Game of Thrones: Overlord of the Deep

Well, I would like to suggest that if there is a female protagonist, it is best to have a single female protagonist. Try not to be ambiguous or anything like that. The lottery should be as balanced as possible, without any obvious suppression of the male protagonist. The things you pull out shouldn't be too powerful than dragons. After all, the dragons in Game of Thrones are just dragons. Also write an outline, so that you can at least set a goal for the male protagonist, such as whether to fight for supremacy and become the king or to help the dragon mother, or whether you just want to start a pirate organization, be independent from the world, and explore and adventure around like Luffy! After all, the world of Game of Thrones is still very big, and many places are full of puzzles, such as the continent of Valyria. Of course, you can sit down and write something you want, after all, a work must have something outstanding! But try not to be too rigid. If it is too strong, it will feel boring and readers will not want to read it. If it's too weak, it's even more nonsense. I just want to enjoy reading a novel.

The first thing I thought of when I saw the Deep Sea Overlord was the Kraken. I think it would be good to get an octopus.

I will always come to help with the new Game of Thrones books, but if the writing is bad, it doesn't stop me from criticizing it. After all, the author is an old pigeon.

Dragon Mother

On the same day, before I started reading the book, I started reading the heroine: Evelin. Then I went to look for the cast list and couldn't find who it was for half an hour. I had no choice but to read the book, and then the first chapter came out within a few pages, and then there was still a 🐏? Accepted. .

By the way, when does the author plan to bring out Godzilla? Although it is indeed a bit buggy, it would not be good to hide it all the time.

Wasn't it written about Ocean Overlord? Why is there so much land? Why did I read your novel? Isn't it just for you, the overlord of the ocean?

The length of "Dragon Ma" is already comparable to that of Pig's Foot. Is this a dual-protagonist novel?

Everyone, vote for Evelin, this is the real heroine, Dragon Mother and all, please step aside.

This can also handle water. Can your giant squid avoid atomic breath?

Pirates don't look like pirates, so what are you writing about? Poison point novel

Other Game of Thrones fan comment areas have maps, but no one has posted them here, so I will post two.

What the hell are you writing? You know it's not good to get Long Ma pregnant, but you still have the whole pregnancy plot.

Where has the protagonist's system gone? The protagonist only smoked once when he came to Game of Thrones. It's been two years now, right? Did the author forget about the system?

The male protagonist is really unlikable, too pornographic

Why did Barristan go to the Eastern Continent to seek allegiance from the Dragon Girl when Robert was still alive? Could it be that he was parasitized? —Chapter 31

It turns out that you wrote "Selling the Gods at the Beginning". I couldn't read a single piece of that stuff.

It was originally a cool article and then started writing about politics. If the author is even a civil servant, don't write about it. The first part is okay. If you don't understand management, don't write about it. I really don't want to read it.

After looking at it, I was speechless. If you want to promote Godzilla as the God of Poseidon, you might as well say that you are the God of Poseidon or the son of Poseidon! Godzilla being the god of the sea will lead to the divine right of kings for future generations!

If you didn't have a queen, you wouldn't be able to write, right?

Except for the transformation of the prince into the king, which is a bit too natural and far-fetched, I can accept the rest, and it barely makes sense logically.

You can also read it. There have been more and more Game of Thrones novels in the past few months. The Eagle of the Vale and Knights of Glory next door are both good.

Too watery😰

I gave you the monthly pass. If you don't expend it, I'll give you dozens more.

Alive again?😆

Chao Gai: System, I want to gain glory and wealth. Is there any good way? System: There are three hundred and sixty side doors in the door with the word "wealth", all of which can lead to wealth. Which one do you want? " Chao Gai: No matter what you say, I will listen wholeheartedly. System: How about teaching you the "kneeling" formula? Chao Gai: How do you say it? System: Kowtow three times in one step, six times in a row. Bowing to the emperor, bowing his eyebrows to the powerful. Chao Gai: Then I can't kneel down and beg for food? System: How about I teach you the word "stand"? >Chao Gai: What do you say? System: Straighten your spine, and you would rather break away than bend your body. Chao Gai: Doesn't that mean you can't make money, so you still have to pay for it? , Don't learn! System: You don't learn this, and you don't learn that either. What do you want? Chao Gai: I don't want to kneel down and beg, and I don't want to stand up to give away money. I want to lie down and suck the blood! R>System: Got it... So, On Huangnigang, Liu Tang and Gongsun Sheng came to report the news. Wu Yong came up with wisdom, Ruan helped, Bai Sheng gave the medicine, and Chao Gai didn't have to do anything. He lay down and sucked a wave of blood, earning a hundred thousand yuan. The position of the Lord; In the Juyi Hall, Song Jiang said, "My brother is the master of the village and cannot be moved lightly." Chao Gai did not have to do anything, just lying down and sucking blood, becoming the largest rebel leader in the world. Outside Zengtou City, Chao Gai wanted to try his talents, but in the end, he shot eastward and returned to the west. "Bastard, why is this happening? " Chao Gai complained angrily. System: You broke the contract first, and you clearly agreed that we would all lie down and suck blood together... Chao Gai: Noisy! Give me a different start, this time I will stand and earn the money! ......