming to claim your life, and those around you will suffer together if you avoid them. The only way is to go to Taoist temples and donate money to seek help from practitioners. However, Taoist priests are greedy and greedy, and most people are greedy for money. Ordinary people often can only survive for a few days even if they offer their wealth. In such a strange world, there is a country that wants to create a utopian society where everyone can practice cultivation and is free of exploitation and oppression. What is the ending of the protagonist? Plot synopsis; the protagonist's original soul was sucked away by monsters, and the protagonist Hu Ran traveled through time. He sat up in shock while he was dying of illness. While getting familiar with this new world with the maid, he also adapted to the new body. However, he accidentally said that monsters had violated a taboo, and suddenly the streets were scattered. After learning about it, the protagonist's father hurriedly took all his property and took the protagonist to seek refuge in a Taoist temple. However, he was only able to find refuge for eight days. Who would have thought that the Taoist priests saw the protagonist's beauty and intended to do evil things to the protagonist. At this time, the protagonist was spotted by a monster and took the path of monsters. From now on, his future is unknown. Brief review; These chapters written by the author describe a dark world where monsters and Taoists regard human life as nothing but trivial matter. However, the protagonist takes the path of monsters and enters a utopian society founded by idealists. At present, only a small part of the world view has been described, and there are more plots and backgrounds that have not yet been developed. In the early stage, the protagonist is weak and helpless and can only drift with the crowd, which is very depressing. I only hope that the author can quickly make the protagonist have enough self-protection ability and open up a larger world view. Friends who like the Law of the Dark Forest can collect it and watch it.

When I first opened the Living Water City chapter, I remember that the split body once satirized the male protagonist and said: From the beginning to the end, the person who has been in contact with the male protagonist is the split body, and the main body is unattainable. I hope that this clone will no longer be a magic incarnation, but an independent person. The story of Hu Ran and his Jiao Mingyang is over

Hu Ran's time travel is too weak. There is no system, no grandpa, and no golden finger. It is still a world where fairies walk around, and there is no one in this time travel. Author, you are too difficult for this little brother Hu Ran.

This fantasy novel has a fast pace and clear plot settings. The protagonist Hu Ran's adventures in traveling through a different world are full of character in the extremely delicate atmosphere setting techniques. It seems leisurely, but in fact it is intelligent. In addition, the novel incorporates popular elements such as fantasy and time travel, and the narrative is eloquent without being frivolous, which not only adds wonderful interest to the novel, but also makes the plot high-end and atmospheric.

The author's writing style is mature. As the plot unfolds, the characters are vivid and full, and the plot has ups and downs.

From chapter 50 onwards, there is a big turning point, which is quite interesting.

The description of the characters at the beginning is very real and delicate, and vividly reflects the selfishness, greed, and weakness of human beings. As for the owner of the small restaurant, the male protagonist's father's worry and love for his son, as well as the helplessness forced by life, make people feel particularly warm. Very close to real life. After the male protagonist gets into trouble, the comparison between others and his father also provides a good foreshadowing for the following story. Not everyone is necessarily human. The demons that appear in it are also very interesting. I am used to seeing big animals cultivating into demons. Now it is refreshing to see moths and butterflies. It's just fun. People have high and low status, and so do animals. Butterflies do not keep company with moths. I feel that the author's concept is particularly novel and interesting. I have never seen such a weak insect transform into a goblin. Their path of cultivation must be many, many times more difficult than that of animals, and the advancement of spells is probably much more difficult than that of animals. However, the blind butterfly demon master must be a kind-hearted demon with a bottom line. The story is very good. It is told in a leisurely manner. I look forward to the follow-up.

"With the Demon as My Companion" is Yu Er Fei Ya's new work. It is a traditional fantasy novel in the context of Xianxia. The opening directly points out that the protagonist is a soul traveler. Then gradually open up a colorful world. The structure of this article is complete, the events are strange, the text is concise, the rhythm is bright, and the characters are vivid. It can be called a rare starting point for the seedlings of fairy grass. It deserves continued attention!

The female characters accompanied by monsters are vivid and vivid, and the psychological growth of the protagonist is laid out layer by layer. It is one of the more excellent psychological description novels in recent times. It is worth looking forward to. The author keeps a steady pace, come on!

Suddenly I realized that the demon world is much better than the human world. If I were the protagonist, I would just lie down on the ground. Come on, little demons and big demon sisters, as long as you don't hurt me, you can do whatever you want. There is really no way to stay in the human world. I can only save enough money to live in a Taoist temple for ten days, not to mention that there is a more terrifying one in the Taoist temple, hahaha.

