
Douluo's Magical Weapon Xuanqi
斗罗之神兵玄奇
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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If all these bells and whistles are useful, I will directly practice the ultimate secret of the Six Paths of War - the Vajra Way, and use my tyrannical body to directly harden the hundred thousand year old soul beast 😏 and destroy ghosts and gods as a true man.
The subject matter is not bad, but the author's grasp of it is not good. There are a lot of bugs in the first twenty or thirty chapters. Can't you copy open-book exam questions? The shining example of Divine Weapons and Mysteries can be used as a reference, but you must write unreasonably. At level 20, can you use the Evil Emperor's unique skills to push it forward? You also consider that you can't use it well and then reduce its power, disturbing the wind and clouds one after another and turning into picking at ropes and breaking up small courtyards? In the early stage, there were so many first-level martial arts that you didn't have to go to the top in one step. The result was a ridiculous beggar's version, which directly lowered the evil emperor's strength. For the first few dozen levels, it is enough to use a Heart Sword God level. Once the Soul Emperor and Soul Saint have reached the Three Swords and Three Swords level, use the Three Swords and Three Swords skills, and then use the Sword Skills after being titled. After becoming a god, he has the Martial Arts of Gods and Demons, the Seven Limits, the Soul-Eating Immortal Killing Stick, and the Divine Ax Jue. Even if he feels that the power is too great to match the Douluo trash god, he can continue to use his sword skills. The beggar's version is the most inconsistent. If the skill is not enough, it cannot be activated. Lowering the power is not the skill. If Juekong's sword can't strike a hundred-meter sword, can it still be called "Jue Kong"?
Leveling up, licking three, I understand everything
The first bullet of the magic weapon Shen Nong Ruler, I would like to call it the most functional magic weapon! Xingxu Jie, a magic weapon that controls time, has both functionality and offensiveness. Nine Heavens Thunder Sword, a super powerful magic weapon that can control the Nine Heavens Divine Thunder.
To tell a joke, the protagonist who knows three swords, three swords and three magical skills is tied with Tang San in the early stage.
The most disgusting thing about Douluo fans is leveling up. This book undoubtedly hits this poisonous point. He is born with full soul power and is at level 20 at the age of eight. Two soul beasts help him practice, saying that he is not good enough and has been practicing. After all, Tang San still has to earn living expenses by blacksmithing and so on. The protagonist has no pressure at all. He goes to Shrek at the age of twelve and is at the same level as Tang San, at level 29. A bunch of magical skills. I can already see the follow-up, and I must say that I have jumped up to level 15, and then I will fight to the death or life. The question is, you can still win without downgrading. Isn't it nice to be invincible at the same level? You have to downgrade and then jump to the next level? Tired and exhausted, what are you doing?
This protagonist is just like a loser like Feng Xiaotian. He practices self-created soul skills before the age of twenty, which is the most suitable age for cultivation, and becomes a time traveler. His IQ is lower than the average even for Douluo natives.
The protagonist is Ning Fengzhi's disciple, Ning Rongrong's fiancé, and then Ning Rongrong and Flanders argue, tit for tat, the protagonist looks on, Ning Rongrong is slapped by Flanders, the protagonist is still watching The protagonist has to pay 290 if he eats some Shrek's porridge. 0 Gold coins, which is 29 times the normal tuition. What is this concept? No normal person can afford 100 gold coins. The protagonist has a family of more than a dozen soul masters and a food family with 30 soul masters. The monthly income is only 150 gold coins. What is the protagonist thinking Pure Lick Shrek
If you don't want to adapt the plot yet, if you really escaped, why would you still travel through time?
To be honest, I personally feel that the Shen Nong Ruler is really underestimated among the Shen Weapon. An auxiliary type is used to face the combat type.
The most disgusting thing about Douluo fans is leveling up, and it's mindless! After being 8 years old and reaching level 20, I only reached level 29 in four years. Where is my brain? If you think he will rise faster than you, why should you set it up so quickly? Even if you write that you are 8 years old, 17, 18 or so in the first four years and you are 29 in the next four years, it won't be so disgusting!
Is this author Tang Xiaosan or Shrek's licking dog? I read part of it and found some clues, so I came to ask. I'm afraid if I was poisoned
Things to know before reading The protagonist is reduced to a dog, knowing nothing, kneeling down to lick the little Yakuza.
Author bacteria author bacteria! Look here, look here. The main character currently has multiple plug-in soul powers but his level is not high, so there is suspicion of over-leveling. So how about we do this? It has been changed that although the living soul beast soul ring can double the cultivation, the soul beast soul ring can also absorb the protagonist's soul power to increase the number of years and thereby increase the upper limit of output. In this case, the protagonist's innate soul power speed is 10, the skill bonus is 5, the two soul rings are accelerated by 10, the two soul rings are upgraded to -12 years, and the final cultivation speed is 13. It is much more reasonable if the level is not high.
