I Asked You to Go to Youth Training to Get Rid of Internet Addiction. How Did You Win the Championship?

Sentence breaks, too many, all, commas. Just, can't you be more coherent?

Not bad👍👍👍

It's well written, but the pace is a bit slow.

After taking the math exam, I'm going to college. . .

Laughing like crazy. It's okay to quit the Internet

Before I take the comprehensive science exam, I will post another chapter.

It's very well written, keep it up. I feel like this is a new book with great potential. The protagonist's character is quite likable. The female analyst, if she is not the heroine, she should not be given so many scenes. . . If it's a female protagonist, don't make her so annoying. . . Her current behavior is really uncomfortable.

🔥Use the seven wolves to throw out five consecutive whips Ancestor's summary: The protagonist travels to the S6 season, that is, 2016. Various domestic teams have sluggish results in international competitions and are in urgent need of a hero and a team to stand up. With the cooperation of his family, the protagonist was sent to the youth training team, which is the famous Snake. At this time, the system was activated. The novel is different from other league novels. The main focus is on the youth training camp. The author depicts the difficulty of standing out and the many young people at the bottom who love games and struggle. The features of the system are not outstanding. It only provides rewards for completing tasks. It is more about providing a direction and a goal for the protagonist to work hard on the right path. 1️⃣Recommendation: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 2️⃣Work information: Book title: Let you go to youth training to quit Internet addiction, how did you win the championship Author: Qingwen01 Word count: 3W (serial) Tag: Game LOL System Abuse of Food Youth Training Camp 3️⃣Tweet: Point 1: The protagonist is an Internet-addicted teenager in the eyes of his family, which is also how most people in that era viewed them. The protagonist's family is quite cheerful, and cheerfully sent the protagonist to the youth training team, hoping that he would quit before the difficulties. Highlight 2: With the support of the system, you can obtain attribute points by completing system release tasks, which can be used to enhance hand speed, reaction ability, etc. Point 3: It depicts the precious friendship in the youth training camp. The protagonist has made like-minded companions in the youth training camp. They work hard to win the championship together, which is enviable. Highlight 4: The protagonist has a distinct personality, vivid on the page. In the game, he acts as a leader and pioneer, starts the group alone, and bears the consequences of failure. Outside the game, he pays attention to his teammates and comforts them when they lose the game. {"TopicId":"858522342837256192","TopicName":"Ancestor of Five Poisons"} {"To picId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} 🔥🔥👍👍Click on the avatar and ⭐️follow the book list.

Very well written, looking forward to publishing it

I misunderstood the author's version. S6's mid-lane core is not played by humans. VG's mid-lane core was demoted by itself. When I went to the World Championship to play the late-stage core in LPL, I was severely beaten.

Not bad, just a little lacking.

The comprehensive science exam is over, why hasn't it been updated yet?

The ice girl can take you away. You were already dead when w came up. I can pick up the gold with wqr. Can this bring the enchantress w back?

This book can be a profound explanation. Before reading the book, read the author first. I cut more than one book. I don't know who voted for it a lot. The new book has 101 monthly votes. Anyway, read the author first.

Just finished the Chinese language test, please update quickly

Carefully selected. . . Quite speechless

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial"} [Recommendation] Overtime dog Yan Chaoge traveled to a parallel world in 2016 and became a quasi-high school senior. Because he was addicted to League of Legends, he was sent to a youth training camp by his parents to experience life. He accepted militarized management and shattered his e-sports dream. As a rookie, Yan Chaoge was not welcomed by the members of the snake team. After getting the necessary system for time travellers, he was determined to break out of the siege and join the team. In this place closest to dreams, can Yan Chaoge, who has loved playing games in both lives, make his dreams come true? E-sports, food is the original sin. What kind of help can the system of telling the truth provide to Yan Chaoge, so that an 18-year-old boy with only reaction speed and a little more understanding of the game than others can become a professional player and realize his dream of winning the championship? The author said: The protagonist is good, so Yan Chaoge became the champion. Dream chasers chase dream souls, and dream chasers are masters of human beings. Everyone who works hard for their dreams deserves respect. The fighting scenes in the game are beautiful and exciting, and the protagonist is constantly making cool moves. The characters written by the author have their own characteristics and shining points. E-sports requires a group of people to be good, and spring is only when thousands of flowers bloom. I hope to see the exciting and unpredictable tactics of the players during the game, the sincere cooperation of the team and the unremitting efforts of the players. [Book title]: Let you go to youth training to quit Internet addiction, how did you win the championship [Author]: Qingwen01 [Book type]: E-sports article [Tags]: games, careers, e-sports, dreams [Recommendation index]: 7