After the Separation, My Wardrobe Became Modern

Overall it's okay, but the ending doesn't feel like an ending.

The first half of the introduction looks like The Chronicles of Narnia, but the second half is just a cliché novel. Anyone who has followed the author's writing can tell me how the author's writing is and the plot is.

Beautiful. More to come! Good looking. More to come! !

This introduction is very poisonous. The wardrobe at home is modern and will be taken away in minutes

The heroine and her brother didn't make any money themselves, so they led the clan to "get rich". It was inexplicable...

Look at the plot of household registration. It is illogical. Two children wholesale food and materials used by several stores every day. How do they consume them? No one suspects them. How can it be explained?

As a rural child from ancient times, he travels back and forth between modern times and ancient times, and he still adapts well and has whatever he wants. Let me tell you how dare you write. Just take a look regardless of logic.

Hahahahahahaha

Why does the heroine keep calling herself "I"? It really feels rustic 😥 And I pulled it back a bit until recently, and she still talks like this. She just feels like a naive little country girl.

It looks good, come on! There are too few updates

It's actually a very new article, so I'll make the first post

Please keep writing, it's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The hang-up is too big, and I don't have much expectation to be able to travel all the time.

Are you okay? You feel uncomfortable after the test?

Feel good-looking👍🌹