Military Variety Show, but You Take People to the Real Battlefield

The subject matter is good and the author's writing style is also good. Even after reading the first few chapters, I was speechless. There is a feeling of conflict for the sake of conflict, whether it is the so-called "practicing medicine without a license" or the National Health Commission coming later. The twist is beautiful, but it doesn't make sense at all. The veterinary team prescribed vitamin C Yinqiao tablets that were expired three years ago, and my cat still had to take them. It is indeed possible to report to the Health Commission, but in fact, the Health Commission often cannot control military hospitals, let alone get in.

I believe in the record, but I don't believe in being dragged into a variety show or a military summer camp on the battlefield.

I asked why there were so many comments. If I scrolled down, they would all be swipes. Besides, this is a noob. I can't stand it with my brain.

If the military comes to a variety show, think about it, except for Lei, it's just a show

When I saw Chapter 28, the Golden Triangle drug dealers were clearly offering rewards for domestic gold medals and A-list celebrities, that really made me laugh to death, you think the country is vegetarian. Anyone who dares to publish this will be destroyed by the country!

First of all, celebrities will not participate in this kind of program. Their bodies are very precious.

I know that your simulated space may be the core of this work. But I still want to make a suggestion. It is best not to have conversations with historical figures or other interactions in subsequent simulations. Just like the first time, the protagonist group is directly used to replace the historical figures for simulation. The current plot cannot be said to be bad. For most people, they may still think it is well written. I guess you must be very proud of this idea too. But I don't know if you understand the minefield of this kind of writing for military works. That is, historical nihilism. Maybe you wrote fanfics before and didn't involve specific historical figures, so I'm not sure. In this type of work, involving archetypes of historical figures, no matter how brilliant and upright you write, it is inevitable that the readers will be deconstructed by the dialogue and plot. And this structure is fundamentally a distortion and a second creation. So at present, there are basically unified standards for this type of works. Characters, stories, and prototypes can be mentioned, but direct dialogue and participation in the plot are not allowed. In short, your first simulation is actually very good. There is no dialogue, only the plot and battles of the protagonist group. This kind of writing is interesting to write, and it is not easy to trigger minefields. Above, some personal suggestions.

Starting from Chapter 150, the upper-level people began to compete for the dominance of the system, which deviated from the topic. They wrote all nonsense. If the author runs out of ideas, it will be a mess and it will be a mess. Let's start a new book.

I have never understood the popularity of real-time live streaming and the problem of viewing traffic. Why can a hot meme be spread instantly? Live broadcast? For example, if you sing a song live, it sounds good, but it can't attract many times the number of people you live broadcast in an instant? Can't you say that your previous live broadcast was mediocre, with only a hundred people watching it, and then suddenly you suddenly attracted traffic because you sang a song or did something very nice or interesting during the live broadcast? Don't you need time to ferment? Don't you need fans to spread the heat to each other? Even if it's a hot search, it doesn't mean that what you did at five o'clock became popular, and it will be on the hot search at five o'clock? You can see the number of real-time viewers, but it doesn't mean that after the protagonist has done this, your live broadcast room will explode immediately? No matter what, people need to spread the word so that more people can see this? Then it's impossible for people all over the world to wait outside the live broadcast room for the protagonist to finish doing this and then immediately enter the live broadcast room to watch? I feel that as long as it is about celebrities, eight out of ten books will have this kind of thing. It is difficult for me to understand that this kind of thing can become popular without anyone promoting it spontaneously and without spending any money to promote it

Later, when I wrote it as a global game, it felt like it was falling apart, so the author cut off the bottom part himself.

