People Were Writing Diaries in Douluo, and Qian Renxue's Mentality Collapsed.

This word count is a bit too much, and some unnecessary words appear repeatedly.

To be honest, it's really disgusting for the protagonist's thoughts to be known to so many people without him knowing it himself, especially a bunch of people

All lives in Douluo Continent are your descendants! I admire you

Didn't you write the main point at all? You started to reveal that Tang San came through time travel without analyzing the reasons. You just said it casually. Later you gave many spoilers and did not spoil the slightly important parts. It always feels like you didn't have an outline before you started writing the novel. It seemed like you just wrote whatever came to mind.

It's so damn disgusting. I've never seen anything so disgusting. Even if the system asks you to write a diary in advance, you can't write like this. In reality, no S13 will write out his feelings and experiences like a novel. This is purely for the sake of disgusting people. If I were Qian Renxue, I would immediately put him in it. Pull him over, use him to the maximum extent, and then tell Qiandaoliu, let Qiandaoliu reveal his secrets and future plots, and then paint a bigger picture. If you don't listen, you will be imprisoned. Is there a system? I will destroy your martial soul, then destroy it to dregs and then seal it. Then there will be several angel trials, and then a few more seals. This kind of person is really disgusting.

Now that I have written this book, I think it is good except for the human-faced beast with the heart. It is interesting, but are the female protagonists stupid? There should be diaries mentioned in the diary, and they are all about the girls. Why did the little cat not join in to post together? But it has just started and I am looking forward to it. It will be more fun to live every day.

The biggest flaw of this book is the protagonist, and the even bigger flaw is the author's writing style.

Come, come, what a great book, very suitable for a pervert like me.

Water, just hard water, right? If you don't have to write, just don't write, okay? Moreover, if you learn to keep a diary and sort out the plot, it will be useless, and there will be a lot of nonsense. If you want to sort out the plot, you can write it all in one go. If you write two sentences, you will talk about other things. Why don't we readers spend money to read the book? Money was brought by the strong wind? Damn it, what did you throw away?

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

As someone who has seen the latest, this work is too watery and I can't stand it. It's basically just chatting and no action at all. It's like seizing the opportunity as promised, but no action at all. I call her "wife, wife" here every day, but I don't know how to do it, like a nymphomaniac. If you write like this, you won't be able to get out of Tiandou City even if you write tens of thousands of articles. This extremely high probability of tail docking would be worse than having Dai Mingan next door fool him.

640,000 Words, only 10 days have passed. Do you dare to believe it? Do you dare to think about it?

Who among the serious people keeps a diary? Do you? 😏😏😏

Reading this novel is a complete waste of money

Qian Daoliu led people to attack Bo Saixi, licked the dog and beat the goddess, author, you have it

Can you stop calling someone your wife every now and then? Very obscene.

I hope that the wife's exclusive diary will be selected on the basis of merit, instead of all cats and dogs being wives. There are still many outstanding Douluo women. Tianshui Academy only has one Shui Bing'er, and at most one Shui Yue'er. They look like twins 😁 Other passers-by, please don't waste too much pen and ink. The setting of Fire Dance is not good-looking, so just give it a try. I think the best wives are those who have the talent to become gods. If I write a stallion book, I will abandon it 🤤 The beautiful young lady who has the talent to become a god will use soul beasts. The best beauties will completely accept it 😤 Don't be so casual and want anyone. Dugu Yan can also accept it. Meng Yiran forget it, his talent is not good. If you want to go up, go to Medusa. Douluo can choose a few top-notch ones and go to other planes. Don't go around in circles like you've never seen a woman before.

There is Yao Lao in the Endless Fire Realm, but Yu Xiaogang is not seen in the God Realm. Gratitudes and grudges are clearly scattered in the clouds, and all five hundred soul masters have been slaughtered. A fire domain is established on the border, leading to an abyss. How can one be a human being? The kindness of dripping water is repaid by springs. Can it be paid back after a few years of care? Muchen has become the master state, when will Yuhao be able to do so? Feel free? Xiao Mei and Xiao Yu share it to their heart's content. Chenxiang's cousin Cheng Huifei never causes trouble and is not afraid of trouble. Not daring to cause trouble is why Tang Cai has soared to the great Qianyuan Qi. For thousands of years, the gods of the Tang Dynasty have protected the great thousand against evil tribes. How many people will die in the ten thousand years plan? Never advertised as a good person, pure and pure Tang Sanshao

Key points for reading this book: have a fun mentality; store half of your brain; be able to accept the OOC character; be able to accept the male protagonist's greasier thoughts

Who are the heroines, besides Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, Gu Yuena, Zhu Zhuqing, Zhu Zhuyun, Shui Bing'er, Huo Wu, Ning Rongrong, Bo Saixi, Bai Chenxiang, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, who else

He never claimed to be a good person, but he was a puppet of alien fire refining his soul. I don't claim to be a good person, but I don't think it's too much to touch a prostitute. I have never claimed to be a good person, and I am not too strong-willed. (Xiao Yu, the Little Medical Fairy) I have never claimed to be a good person, so don't go too far in forcing the queen. I never claimed to be a good person, but I let my brothers follow in their footsteps. I never claim to be a good person, I rely on the old man to pretend to be a good person. I never claimed to be a good person, but I killed seven or eight people without blinking an eye. Having never claimed to be a good person, Yunlan Meiji dispersed the sect Never claimed to be a good person, Binghe tried to destroy the whole family Never claimed to be a good person, none of the brothers became emperor. None claims to be a good person, and no one is his brother. As long as I don't recognize him as a good person, no black spots will come near me. In the early stage, rely on the elderly, in the middle stage, rely on women, and in the later stage, rely on ancestors.

What the hell, diary novels expose some of the dark spots of the protagonist and supporting characters, so that the heroine and supporting characters can recognize the protagonists and supporting characters, and then leave the protagonists and supporting characters. They are not just for you to complain about. Why do you still need to complain? If you don't know how to write, then don't write. . .

The diary stream is not for you to be obscene. Even if you are interested in being obscene, it should not exceed a certain proportion. As a result, you are all concerned about obscenity. I think it is interesting for you to be obscene? The diary flow is the main exposure, sub-inferences (according to the plot), occasional reviews and complaints, erotic adjustments, and some thoughts of the protagonist. This is the right way to write. 90% Of it is erotic, giving people the feeling that the protagonist is really down.

The writing is good, but I am a bit slow in recommending women. It takes more than 100 pictures to recommend one, but it is acceptable. Also remember that you must treat your woman with both heart and soul. Don't be a stud. Otherwise, I recommend more than 100 pictures for one person. I'm sorry for the speed.

It will definitely be exposed if I force him to pull it back.

Are you 16? One chapter disappeared

More than 300 chapters were written in only 10 days. Wouldn't it be necessary to write the finale in the year of the monkey and the month of the horse?

Ah, give me an accurate idea whether to reduce the frequency of updates or plan to eunuch