The Place in the Red Mansion

The plot is quite complicated. The protagonist has been alive for fifteen years and no one around him is good to him. The emperor was branded unsympathetic at the beginning. Concubine Wei used him as a tool and the queen assassinated him. The brothers have been secretly hostile since they were young. What I don't understand is that my grandpa has never taken you to the Zhenguo Palace for fifteen years? The protagonist who was born in such an environment has such a dark and gloomy psychology. He has no love from his parents and elders, and no trust from his servants and maids. This is the beginning of leaving for the fiefdom. Why stay in the capital? He is not even as good as Zhongshun County King.

Ruthless and unjust, nine years of compulsory education were in vain

Judging from the description in the book, the protagonist's plug-in should be to summon explosive troops, and his strength can already overturn the table, but the protagonist is reluctant to do so. However, the protagonist is ambitious and wants to rise to the top. It is understandable that he has never experienced the murder of his biological mother. His mother's family was wiped out, and the protagonist actually added insult to injury. After seeing it, he is a first-class account. There is no red building, no plug-in, and he is just a coward with no good character pretending to win the heir.

What the hell? All those who lost to the protagonist had him change their names and lose? Even the aunt and queen has to change her surname? And the former Crown Princess also has the surname Lose? So petty! ! ! ! How did the protagonist's biological mother die? How did my maternal grandfather die? Never thought about revenge? What a good dog raised by a cow family

I woke up in the morning, opened my eyes, farted, had breakfast, and turned on my computer to write a Red Mansion fanfic. The protagonist wakes up in the morning amidst the miscellaneous adjectives and modifiers, opens his eyes amidst all kinds of exaggerated inner struggles, farts amidst the comedy and interaction, and eats a dangerous breakfast amidst intrigues and pretense. Looking back, I saw that it was already more than ten chapters into this nonsense. I hiccupped, thinking that this hiccup would take at least dozens of chapters.

It's a pure imitation of Tomato's Red Mansion AFK system, but the imitation is not very good.

At the beginning, it was too much like a running account, and there were many uncomfortable things. Aren't you and the eldest and second son brothers? You also see the eldest prince and the second prince. Just the eldest brother and the second brother are enough. The protagonists are equals and not subordinates or foreign ministers. Also, why don't you give a title to the king later? It's not the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. If you don't call him King of Chu or King of Qi according to his title, you have to be King Ning or King Yun. You are the king of the county + your real name. How should officials call the prince who has been named a king? Isn't it disrespectful to call him by his first name? There are "Rong" and "Beijing" in the Red Mansion. There are many such small places, and they add up to a very unsightly look.

It's so rubbish. The protagonist's IQ is as high as a retard, and many of the settings are unreasonable at all. The prince started studying next to him when he was more than three years old. It was not until he took the teaching test at the age of seven that he discovered that he had a photographic memory. Is this reasonable? How could there be no martial arts in the prince's training from childhood to adulthood? Do you only study and have no contact with martial arts at all? It was not until the prince came of age and entered the outer court that the emperor discovered that his son was born with supernatural powers. Every time the banknote given to the eunuch who came to deliver the message was ten thousand taels. Isn't this price too high? It's not a ghost coin. The setting is quite interesting, but there are still so many unreasonable things that I really can't stand watching.

Being scolded like this means there is no eunuch, and the author's psychology is quite strong 😁

Brothers, don't look at it, it's poisonous

What is your protagonist writing about? Slow to react, overly ambitious, low in IQ, unable to take things up and put them down. What is this...

The writing is not good, the plot is not good, the author should stop writing and go back to selling stinky tofu.

Nowadays, all books have recommendation codes. Is there anyone at Qidian?

What a disgusting book. What kind of pervert could someone write a protagonist like this?

Not only is the storyline inexplicable and disorganized, but it's also extremely violent! Not a book to be read

I've read a few chapters and the plot is very similar to a book on Tomato. The finished book is called Red Mansion: I relied on the AFK system to create a dynasty.

A prince will give ten thousand taels to anyone he meets 😁

Listen to me, stop writing, and find a class.

To be honest, your fan fiction is not a good one. It seems so depressing that you don't even know what you are reading? 🙂 After becoming the emperor, I feel that it is not as good-looking as before.

This really makes no sense at all! It's just hard-written!

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

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