Can I Enter the Shushan Game?

I feel like I could discuss it more with the editor or other big-name authors. Some details are too taken for granted, and the system feels too controllable. You get whatever you want, and there is no foreshadowing or ups and downs. For example, if one Lingquan tank is not enough, just add another one, and the quality is gone! If you want punishment, bring the Bad Luck Talisman immediately; if you are given a Calming Talisman, gather together to deliver it; the sound of the ginkgo tree is just the wind blowing music, which is a bit ridiculous. You said that the sound of the wind blowing the trees contains mysterious rhythms, which is fine, but needs to be improved. The characterization is also not enough, a bit stereotyped, relatively thin, either a good guy or a bad guy, a bit novice, low IQ, people in the officialdom are not simple, and the big bosses are not stupid. He casually gives 100 million to his son as pocket money, or in cash. Well, you can go to Zhihu to see the related answers about what would happen if 100 million in cash. Looking at it, I feel a bit ignorant, IQ is not online, fast food

I really didn't want to read the book after reading the title, but I didn't expect the content to be really good. It's a bit similar to the old man's return to secular life, and it's a relaxing book. Disadvantages: 1. The title of this book is really discouraging; 2. The author has to publish it in two parts (previously, it was three), so hurry up and get excited about it while it's hot! Now I can't get up or down! I hope I can write better and better!

From the perspective of a bookworm of more than ten years, it is a good book, but updates are too slow!

The writing is very good, I hope it can be kept rigorous. I can embody the world of fairy tales before, but this one is not as rigorous as this one. Come on, don't collapse.

It is rare to read a book in a lifetime, so I spend my free time squatting in a pit. I left three words when I left the handle, and I scratched my head and had no words to fill in. Plow the fields for me quickly! ! !

There are still 2,700 subscriptions left to get a monthly pass. If you don't update, how can I reward you?

Too little, not enough to see!

Many of these double-traveling novels are realistically written like Tuo💩. I don't know how this one will be.

If this plug-in cooperates with the country, it can take off directly. The entire country's land is divided into Qingfeng Temple. The country can donate the money to upgrade the Taoist temple, and the will can also be used by the country to promote the belief of the people across the country. The level of the Taoist temple will gradually increase. After the Taoist temple becomes advanced, the aura will be generated and the people of the whole country will cultivate immortality. In the later stage of cultivation, the world can be easily unified.

The gold finger is opened too big and is about to collapse! After all, this book is set in the country, and there are no extraordinary people in reality! The cultivation system developed by the author requires the faith of mortals, and you cannot practice alone in the mountains. In the middle and late stages, you will either be arrested and sliced ​​into pieces, or the country will imprison you! Miracles are often revealed, and the territory is expanded from time to time. Visitors who have only been here once can't feel it, but tourists who come often don't know it?

There is no light skill in this world, but I am a cultivator, so there is nothing wrong with me being able to fly 😁😁

This thing is now a mine that cannot be touched. It will be stuck as soon as it is encountered. If you cut here and there, you will not be able to read the book. I feel that it is better to write the book as if it traveled back to the time when Yuan Shikai was in power during the Republic of China. In this way, no matter how you write, you will not be easily hit by mines.

I read reviews and always say this book is good. But the beginning was too cliche, and I couldn't get over it after watching it several times. Can someone please tell me where to start to get better?

Everyone, please take a look, thank you🙏🙏!

Is there a female protagonist? This kind of book must not have a female protagonist

It's too vulgar, not like a Taoist temple, more like the kind of pretentious fortune-telling articles that used to be done in the city.

I haven't read it yet. Is the sword-driving skill here also about flying on a sword like a skateboard? If so, I won't watch it

How can we say something true about Buddhism and Taoism's contribution to the anti-Japanese war and it has been deleted?

The various conflicts and pretentiousness at the beginning made me feel like I was dreaming back to ten years ago.

I remember that the reviews for the opening game were very bad. I had read a few chapters and it was really not that good.

The author likes to bring in private things too much. He wants to evaluate the antagonism between men and women. He also wants to evaluate English as a major subject. There are many conflicting events that he also wants to evaluate. Why write this book if he likes to evaluate so much? It feels like this book was written just to evaluate popular events, so why bother? It has not only ruined the popularity of the book, but also made your fans quarrel endlessly, and it is always corrected. Author, are you really happy after writing this book?

From the perspective of an old bookworm, this book is okay. The plot at the beginning is a bit cliche, but I'm used to it, so I can read it later.

The comment section of this novel is really interesting, a bunch of haters

The author can't even distinguish the most basic Buddhism and Taoism. When he opens his mouth, he calls donors. Buddhists call believers donors, and Taoists call believers laymen and believers! Really Buddha! ! !

For the three golden cards, I don't need to look at anything else. To put it in terms of "generalizing from a partial perspective," if any magic medicine is obtained later, there will be an old man who is very awesome, and then there will be some granddaughter, etc., Who will be introduced to the protagonist immediately. Does this granddaughter have any suitors? The branch plot unfolds, and then what skills does the protagonist obtain? The love rival comes to attack the protagonist again, and the hero saves the beauty and brings her home. Hit the young ones and get the old ones. Then organize some cattle and horse auctions to get to know some cattle, horses and enemies. Of course, it doesn't have to be the old man. Anyway, as long as the protagonist acquires some abilities in the game, there will be corresponding things that appear in front of the protagonist to set off the protagonist's abilities. This is called showmanship, and they don't even have to act, just put it on their faces. These are the three golden chapters. The protagonist has just obtained a bag of magic rice in the first chapter. Before the second chapter was finished, a bunch of people just happened to eat too much greasy food and ran to the protagonist to eat something light. And the protagonist is still very biased

It was really hard to read this book. The subject matter is so creative and it's so rare that I couldn't put it down without reading it. After reading it, I felt that the author's writing style really needs to be improved.

I can't hold on for three chapters, how can I be so shitty?

The author is so awesome!

The writing style and plot logic are so poor that it is hard to imagine that the author makes a living by writing online articles. . . .

I don't understand how a high-quality novel can have such obvious errors, and this is not an isolated case. There are a lot of inexplicable errors in the novel, and there are even more ridiculous typos. Write it as "You must know that the obstacle on the front line has been going on for a long time, and it has always been difficult to solve." Wouldn't it work? Isn't this better than the original text, "You must know that the first line of obstacles has been difficult to solve for a long, long time." Is it comfortable to watch? And the number of words is a bit more, which is just suitable for a water ghost like the author. I don't even understand the word water, I'm really convinced. 🤮