This is a rare book that disgusts me. It is a book with the level of gallbladder. It's a big joke. The whole text says that the protagonist practiced hard at the age of twelve, and also used time to accelerate training for an additional five or six years. The result was still level 29. He used the sentence "Practice Sword Theory" to reduce the level, but there was no result, and then he licked it hard.
Don't look at it. The protagonist's early stage conditions are definitely much better than Tang San's. This is nothing. You run out of soul power and faint at every turn. You are really practicing. The content is well written, and the topic selection is good, but your description of this magical skill is so ridiculous, and you are still stunned by Zhao Wuji's ten thousand year soul skill. After practicing for so long, it is still Pangu's magical skill. I really can't stand it, ugh.
Innately full of soul power, coupled with a sufficient supply of nutrients, he didn't need to blacksmith or fool around with Xiao Wu like Tang San. The skills are also top-notch, reaching level 13 just after absorbing them. It's equivalent to level seven in two years. I'm a little sorry for the failure🙄
Because Tang San is the best to write, if I modify it according to the original work and add a few words, it will be another novel 😜. It's hard to say whether this kind of writing is like this now, but some of the ones I've seen are copied from this fanfic and then copied from that fanfic, and then add characters written by themselves, and modify the copied characters. Some even just copy the copied characters without modifying them. There are two or three different protagonists' names, and the same person has different names 😁. I thought the author made a typo 👍. When I read it, I always felt like I had seen these plots somewhere before. It was a weird fusion 🤭
The most fw protagonist I have seen recently was eight years old and level 20, and then used time to accelerate 14 and 15 years old to level 29. The divine weapon was able to break through Douluo's defenses. He practiced under the waterfall and had an advantage in both physical strength and skill. However, he still couldn't crush Tang San. The character design of the female supporting child bride is not likable, and the protagonist is a FW, so she relies on her defense.
This book is extremely poisonous. Shennong is dead. My blood pressure rose after reading it.
Oops, why did you forcefully cheat on that heroine? It's inexplicable. I saw that the previous setting was quite new, but it turned out that the child bride and the heroine were practicing Pangu Gong there. Oh, isn't this fucking harming people? She was only nine years old, wouldn't she be dead if someone found out? Oops, ants are crawling all over my body now, and I read in the comment section that they can't crush Tang San with so many hooks, I really do! ! !
When I saw Go Shi Laike, I stopped reading the comments. It seems I was right. What's wrong with Shi Laike? There are several universities with teachers who are better than them, and there are talent requirements to get in, so just go to any university that focuses on training. And Shi Laike has no resources that can compare with those big schools. The collection of books in those schools is not comparable to Shi Laike's research on martial arts. What are the benefits of going to Shi Laike? So when I saw the visitor, I knew what the article was about.
Just include a paragraph in the fan novel where you introduce the unique skills of the magic weapon. Anyway, the second creation is suturing. But there are a lot of unidentified original plots in fan fiction that are very confusing. Some authors may have ideas and want to improve their writing skills. The plot, including the protagonist's family and the child bride, is quite confusing. Leveling down, practicing the secret skills of another world, the results are average, reaching level 20 at the age of eight. Twelve years old + two years of time acceleration to reach level 29. You know that you can get new soul beasts to assist you in practicing by upgrading quickly, but you still don't know that you need to practice your level-up magic skills for combat effectiveness. I am really fascinated by Shrek's teaching skills. Shrek's teaching is just like that, running, and a big spirit battle field. I had a hunch when I saw this. Then Flanders taught Ning Rongrong his usual lesson. And then slapped Ning Rongrong? ? ? The protagonist was recruited by Ning Fengzhi earlier. At most, his relationship with Ning Rongrong was normal at that time. Then you watch her get slapped. In the original novel, Flanders didn't even beat Ning Rongrong, but you, an awesome fiancé, want to watch his fiancée get beaten, that's so awesome
There is a strong sense of contradiction. The large-scale explanations of the moves of magical weapons and mysterious weapons are very high-level, but there are not many real demonstrations. It echoes the content of the original work, especially the dialogues. This is a book that stitches together two styles that have a strong sense of separation. The author's own content, which acts as a fusion, is sparse and mediocre, and there is no joy in reading it.
In the Douluo framework, generally those with backgrounds follow Tang San, and those with slightly stronger backgrounds must replace Tang San to take the throne of Shura God, because God Shura wants to retire, and he is the strongest who wants to retire. The evil heir of the original angel does Tang San to prevent God Shura from retiring, and it is reasonable for him to be killed. To put it bluntly, he has to be strong to come out and have a strong background. With a stronger background, you can do as you like, Shura God as a demon background or Goldfinger can kill you directly
The skills in this broken novel all have something to do with Pangu
The level of the skill is too high and the wonton spiritual energy cannot be absorbed to cause an innate 0 soul power.
Data processing is not working. And in order to slow down the speed of his cultivation for the child bride (I can't understand this), if my child bride deliberately stops practicing for two consecutive years (basically only relies on martial arts to practice independently), I will understand it in a few days or even a few months, two years
Recommend the book "Douluo: Money Is the Root of Disaster", it's good to read and good for food, I beg the boss to hammer me
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