​​A refreshing fantasy masterpiece, its charm lies in the interweaving of multiple highlights. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to construct a magnificent and fantasy world of immortality. The settings such as Butterfly Garden and Divine Butterfly Realm are full of imagination. The game between monsters and monks is both thrilling and strategic, making people immersed in it. The character creation is particularly brilliant: the protagonist Hu Ran's growth line is clear and real, progressing step by step from cautious exploration to bold breakthrough; Die Mengqing's mysterious power, humor and free and easy, and Yu Xiaoyu's humorous loyalty are all vivid on the page. Female characters such as Zhou Xiaoyun and Die Yili break the traditional framework, coexist with strength and personality, and show the charm of independence and wisdom. The battle scenes are one of a kind, with spells clashing like thunder and lightning, close combat fighting like wind and rain, and the visuals are extremely strong. It's like a battle between swallowing fish, from underwater sneaking to surprise counterattack, the rhythm is as tight as the storyboards of a movie, which takes your breath away. In addition, the author cleverly laid foreshadowing, Hu Ran's vague memory and Qiao Mingyang's painful past, creating suspense for the subsequent plot. The contribution value list, contract mechanism and other settings show a rigorous worldview logic, and the details are genuine. The writing style combines classical elegance with modern fluency. It contains both the passion of "exploding wind blades and stirring of demon power" and the poetic flavor of "ripples on the lake surface and falling leaves", making it a hearty read. The overall rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, with both life-and-death adventures and humorous interactions between characters, making it addictive! Disadvantages: Updates are really too slow...

A fantasy novel with an imaginary theme, the story begins with the soul of a social animal passing through the son of a hotel owner, trying to survive in a taboo environment. Although this article is not very imaginative and the narrative structure is a bit cramped, the writing style is delicate, the characters are realistic and unique, and the puzzle settings are innovative. After reading all 6 chapters in one go, it can be said that you are immersed in the scene and cannot stop, and the readability is very strong. The author should not be impatient and seek for speed. If the current quality is maintained, it can be a rare and excellent article.

The background of the big world is set quite well. From the opening chapter where the demons talk about their lust, to the step-by-step revelation of the differences between people, and then to the revelation of Taoist temples one by one, after reading these chapters, what makes people feel the most is the coldness and ruthlessness of this world. Therefore, when I saw that I was selected by the demon and was finally taken to the demon's place, I felt like a blessing in disguise. If I stayed in the human world, I was afraid that I would not die in the end.

The opening chapter talks about the change of demons, which makes people think of the world of the great sage, where monsters are rampant, monks are indifferent, and ordinary people are slaughtered by monsters. Obviously this world is also like this. Even the so-called Taoist temples that can provide protection are ultimately measured by the common things of the world. In such a world, monsters have not been able to completely occupy the world, and they are already merciful. It seems a bit pessimistic!

I prefer Die Yili, but I don't like Mermaid.

After reading the recent story, I have a suggestion: if you want the book to be more popular, even if the protagonist does not have Wushuang, he should have some characteristics of his own. Those who practice quickly or have high emotional intelligence or have adventures or have noble people. But for now, the protagonist seems to be just an ordinary person with a bit of luck. He calls a little guy Du Ge who persecutes the people he likes. In the latest chapter, Yisu's clone was indirectly participated in sending him away because his fragility broke his defense again. Even though the protagonist died once, he is still so ordinary, without courage or determination. This kind of person is very redundant in novels.

Shennong has tested the poison, and the two businesses are online, not to reduce intelligence.

After raising it for a month, that's it 😆😆

Why is there no space when traveling through time? Why are monsters and monsters taboo? What did the father's letter say? This book starts with a mystery that makes you want to put it down. Come on!

From the "Divine Butterfly Realm" to the "Boundary Land", from butterfly demons, tree demons to water beasts, the introduction of concepts such as "Condensation Scroll" and "Monster Lock Mark" in Chapter 180 not only conforms to the logic of the cultivation system, but also gives the story a unique fantasy texture. The "contract relationship" and "bloodline talent" settings of the butterfly demon not only enrich the racial characteristics, but also deepen the character interaction (such as the collaboration between Die Mengqing and Hu Ran). In addition, the description of the scene is very graphic, such as the bloody lake water and rotting bones of "Sunset Lake", creating a depressing and mysterious atmosphere, making people feel as if they are actually there.

I feel that there are some problems with the portrayal of Jiao Mingyang at the moment. It's okay for Jiao to appear as a charming princess in the game world. The writing has always been great, especially when Jiao said you won't: You won't think that I am having sex with you in my real body. Elevating the conflict between her and the protagonist to a higher level, this character should be a pure villain to the story. If she was forced to lower her status and integrate, she shouldn't have killed the male protagonist once before. Jiao already has a fight-or-die stance towards the male protagonist. What to write next😥

It still feels a little rushed. The setting of the world view has not been explained clearly. Various events have come, and the events have brought about new settings. The audience is confused, and the previous settings have not been explained clearly. It is better to take it slow. It is not a world view of cultivating immortals that is already familiar. It is better to lay some groundwork at the beginning. At the beginning, the world has been moved to several places.

In fact, I have always been curious about where the monks in this world have gone. Currently, there are only a few Taoist temples that can compete with the demons. As a result, the Taoist temples are even darker than the demons. The most important thing is that as a monk, you have to be measured by such common things as banknotes. Is this still a monk? For such a monk, the demon didn't even think about controlling the city.

The structure of the novel and the characters are pretty good. It has the author's own flavor in it. It would be better if it were updated more often.