Psychic: Twins

After roughly reading it, I have a few suggestions: 1. The plot of the protagonist is introduced too slowly, with relatively few ups and downs. If you are a novice, it is recommended to learn from the introduction of Dragon Clan Nono. Readers need a sense of freshness and a sense of tension in the plot 2. The introduction of the psychic worldview is slow: it is recommended to refer to the introduction of Mystery, How to Make You Full of Holy Light, etc. Of course, the method can be gradually developed, but obviously the author's writing power is not enough, and it is really not possible to directly write a leaflet to describe it from a God's perspective. Be more specific 3. The protagonist's personal charm is not obvious: A good protagonist can be a special character who has done interesting things, or an ordinary person who has done great things. This book is obviously the former. Suppressing the protagonist in a blind way may be counterproductive For now, let's talk about these points for reference only Come on, come on, come on! 🤭🤭🤭

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