Divine Conspiracy: Immortality Starts with Possessing the Enchantment Panel

The author should change the first chapter and change the protagonist to an ordinary person, so as not to cause so much trouble and being targeted in the first chapter. It is best for the protagonist to be an ordinary person, so it will be better step by step.

The plot of the first chapter was not popular. There was no need to express the protagonist's thoughts. The first day to the second day went too fast. The exit from the village was too hasty. The adventure was too much for the protagonist's luck. Maybe it can be used as a cereal later, but who doesn't want to eat vegetables?

With senior sister covering him, Qi Feng walked sideways Meng Chuxue

The random use of commas and periods gives me a headache. I don't believe I can read such a long sentence in one sitting.

When you are ignorant, you laugh at Poujie, When you grow up, you understand Poujie, When you mature, you become Poujie!

It's very messy, a bit restrictive, and the style of painting doesn't quite match, so it's a messy read.

I thought it was the same relaxed spiritual cultivation style as the title and introduction of the book. . . The result is a type of person who is struggling to cultivate immortality before the end of the world. . . .

There was no background introduction at first, and then... I couldn't understand 😅

666 Although I haven't watched it yet. Click 666 first

Well written, good luck to the author😁

If you see all the characters are in traditional Chinese, leave.