I can be considered an old reader of yours. The subject matter this time is good. The small flaws are insignificant and do not affect the viewing. I won't mention it. I just saw the paid chapter and realized that it is not a big shortcoming. It seems that the pig's feet surpass the physical fitness of the King of Soldiers several times. The individual soldier's quality is not a highlight. It has become soy sauce. I almost forgot it. Suddenly thinking about it, it is really embarrassing. I don't know if you are deliberately digging a trap or doing tasks to stand out from the team. If you are a God of War figure who can compare with one to a thousand, the aura disappears and there is one less point of interest. Even if you have laid the groundwork to stand out, some newcomers will always be discouraged in the front.

It's quite magical. It's amazing to see the logic that celebrities and drug dealers will be afraid. The executed congressmen in South America probably have something to say, and overall the background of the protagonist is too weak.

In the third chapter, there was no clam, so I led a few fish there. How many fish could be sold for less than 50 yuan? Or does being a fishmonger not count as a job?

There is no logic. You run a summer camp and are not an instructor?

If you can go to any period, why not report it to the country? Just for stars like you? I don't understand, I don't understand very much. I haven't read this novel yet, so I don't know what your approach to the Anti-Japanese War period was, so I don't quite understand it.

Damn it, it turns out the comments were all posted by the same person.

Is there anyone who will read this comment section if they see the neat scrolling? Don't even control it

The last chapter disappeared just as I was looking at it. It should be a foul play for you, the author, to write about educational issues. Be careful not to write the red line and then it will disappear.

It would be much more reasonable if it were changed. From the resume point of view, it is unreasonable for the variety show to be transferred to the battlefield, so let it be relatively reasonable. This is a virtualized battlefield. Wouldn't it be more reasonable for people in variety shows to think it is a battlefield? As for why we have this technology and don't do anything else. . . Modify the world view and modify the world background. . . Wait, can't you make this reasonable? If it is unreasonable, then make it reasonable. The whole story is a virtual world. In order to test the virtual world, a group of people (with various settings) are allowed to enter, so it is reasonable. This allows them to switch to the battlefield in a variety show. It is very reasonable.

From the beginning, I feel that the country will not put its people in danger. What is the difference between letting drug traffickers come in and kill people and slapping the country in the face?

What he wrote is really mindless. He wrote about a drug dealer who can do anything.

Does the author know that only the anti-narcotics police can fish and enforce the law? A drug dealer who dares to be so crazy is gone long ago

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Chao Gai is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Aguda, since you are willing to die to prove your ambition, then go ahead with peace of mind, your wife, I will support her! Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Haosan, I heard that you have made a fortune selling curry. The girl on her left hand has money on her right hand, and she races gods by the Ganges River. Then double the gold and silver tribute. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the legs cannot be bent straight? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Gai was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell down overwhelmingly, and the pages were opened to reveal a line of large characters: ... "Water Margin of Destiny" occupied precious land for publicity.

The evil green moon is in the sky, and the evil blue stars are rampant. The chaotic power of subspace penetrates, wanting to tear apart the space and come again. The survivors of the medieval Warhammer Endgame and the Blue Star humans jointly deployed a new line of defense to resist the invasion. Yin Qingsong stood on the land of his hometown and looked around. "What are you doing?" Nurgle asked curiously. "I'm making soup." Yin Qingsong pointed at a big pot in front of him and smiled. "Can I have a try? I am very confident in making soup and I am a well-known gourmet." "No, wait a little longer, we still need some heat." "What are you waiting for?" "Waiting for you to get into the pot!" Poof, with a hammer, the brown-green rotten meat fell into the pot, and Nurgle reunited with the brothers Khorne, Tzeentch, and Slaanesh. "You will regret it!" The four demons cursed in unison. "No, I am the master of my home!" Yin Qingsong pounded the pot a few times with the golden hammer of the drum and urn, and used the broad blade of the Wuhu broken door knife to act as a lid to cover the mouth of the pot, and said with a satisfied smile.

Another book is well written, let's take a look at this one

This author's works... Sigh... I don't even know what to say. Even good books can be written by him, but the early stages are always fascinating... Waiting for the next one...

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious to the world...

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